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EDIT: People, please, there is no need to point out the right word for "a group of rabbits".
Herd is a word you can use. Tho' it's still wrong here since it means "a group of domesticated rabbits". So yeah, just pretend it say "warren" or whatever floats your boat. Next page: [link]
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Gawd, next time I need to plan the backgrounds better and really know how everything looks around the characters (hates the first panels background) >_<
Lol and why so serious Atir? xD Again, short comic, just for practice. Love to hear som helpful tips and opinions.
Oh and those it look odd when you have the "..." in a speach bubble?
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I think i see baby bunnies in the herd picture
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Yes, there is some in there. ^^
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heard...A bunny heard..It doesn't sound right, I always thought bunnies had...packs...or flocks...or...burrows or something....Never mind, Heard is sounding good now >_>
Vute bunnies byt the way! XD
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Ohh...
Okay, thank you for telling me that! XD it's been bugging me for awhile and I'm way to lazy to look it up.
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ehh, fair enough 
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Packs and flocks are for wolves and horses. xP Burrow is the "home" for the rabbits, you know the holes they dig?
Hehe thank you ^^
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Yus, i know.
Ah, I knew it fit into rabbits somewhere!
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I love this comic and just started reading it again. Core's expression in the last panel is so amazingly cute!
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Thank you! I'm glad you like it!
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Aww I'm glad you are.
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You know if people are gonna leave comments about you using the word herd then they could at least leave a nice comment after that. Don't come into a pic and say "BTW YOU USED THE WRONG WORD" and then thats it. Cuz sorry, that IS rude whether you say 'no offense' or not. Ugh. That irritates me. The girl rabbit is adorable. Just saying! :3
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Yeah, it does kinda get on my nerves. :/ They could at least take a look through the comments to see if someone has not already said that. :/
Thank you though!
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(No offense intended) Group of rabbits= warren
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Haha (no offense taken) I know, I know
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I am sorry . . .
but "herd" is not a rabbit word.
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It is actually, tho' I recently found out it's for a group of domesticated rabbits, so it's wrong on this page. xD But it still is a rabbit word. [link]
I'm really to tired to care on what word to use since SO many people have said different things.
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"Warren" is so much more fun, though!
When I hear "herd" I think hooved animals.
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And sounds cooler as well. xP
Oh! Haha yeah, I guess it's more common to hear it with such animals.
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Arent groups of rabbits called a harem, not a herd? Just sayin xD
anyway, i like this story :3 *goes to next page*
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Gaah there's even another word? D8 I've heard so many diffrent words I'm not sure what to use! XD
I'm glad that you do ^^
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Yes, I believe its called a Harem :3
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I've got warren as a suggestion as well xD
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Yeah xD theres apparently a lot of words
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Awwwwez I love that look she is giving him in the last one! Cute 
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It's my favourit as well 
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Psst, another little hint. Rabbits come in warrens, not herds
But so far, so good. I assume they're a feral population/domestic rabbit descendents/dumps?
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They do? xD Gah I keep hearing so many diffrent words for it. xD
I haven't really thought about it, only that they are some sort of mix between rabbit and hare. But it's a big warren so it's proabably a mix of ferals and domestic and such.
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This is amazingg <333
not much artists in dA make comics about rabbits/bunniesss..
and shes so adorable :'D
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Thank you! <3
Yeah I know xD they need more love :3
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You welcomee!
They doo! o:>
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Hmmm...that is so very nice! Colours, rabbits...
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VERY nice! You're doing this so quikly and yet, so smooth! But, I think, is there not another name for a group of rabbits rather then "pack"?
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Haha yeah I know xD I forgot to search for it xD Apperently it can be either 'herd' or colony', heh and I think I'm going with herd ;D Thanks :3
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I think this is a lovly comis so far! The only thing that stuck out to me on this page is that rabbits/bunnies live in herds, not packs. 
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Aww thank you so much
Haha yeah, I forgot to look it up xD Thanks for pointing it out! ^^
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you're welcome!
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Nah but it's good that you point out the errors! ;D
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