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Published: 2012-05-25 16:13:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 2585; Favourites: 58; Downloads: 32
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Attempt no.2 face is working a little better but the body type doesn't fit the description. I wanted her to have the lanky, awkward body of a twelve yr old but here she seems to look a bit older... on to the next oneRelated content
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Also, technically September is only supposed to have one shoe, assuming this is September pre-meeting the Marquess (and if this is post meeting her, the shoes are supposed to be waay fancier.)
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For sure. I decided to keep the shoes on for now while I'm developing her, but she's actually changed from this design so I'll try to post it up sometime. but she will have her fancy shoes soon
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Alternitively, given that the book has sequels now, if you didn't want to change them you could make this September around the Third book (The Girl who Fell Beneath Fairlyand and Led the Revels There.)They specifcally say that apart from having both shoes (and no shadow) she looks more or less the same then as when she came the first time.
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I like her better then the first version yes (the first version had some charm to it but I like this better) but yeah her body does seem like an older teenager. Her head could work for a twelve year old but her body is too mature. Shorten her down just a bit and consider giving her no chest, because even though a lot of girls have breasts at that age *coughme* we read girls having chests as them being older. Basically don't draw her like anything I really was because when I was 12 people thought I was 16-18 because I was tall and had breasts.
But now I have to get over my shock at all these devianart updates you are doing. I think I see a pig flying past my window now... hi piggy!
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haha, thanks for the help Ann. Yea im having some trouble with her right now, and the villain in my story is a 12 yr old girl as well 
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