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Published: 2010-03-09 21:06:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 10497; Favourites: 104; Downloads: 34
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EDIT: People, please, there is no need to point out the right word for "a group of rabbits".
Herd is a word you can use. Tho' it's still wrong here since it means "a group of domesticated rabbits". So yeah, just pretend it say "warren" or whatever floats your boat. Next page: [link]
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Gawd, next time I need to plan the backgrounds better and really know how everything looks around the characters (hates the first panels background) >_<
Lol and why so serious Atir? xD Again, short comic, just for practice. Love to hear som helpful tips and opinions.
Oh and those it look odd when you have the "..." in a speach bubble?
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Gaahh I love it haha. But just something I think you should know, I group or 'pack' of hares is called a hus. ;D
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*hits forehead* I knew I had forgot to look up something xD haha thanks
But really? hus? o.O When I search for it I get 'herd' or 'colony'... >.>
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hm..I think it looks more than good
soft and brigth
interesting, what he is thinking about?
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Hehe he's thinking all "I don't get it~ D8" ....sort of xD You will get to know a little bit more about it next page
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I am loving this comic
I HOPE THOSE TWO DATE.
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Thank you
FFFF who knows, who knows~ >:3
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so far, looking great 8D i'm loving the smooth lines and nice flow of the comic ^^
oh also, grammar error on the second panel isn't it supose to be "all in their own way"
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Thank you c:
Haha couldn't seen what the error was at first then I was like "Oooh, I forgot the w" xD haha thanks for pointing out ^^
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your very welcome 8D keep up the great work!
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