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Socks-and-Notebooks — 9- The Vision pg 2
Published: 2010-09-09 19:37:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 2583; Favourites: 70; Downloads: 26
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Presenting why I haven't gotten anything done for the past week, part two.This page took a looooooong time to finish. From 11:00 AM to 6:30 the next morning, I think. Apologies for inaccuracies, The First Room is hella complicated and I had to slap like five layers of warm gray on the thing to make it look decent.
9 (c) Shane Acker
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Ohh, I love the details here. Just enough to give the character a sense of place without overwhelming the page. I also love how "vision 6," for lack of a better term, is in black and white, making him seem out of place in the comparatively colored room. The way you have him "glowing" is also a nice touch.
Just an itty bitty critique, but the panels with 6 and the talisman look a little weird. The way you have them placed makes 6 look like he's tiny. Just move the talisman a bit lower and 6 a bit higher.
I kinda suck at depth and perspective myself. 
FANTASTIC comic!
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Is that a big proportion difference there from panel 6 to 7? Anyhow, the backgrounds are looking good, well done.
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I know, I only noticed after I'd inked it. I'm sorry. XD
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It's all good, I thought it was actually part of the abstract nature of things there maybe.
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I cannot stop staring at the fourth panel. All the details and colors...
I WANT MOOOORE.
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Yet another great page
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