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It reminded me of home,some kind of unwinding,
through and through and through and through,
let's hurtle towards the white-space.
The landscapes that are traversed in this —
always the same, in that always different, in that always distant,
always passing, transient, unreachable.
You are
sun-kissed topsy-turvy
argyle socks, you know. To keep in the warmth. Old shoes held together with
upholstery thread.
"When I was 18, I left home,
and became a garbage man at a theme park in Utah."
It is this that, perhaps, most accurately describes you.
Better than... better than?
Better than what, exactly?
I wanted to write you a poem but instead I came away with a bouquet ripped from a magazine.
Unflocking. Unwinding.
Division space. Made present. Liminal latitudes, held here.
You and I deflate into air.
Maybe we could be little
helium balloons?
"That's just silly"
(I think you're right).
I wanted to sing you a song, but instead I came away
with a bouquet of flowers ripped from a magazine,
long bus ride home,
a long reflection in the window,
rapidly receding.
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Comments: 6
tetrarchangel [2011-05-24 20:03:34 +0000 UTC]
'I wanted to write you a poem but instead I came away with a bouquet ripped from a magazine.'
It's got that cyclic feel right down, I'd say.
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archelyxs [2011-04-19 12:22:46 +0000 UTC]
"I wanted to write you a poem but instead I came away with a bouquet ripped from a magazine."
I love this line, excellent
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tetrarchangel In reply to archelyxs [2011-05-24 20:03:49 +0000 UTC]
Oh, seems we're on the same page about that line!
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spacesuitcatalyst In reply to archelyxs [2011-04-19 12:43:54 +0000 UTC]
True story.
They make the best poetry, those.
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