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Description It reminded me of home,
some kind of unwinding,
through and through and through and through,
let's hurtle towards the white-space.

The landscapes that are traversed in this —
always the same, in that always different, in that always distant,
always passing, transient, unreachable.

You are
sun-kissed topsy-turvy
argyle socks, you know. To keep in the warmth. Old shoes held together with
upholstery thread.

"When I was 18, I left home,
and became a garbage man at a theme park in Utah."
It is this that, perhaps, most accurately describes you.

Better than... better than?
Better than what, exactly?
I wanted to write you a poem but instead I came away with a bouquet ripped from a magazine.

Unflocking. Unwinding.
Division space. Made present. Liminal latitudes, held here.
You and I deflate into air.
Maybe we could be little
helium balloons?

"That's just silly"
(I think you're right).

I wanted to sing you a song, but instead I came away
with a bouquet of flowers ripped from a magazine,
long bus ride home,
a long reflection in the window,
rapidly receding.
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Comments: 6

tetrarchangel [2011-05-24 20:03:34 +0000 UTC]

'I wanted to write you a poem but instead I came away with a bouquet ripped from a magazine.'

It's got that cyclic feel right down, I'd say.

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archelyxs [2011-04-19 12:22:46 +0000 UTC]

"I wanted to write you a poem but instead I came away with a bouquet ripped from a magazine."
I love this line, excellent

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tetrarchangel In reply to archelyxs [2011-05-24 20:03:49 +0000 UTC]

Oh, seems we're on the same page about that line!

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spacesuitcatalyst In reply to archelyxs [2011-04-19 12:43:54 +0000 UTC]

True story.
They make the best poetry, those.

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archelyxs In reply to spacesuitcatalyst [2011-04-21 03:47:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh yes

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omakepower [2011-04-19 02:49:46 +0000 UTC]

Genuinely romantic. I love it.

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