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Sozokai β€” The cry of the strings
Published: 2008-10-20 17:26:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 185; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description He spread his heart,
As a string on the violin,
Of black rose wood.

He stuffed his voice,
And let it through the wood,
To flow and freeze like smoke.

With his hand, he petted his soul,
And from it’s light,
He made a bow.

Then struck hard over heart strings,
So they would cry under torn skies,
And tare them down whole apart.

And what mad man asked,
Why the violin strings,
Began to bleed...
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Comments: 5

Unknown-Silhouette [2008-11-10 11:44:21 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm Melancholy is such a beautiful word. This poem is breathtaking, passionate and beautiful.

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Sozokai In reply to Unknown-Silhouette [2008-11-10 20:59:18 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much... it's a rather dark and painfull scenario that spilled my gums into writting this poem... very personal
thnx for the fave

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Unknown-Silhouette In reply to Sozokai [2008-11-10 21:13:19 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome, and thank you also for the watch

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CabernetBard [2008-10-24 12:39:42 +0000 UTC]

Very melancholy, but beautiful

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Sozokai In reply to CabernetBard [2008-10-24 14:17:05 +0000 UTC]

That was the point of it... aaah the melancholy
thank you so much for the favs

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