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Published: 2008-10-19 14:38:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 246; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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The rams now cry within the mist,Over black sunset in the east,
Under bleeding, pain-struck shadows,
In the souls who whirl in meadows.
Like the worms in fresh-dug graves,
So they cry their wretched craves,
Scorched by ashes of their own deeds,
Revenge of fate, that burns and bleeds.
In the Choir of Azrael, all of them now sing,
Like muses in infernal, cursed, black swing,
And scream in agony of their silent ghosts,
Whoβs mallet of horror, evil dreamer hosts .
What their hearts now tares asunder,
Is what blasts the world with thunder,
And who has stepped under crimson skies,
Throws his light to itβs last demise.
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Comments: 4
CabernetBard [2008-10-19 14:43:08 +0000 UTC]
It may appear to be morbid, but when I read it... I just don't feel that it is. {Does that even make any sense? >.<}
A very descriptive poem, well done
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Sozokai In reply to CabernetBard [2008-10-19 14:51:15 +0000 UTC]
well I try to make an omnial view allways, I don't want to sell metal darker goth crap only, I want poetry and literary value... btw, I counted them as songs becasue there is no POEM choice... they are all poems.. thank you for the comments, I apreciate your oppinion very much, you seem to know your way around literature
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CabernetBard In reply to Sozokai [2008-10-19 14:57:05 +0000 UTC]
Nah, I pretend to know my way around
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Sozokai In reply to CabernetBard [2008-10-19 15:02:15 +0000 UTC]
hahahahahahahahahah... believe me, no one can pretend to know art... you are good!
and these poems are written in a period of a few years... I just get up in the morning and write all my ideas down, I do that the whole day, and then just make a concept... it is easy to express yourslef when you know what you want to say
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