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Published: 2010-04-18 21:31:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 9925; Favourites: 96; Downloads: 43
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Is gonna rain, everyone back unless you want to catch a cold! D: Oh, but who is that far away on the field? Aaaaw it's Core~ *dreams away* But what is that sound? Can even feel it in the paaaaaws~
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Hmm... Don't really like this page :/ and I don't like Atir in the 7th panel :< His muzzle looks too long >_< And yeah, that white surrounding means Atir is dreaming away a bit |D
Tips/opinions are greatly appreciated.
c:Designs: *ArtemisA-wolf , ~Dragongryph , ~GuavaGecko , ~STRIKER-2000 , *Inereko , ~Sutefu-Kasaichi and =Sheeep-ish
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Thanks, though my style has never really been influenced by watership down. At least not consciously.
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xD Well it looks a lot like it
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I love Atir in the 7th panel. Though I have to admit he does slightly remind me of a wolf off of Wolf's Rain. X3
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Oh gawd, looking at that panel now after so many months, ffff it looks awful. XD
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Wow. X3 I don't think it's awful. XD
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Nah, he doesn't look like a rabbit. xD
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I lvoe it, Ive not seen your comic before so I may be a new reader!
If oyu want a tip, Im not as good at drawing as you and I love rabbits but cant draw them.
I think you could improve on this though, just one thing (because of your skill level, you could improve easily) The balck rabbits ears seem really far apart, I dont know if this is your style or not but thats about it.
I know cos I have a little bunny and her ears are very close together. Sorry if I insulted you
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Awww thank you
Haha no it's not my style |D But you're right, they are far apart. I seem to do that when I draw them facing forward. haha Have a bunny as well and you just reminded me that I need to observe him a bit more XD and I've really forgot to check how rabbits/hares ears are placed.
Haha and don't worry! You didn't insult me 
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Sorry!
Im glad you accept the critique, I just think if anything it will make your art better.
It is a beautful comic, I cant draw rabbits but I love them.
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No, no! There is nothing to apologize for ;D
Yes, I agree ^^
Thank you
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FFff thank you! >w<
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Your welcome, and wow I just checked and its up ;D good job
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Thanks ^^
omg bunny la O_O 
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oh.my.god. i cant wait for the next page! >w<
I must watch you to find outt!
and i love how you draw the rabbitss! C:
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Haha aww thank you so much! 
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Beautiful job as usual.
Love thay way you portray him daydreaming, so sweet... <3
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Thank you
Haha hopefully you will know soon xD
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nom nom nom
she is so beautiful
*waitong for another pages*
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D8 You be eating banana again? :<
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Humm, well, it's a nice page^^
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can't wait to see what happens next, I don't think Atir has a long muzzle it looks perfectly fine to me ^_^ good job
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Think it looks weird :< It looked better when it was just the lines XD
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o________________________________o I wanna know what that sound is. For serious.
I really am liking this comic, despite all it's goddamn cliffhangers every page, the plot seems really neat. I'm very much interested. :33 Can't wait for the next page! :33
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Hehehe what could it beeee? >:3
Thank you! Make me so happy people like it ;w; <3
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sdlflsdflsd it's killing me inside xD I wanna know so bad
No problem!
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FINALLY A COMIC FROM YOUR LOVELY STORY, k thanx bye. -shot-
I love the story so far and rabbits are the bomb.
Your storyline is less confusing too, unlike some wolf artists/comic artists out there. xD
Anyways, I loved the way you shaded during livestream too buddy! Keep it up~ 
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Daaaaaaaaaw~ fff thank you honey~ >w<
Tehe I think that's because when I had made Atir I knew right away what happend in his past, could see it in front of me x)
Fff thanks again~ 
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