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Entry to 's original character contest. I'm grateful for it because it forced me to actually come up with a story for my characters XD.The character design is not exactly stable at the moment, but here are the basics:
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The story essential revolved around the girl... I haven't come up with suitable names yet XD
It begins in modern day, I'll probably stick with China. An ancient tomb is found but the corpse (this girl) is preserved perfectly. She is delivered over to scientists who are interested in discovering the secret behind this body. Taken out of the coffin, she wakes up and escapes into the world outside the lab (with help of course). The problem is she has no memory of her life before "death". Somehow she is able to adapt quickly to modern society but gains memory of an alternate identity (i.e. wrong memory, not her real one). She decides to become a police officer, and things develop from there (e.g. love (the guy) (actually, not initially), friendship...)
Are we supposed to give the whole story or just character backgrounds?
Age: apparently 24
And what is the secret? It's sci-fi. She comes from elsewhere in the galaxy which developed long before earth. There are fine-tuned machinary inside people from there (almost like engineered to perfection). Because of the machines, she cannot die normally, usually just hiberates. But she is still possesses human emotions and conditions.
So she fell down to earth 2000 (?) years ago. At that time, her memory was reset. She was taken in by some person and recruited into labor and later prostitution. She escapes and becomes involved with rebels against the emperor. This is where the guy in the picture (2000 years ago) comes in. Because of the machines inside her, she learned fast, and volunteered to go undercover into the palace. More rising action and she thinks she's in love with the general. The leader of the rebel also cares for her. She eventually gets killed at the hands of the general....
Then it's modern day... and the point is that history is not repeated though the same characters are present (for the most part).
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So you see it's not very clear yet... maybe I'll come fix it up later XD
Haven't done traditional drawing in a while XD
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Comments: 71
snowp In reply to ??? [2008-05-04 20:10:10 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! A followup contest to this one is to make the 1st chapter of the comic, I think I'm going to do that, but I really don't know if I develop the story as much as I'd like to and actually draw it XD
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FistsofFire17 In reply to snowp [2008-05-05 01:03:35 +0000 UTC]
I'm sure you can pull it off...just listen to Tifa's Theme(piano version of course) all the time and watch chick-flicks, and then you'll be ready to write the plot of this story! Oh wait, I gotta better idea, watch Angel Eyes starring Jennifer Lopez--JLo is a lady cop who is taking care of some guy who has amnesia--similar story.
Mahalo! ^__^
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snowp In reply to FistsofFire17 [2008-05-07 22:11:17 +0000 UTC]
Haha, you know what, I actually do listen to Tifa's theme a lot! I even burned it on CD XD
I'm sorry it sounds like a chick-flick right now, but I really hope it doesn't end up like that, because I really hate the title of "chick-flick"
Seriously, so many ideas are so overdone, it's just incredible to encounter an "original" idea once in a while, then you find out later that it wasn't original at all. But really, I'm striving for a "not as cliche" story. Just watch, it'll turn out all different from this outline XD
But speaking of JLo, last time I watched Wedding Planner and Maid in Manhattan (?), I thought her acting was kinda fake.
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FistsofFire17 In reply to snowp [2008-05-08 08:10:02 +0000 UTC]
yeahhh...she's just a pretty face and nice bod XD
Sorry if you thought me deeming it "chick-flick" was insulting...I consider it more of a catergory. Now if I said "crotch novel" then...yes, I'd consider that an insult...
Either way, I hope you put together the story soon! Now I wanna see it
By the way, I READ EFFING I"S...that's a flippin romance storyline right there.
Request something, I'm bored!
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snowp In reply to FistsofFire17 [2008-05-09 13:06:00 +0000 UTC]
Haha Tifa? I actually haven't played FF7... is it as good as everyone says?
Oh no, it's ok, I actually didn't! And yes, I hope I can develop it soon XD
I've actually never heard anyone use that term before!
Really?
What? (Avatar was playing in the background and some guy in there said the same thing XD)
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Wowiie In reply to ??? [2008-05-04 02:54:40 +0000 UTC]
Ahhh your story sounds SO freakin cool ! I'm not even joking, that's sweet, you gunna write it up and post it ? I'd LOVE to read it !
AH and I didn't realize how much I missed your traditional stuff ! The colouring looks very pretty
I love how spring-y and peaceful it looks, you would never expect this to be a sci-fi story XD
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snowp In reply to Wowiie [2008-05-04 20:25:40 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much Wowie! A lot still needs to be sorted out after exams so it sounds less cliche XD But yes, I really want to follow through with it somehow... a sequel contest is to draw the first chapter, so I think I'd do that XD
Haha, I missed doing traditional stuff too, but at least I always get my fix from looking at yours!
I guess it just has a little bit of sci-fi for background, but the rest is just modern fiction (plus a bit of historical fantasy?)
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yikes190 [2008-05-04 02:43:01 +0000 UTC]
Best if luck in the contest!
Luv how you drew the clothes!
The ruffles look very realistic!
The whole thing looks so soft and pretty!
Luv this! Awesome job!!!
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finaLight [2008-05-04 02:27:35 +0000 UTC]
*immediately favs*
*Is sad she can't fav more than once D':*
This is truly amazing.
I'm speechless.
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drummer017 In reply to ??? [2008-05-04 02:13:45 +0000 UTC]
beautiful! best of luck to you in the contest!
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HunniiBunnii In reply to ??? [2008-05-04 02:04:50 +0000 UTC]
loooooooooove the colors in this one. **favs**
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snowp In reply to HunniiBunnii [2008-05-04 19:17:20 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! It's very colorful, isn't it XD
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calvin-py In reply to ??? [2008-05-04 01:40:51 +0000 UTC]
Very beautiful,
and I'd say that there's no way you won't win the contest with this.
Also, very creative story. I like it.
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snowp In reply to calvin-py [2008-05-04 20:21:03 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! but you're too kind. There are pratically a hundred entries and some are amazing!
Haha, but sounds kind of cliche when written like this... especially because I don't know the details yet XD
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KMCeci In reply to ??? [2008-05-04 01:11:47 +0000 UTC]
it looks wonderfull!!
good luck in the contest!!
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