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with the light of a burnt out city, finding its way, to this grave,and the weight of the stars that hung in the air,
they’re all so far off oh so distant it seems,
and with that observation I fell quickly into a sleep,
and my lungs stopped stuttering,
and my breath grew weak,
as my dreams they were projected silent and mute
with the skies covered and bleak in
grey clouds almost like
almost like an old monochrome photograph of
someone who died or I don’t know
something like that.
some time later, I awoke – with a start – a ripple, the whole scene
moving around me like fabric or smoke I could touch it I could feel it,
and a high-pitched-sonorous-sound horrid and cacophonous,
which sounded like a hot-steam hiss
and with my dreams still projected silent and mute on that crypt wall;
I felt I should go inside – so I did
the entrance was all covered in like
dust and dirt and salt
and the demeanor of it’s scowl was
horrid and foul.
but the door slid sideways and when I entered slid shut – I was stuck,
staring down some uncountable number of
stairs, which spiraled down into the deepdarkair, to something unseen and yet
somehow felt (a trembling in your gut or some salt in your lungs – a blank
uncertainty unknown and unsure)
and so I headed down,
and I seemed to move,
faster and
faster
as the shadow of the staircase it spiraled into blank.
and the earth began to ripple,
to writhe and twist and whistle,
as my feet carried me down into the depths of
the crypt the whole of which
seemed to reverberate with sound like
like almost like some sort of far off screaming distant and underwater like almost
like
someone dying far away like almost like
almost like him.
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Comments: 4
barking-at-cars In reply to barking-at-cars [2008-10-20 23:02:57 +0000 UTC]
what I meant to say is
that I'm ready for partIII.
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spacesuitcatalyst In reply to barking-at-cars [2008-10-20 23:33:58 +0000 UTC]
I have it!
I'm just makin lil'
tweaks.
it gets better, methinks!
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barking-at-cars In reply to spacesuitcatalyst [2008-10-20 23:40:56 +0000 UTC]
!!
i can't wait i can't wait i can't waiticantwaitttttttttttttt tweak faster!
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