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Description Training Grounds entry for "Fear"


"AB! These Changeling's are after Beetle! Run as fast as yer hooves can carry ya and keep 'em away from 'im! I'll hold 'em off as long as I can!"

"B-but Appleja--"

"No buts, Applebloom! Just get 'im outta here!"

And that was when Beetle realized his greatest fear. It is not only when others are afraid or when the ponies he loves are in danger, but when they are scared and in danger because of him.



AGAIN?! www.equestriadaily.com/2013/11… This is madness! *insert THIS-IS-SPARTA joke here*

Thanks so much to whoever featured it! It was much appreciated! ... I'd really like to be made aware that you're featuring my stuff next time, though. XD


You will not be able to understand what is going on unless you read the following paragraph. Please read that before asking any questions.


Yes, this does suggest a fan-made FC and Canon character relationship (nothing lovey beyond family love, of course). Don't like? Don't look, OK?


Well, here's my fifth Training Grounds entry for the %Ponies-For-Everypony thing. This one I came up with when remembering a scene I had in one of my own stories that I had in my head, the story that Beetle came to me in. Ya won't understand what I'm talking 'bout if I don't explain the story, so I'll start at the beginning where the story started.

What happens is Applejack discovered an orphan Changeling baby after a Changeling attack. Because of sympathy for the poor, innocent colt-- who may have been sent to the battle on accident because of his size and sickly state-- Applejack took him to her barn in secret and took care of him as long as she could before Fluttershy followed her into the barn. Applejack was lucky that it was Fluttershy who found the Changeling, who Applejack decided to name "Beetle" after his bug-like appearence, for the pegasus promised to help keep the secret but encouraged the farmer pony to at least tell the other girls about him. When she does, she was relieved that her friends responded in a positive way (only a little protest by Rainbow Dash because of her worries of Beetle attacking, of course, but nothing too serious). After that, Celestia is filled in by Twilight about Beetle, and soon after all of Ponyville knows of the Changling. Some revolt against him, but others theorized that if the Changeling wanted to attack, it would've already. Plus, Beetle's innocence and friendliness won him warm smiles and a few friendships, including the CMC.

What's going on here is that at some point in my story, Chrysalis finds out about Beetle's residence and demands his return. When Applejack and her friends stubbornly deny her demands, the Changeling Queen decided to attack Ponyville, trying to take Beetle by force. She and her army were eventually driven out by the Mane 6 and Celestia. Beyond that point the ending's a little foggy to me, but I'm leaning towards an ending where Celestia takes it upon herself to take Beetle to Canterlot to keep the small Ponyville safe from any further attacks. I dunno what the ending will be like yet, though. We'll see.


So yea, that's the basic story behind this. X3 If ya'all enjoy it, then maybe I can write the story in the future or do it in comic or animated form. That will be a project for later on, though; currently I have a little too much on my plate.

I believe that's all I gotta say about this besides I used ~Kecky 's brushes again for shading. Eh, it was somewhat rushed, but it works.


I hope ya'all like this! Oh, and Happy Halloween! I'll soon be doing a more Halloween pic to celebrate the season-- I've been too distracted to do it beforehand-- and to make up for tardiness, I will include a very special surprise with it. You'll see what it is when I get to it. In the meantime, I hope ya'all enjoy this lil' pic!



Applebloom, Applejack, Bonbon and Lyra all belong to Hasbro and Lauren Faust

Beetle and the art both belong to me, . If you'd like to use this in any way, please contact me first!

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Comments: 24

ApocalypseTitan [2013-11-01 05:35:56 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


This is my first critique I ever use on deviantart, so I would say that this is the most outstanding artwork you ever created e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>.

I think I've seen the comic before where Apple Bloom, Sweeite Belle and Scootaloo are captured by Chrysalis, so the mane 6 are going to rescue them.

I love the setting of this image and I love the shadings, which fits perfectly.


Anyway, keep up a good work e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title=" (Wink)"/>. Hope to see more e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

~Signed, Apocalypse1415 a.k.a Apocalypse Titan
feel free to become part of my group if you ever feel like it. Like I said, keep up a good work and never give up e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>.

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ForestTrails482 [2019-12-14 22:47:40 +0000 UTC]

Love this piece! And the story behind it is awesome.Β Β 

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andaverde [2014-01-13 00:07:50 +0000 UTC]

hmm is this a story?

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SonicSketch In reply to andaverde [2014-01-13 00:22:18 +0000 UTC]

Right now, this is only a story residing in my own head. XD


There's a mini summery of the story in the description, but for the most part, there is no other written version of the story behind this pic. I could try and write the story sometime, if I find the time to and if people want to see it. ^w^

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andaverde In reply to SonicSketch [2014-01-21 05:57:51 +0000 UTC]

ooh ok

personally id love to see it done i want to see how you write it and what kind of story will it be

like are changelings firendly in this universe instead of monsters

or does he walk in and is teated badly for a bit before being treated good XD

stuff like thatΒ 

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SonicSketch In reply to andaverde [2014-01-21 22:00:24 +0000 UTC]

I hate to be such a spoiler, but... I plan to have the Changlings evil, like they usually are, but since Beetle was raised by Applejack after being found after a Changling attack (where I'm not sure yet), he sides with the reasons of Friendship and is friendly. ^w^

In other words, I will attempt to stay as canon to the show's story as I possibly can, while adding in some real-life logic and my own characters into it. Y'know, since for a child it usually depends on who he is raised by that will determine who they will be and what they will be like when they get older. X3


For me that won't be an easy task, since I've only seen tidbits of the show. XD I'll still try!

