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Sozokai β Acheron
Published: 2008-11-19 13:33:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 219; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Thousand grey-ones cry,They cry in the dark below,
They fill the Stained-one with pain,
And he flows and crushes on.
His forget blazed the world,
It razed the capitols of acanthus,
It killed the white children of the wind,
And brought back to life the blind.
Under the crimson skies he poisons,
With his body, that forever,
In Hell should have boiled,
Yet now is the water that glints in our eyes.
He changed the image of the world,
And now Hell is up, and the earth is down,
And no one wakes up from his slumber,
Yet Acheron floods and flows on.
The dead became alive,
And the living climbed down,
And all the evil of the gruesome water,
Up like god-sent shine.
Acheron now stired the last souls,
He calmed down, and went on with the flow,
Yesterday all this came to pass,
And today for me itβs all the same.
I sat down to have a dry gulp,
And in the goblet the green waters,
I drained it without a look,
And nothing happened yet.
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Comments: 5
Ooh, I really like this one.
Acheron, the river of woe, that is a bi-meaning of Hades. ^^
Gad, I love how you interweave such deep, blistering, thought-provoking metaphor in your work.
Why can't I meet someone like you here in the states? Because I think I'm in love.
A guy that writes and thinks like you, and I'm sold.
His forget blazed the world,
It razed the capitols of acanthus,
It killed the white children of the wind,
And brought back to life the blind.
Burned man, destroyed the apex of death, erased the ghostly existence, and made men whole and helped them understand again.
That's how I took this stanza. It's my favorite. ^^
Gosh. I love you.
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thank you so much... i love you too!
its a representation of the power or lack there of between the 4 elments... the tendention to controll men... not even the only escences are equal today
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Wow.
Gosh, you are so smart.
They should teach us like that here in America, hehe.
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hahahah well it is all in the teacher... the bigger part of all I use in my poetry is just because of long yeared researches, I love reading, I swallow the books whole... 
Although most of what I know I had read or heard somewhere before my classes, she was of great help and guidance... shel likes me very much, and now I miss her when I'm in college.
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How lucky you were to have a teacher like that, a teacher so dedicated and passionate!
I had maybe...2 teachers like that in my entire schooling.
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