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Published: 2010-04-18 21:31:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 9925; Favourites: 96; Downloads: 43
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Is gonna rain, everyone back unless you want to catch a cold! D: Oh, but who is that far away on the field? Aaaaw it's Core~ *dreams away* But what is that sound? Can even feel it in the paaaaaws~
. . . xD
Hmm... Don't really like this page :/ and I don't like Atir in the 7th panel :< His muzzle looks too long >_< And yeah, that white surrounding means Atir is dreaming away a bit |D
Tips/opinions are greatly appreciated.
c:Designs: *ArtemisA-wolf , ~Dragongryph , ~GuavaGecko , ~STRIKER-2000 , *Inereko , ~Sutefu-Kasaichi and =Sheeep-ish
Art, story, characters © ~Snowwire
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Awwww anytime!~ 
Lolz that's awesome, your like a predictor/mind telling person lol.~ 0w0 <3
Awww anytime buddy!~
P.S. Sent you a note, since you forgot to reply to my other one... ;o;
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Asglkerjkl really? D8 Gaaah I was SOOO sure I replyed to it! I know I wrote a reply, perhaps I forgot to send it... >_< fuck XD haha *goes to reply*
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sdfashfdfgshgfdhdsg~~~~ it's fine buddy, I sended it to youuu and replied!~ ffffffff
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I think i now what will happen next but i'll keep silent
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His muzzel looks fine!
Aww, you used another design!!
Keep up the good work!
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Really? I think it looks weird D:
Yupp~ :3 love that one too >v<
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GAH!!!! SUCH A CUTE COMIC!!!!!!!!!!!!! great job!! i look forward to the next ^^
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of course! I'm just sorry it took me so long to find!
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: D
Looks great, Snow!
ATIR STOP YOUR DAYDREAMING!
X3
Tehehehe.~
: >
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Thank you! :3
Ffff but he think Core is so preeetty~ D:
xD
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I can't wait for the next page! :C It's like closing a really good part in a book D; LOL I HATE THAT.
thump thump...hmphf. I trying to think of what animal/thing that could be...IDEA CAME TO MIND. But I'm not going to say it c;
Nice page! Atir is in dreamy land <3 I hope he doesn't have to see her die in front of his eyes ._.
...hm...
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Aww yeah, I hate that too D:
Hurrhurr~ >v> what could it be~? xD
Thank yooouz~ c: Well you'll just have to wait and see what happens >:3
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Really nice comic so far! I like the fact that it features rabbits instead of the usual wolves that a lot comic makers on DeviantArt do.
I really like the smooth lines and soft shading and the scenery is wonderful!
Keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward to reading more!
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Hehe thank you! 
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