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Published: 2010-06-22 15:48:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 1303; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 14
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The upper half of this page looks stunning whitout the speachbubbles, I'm thinking of taking it to the printshop and get a nice A3 poster out of it
Unusual for me to say, but that part I'm really proud of
The gray things in the next last panel is some sort of mirrors and will be explained sometimes further into the story.
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I agree on the upper part of the page. You do a good job in panelling.
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Sometimes it works even for beginners!
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So youΒ΄re calling yourself a "beginner"?! YouΒ΄re kidding...
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Yeah, I do
I try to use the little staging knowledge I've got through animation classes long time ago, but thats like all XD
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English (re-reading with my friend XD) - Last panel, square word bubble: highter = higher
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Haha, how crazy that one slipped XD
thank you very much, I've fixed it now!
it amuzes me to hear that you re-read
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You're welcome
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Then its while worht the effort to keep putting depht into the pictures and the story
You just made me feel proud, what a fashinating feeling
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#1 Gorgeous page! The Green One likes her sleep, doesn't she? XD
English Help (I nearly spelled that wrong XD)
Try find it Opalond VII - I'd add either 'to' or 'and' after Try ^^ Make it flow a little smoother.
Like if they where leaving traces of their business - 'where' (means place) should be 'were' (means was there) ^^ and like doesn't really fit with what you're saying... un, try 'as' or take out the 'if' and replace 'where' with 'are'. If that made any sense at all.
I love the color now
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She sure does
I also figured it would be a nice thing to prove how confident she is that her plan is water-proof XD or as she said in a earlier chapter "Opalond proof"
Hope I got it all right now, I might have missunderstood, but I think I should write down the "where and were" explanation you gave, that was really helpful 
Many thanks for the help
picture for you is work in pogress (sketching)
And thanks! I think I'll try some more colouring^^
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English can be a confusing mess - there're so many different rules and stuff. I understand how hard it is.
You're welcome
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but I guess that Opalond will not leave it be
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In my turn I guess it wont be much spoiling even if I answer that your guess is correct
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ha ha
well he seems to want more and more power... and doesn't really care about anyone around him
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Wow, nice coloring! It most have took you some time to finish them all!
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Yes, it sure did^^
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