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andaverde In reply to SonicSketch [2014-01-22 16:57:49 +0000 UTC]

well i am actually writting my own story about a changeling left behind

his name is Izzy and he got left behind during the invasion since Queen Chrysalis laid him weeks before it.

so now he's staying at the castle since Celestia likes kids and it annoys everyone since he gets treated like a prince

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DoughnutJoe [2013-11-05 01:45:27 +0000 UTC]

Don't you think that he belongs with his own species, like Peewee did?

No, he belongs with ponies who will actually raise him well, like you did!

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SonicSketch In reply to DoughnutJoe [2013-11-05 02:36:25 +0000 UTC]

Twi, I don't think I've ever agreed with ya more than I do now. There ain't no way in Equestria I'm lettin' 'em Changelings git their hooves on our lil' friend!

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DoughnutJoe In reply to SonicSketch [2013-11-05 03:01:01 +0000 UTC]

I suppose the ethics of the situation could be argued either way, depending upon your perspective. I would still think that Applejack of all ponies, with her emphasis on extended family, might have some reservations about keeping Beetle from his.

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SonicSketch In reply to DoughnutJoe [2013-11-05 03:25:40 +0000 UTC]

I would agree, and I took that into account when coming up with the story in my head. What I did is have Applejack questioning herself why, of all ponies, was she the one concerned over Beetle. It was the fact that Beetle was an orphan when he was left behind that Applejack decided to take it upon herself to take care of the lowly Changeling and accept him as family. Before this scene, I had Applejack in a mental battle, since Chrysalis and her crew were Beetle's real family. It was the strong, family-like bond Applejack formed for Beetle and the acceptance of Beetle being an Apple that made her reluctant to let him go. I figure not even Applejack would want to let somepony so close go to somepony else known to be evil, even if it's to the pony's family.


This would probably be made more clear in my story, but I did the best I could do for now. X3

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BrutalityInc [2013-11-02 09:35:50 +0000 UTC]

I can just imagine the scene...


Applebloom: "All this jus' fer one Changelin'?! That's just nuts!"


Applejack: "Yer tellin' me! Now git out of 'ere tah safety!"


Queen Chrysalis: "Give me back my Changeling, you peons!!"

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MagicMan001 In reply to BrutalityInc [2013-11-02 20:58:55 +0000 UTC]

You have to admire Chrysalis' determination here, even if it's just one single changeling, she'll pull out all the stops to get them back.


Though honestly, what use would a likely fascist, social darwinist-like leader like Chrysalis have of suck a sickly, runtish changeling? Likely so she could have an extra hoofstall lying around.

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SonicSketch In reply to MagicMan001 [2013-11-04 22:28:31 +0000 UTC]

Hey, ya read the story! I thought many people would ignore it. Good job!


In my opinion, I find Chrysalis is like a loving but sensitive mother. She takes care of all her children, and if they become friends with her enemies-- let alone be raised by 'em without her knowing like Beetle did-- she would take that as an offense and try and separate her child from the enemy, no matter what protest her child makes.Β 

Then again, this theory is only said by someone who is brand new to MLP and doesn't watch the show other that tidbits, so... Pardon me if that sounds ridiculous. XD


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BeamishBalthazar In reply to SonicSketch [2013-11-12 03:25:23 +0000 UTC]

That's a really good head canon! Chrysalis being an overly proud character would explain a lot about her actions.Β 

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SonicSketch In reply to BeamishBalthazar [2013-11-12 04:16:37 +0000 UTC]

I guess it would... X3 I wouldn't know for sure, since-- again-- I don't watch the show other than tidbits of episodes here and there. But if it's approved, then I won't have to worry 'bout bein' embarrassed about having a ridiculous headcanon. XD


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BeamishBalthazar In reply to SonicSketch [2013-11-12 12:12:32 +0000 UTC]

I've seen the show, but I haven't read the comics; which supposedly have far more Chrysalis. So your guess is as good as mine!

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MagicMan001 In reply to SonicSketch [2013-11-04 22:35:10 +0000 UTC]

Well, thank you but actually, I do not agree with the popular fanon that all the Changelings are her children. I just don't see any canon evidence for it. But still, that is a well explained justification for her behavior.

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BrutalityInc In reply to MagicMan001 [2013-11-02 20:59:46 +0000 UTC]

I would assume this here is just her being petty.Β 

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MoppyPuppy [2013-11-02 05:34:45 +0000 UTC]

Applejack gets captured and Chrysalis does stuff to her.


Applejack is about to go all Moribund Mifune on those Changelings.

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SonicSketch In reply to MoppyPuppy [2013-11-04 22:21:26 +0000 UTC]

If only Applejack did get captured in this scene... Which she doesn't... XD


I dunno what "Moribund Mifune" means, but I'm going to guess that if Applejack goes like that, she is a force to be reckoned with. And, to be honest, she really does go crazy when Chrysalis tries to take Beetle in my story.


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MoppyPuppy In reply to SonicSketch [2013-11-05 02:14:11 +0000 UTC]

Moribund Mifune


www.youtube.com/watch?v=jk3Z-M…

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that-one-fangirl [2013-11-01 14:02:49 +0000 UTC]

I love the idea behind the work. It looks amazing! Your shading is amazing, where did you learn to shade like that?

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SonicSketch In reply to that-one-fangirl [2013-11-04 03:11:38 +0000 UTC]

Well, I'm glad ya like it friend!

This shading technique was actually the result of an experiment, actually. I play around with brushes all the time. X3 That's just how I do it; treat every piece I do like an experiment.

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