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Fluffy-fez [2016-07-13 22:28:02 +0000 UTC]

What I like about this piece: The pose and face are interesting and can easily catch a viewer's eye. The anatomy in the legs and face are well done. The colors oddly compliment one another (even though that isn't a color pallette most people would choose.) The concept is stellar, and makes your piece more beautiful and original.

What I feel needs improvement: The arm, shoulder and hand are a bit off. I wouldn't say it takes away from the piece overall, but it can be a bit distracting if you stare at it too long. The dress doesn't seem right, like I get the whole "flowing" aspect to it, but I feel that cloth is something you should definitely look into. The right foot probably also shouldn't look like that, but that just a nit-pick honestly.

Also, this is just a silly opinion, but I'm not a huge fan of when people add cat ears to their drawings. I can't help but feel it would've been better if you didn't add them, but then again the cat ears may seem appealing to other people. Hope this critique can help you, and have a nice day.

 
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Laylabelle97 [2016-07-04 22:51:04 +0000 UTC]

She's adorable. Really love the color pallet you chose for her, it's very summery and the colors all work together. I really like how you shaded her dress. That really dark shading in the center of it with sort of a halo around it. I love her hair, it gives off this fiery feel, and her ears are precious, like a lion cub's. 
I like how the blue details on her face seem to be glowing. I can't quite tell if that's a mask or her face, but it's very interesting. One thing I might suggest to play around with is that 3 line at the bottom of her face looks a little close to her stylized nose and eyes. It's kind of interesting, but you might want to play around putting the features of her face lower in her face. 
Also, that sort of cross-hatching you did on the bottoms of her feet are interesting and give your lines some interest. Your lineart in this picture is very sketchy and there isn't a lot of variation. While that may be intentional, you might want to consider playing with that sort of cross-hatching and adding it to her hands or use it to shade. 

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Annicurrentis [2016-07-02 01:06:19 +0000 UTC]

I'm here from ProjectComment , and I’m commenting as part of the Give and Get 2 Comments, 5+ Lines project.

Here's the feedback on your work!

Strengths:

- The pose. The pose is speaking for the character - it is very strong.
- The colors. They go really well together, good job!
- The head. I love her facial shape and the ears. Cute ears

Weaknesses:

- Anatomy. It is good, but there are some mistakes: the shoulders can sort of be explained by an asymmetrical dress (the use of such a dress in a drawing is not justified (not worth it, meanwhile you might visually confuse your audience). The left foot should be turned a bit more towards us, cuz it's unnatural and disturbs the harmony of the pose a bit. The right leg is too short (because she's extending it to the side, it should be longer than the left one, which is a bit bent). Still something wrong with the shoulders area. It might be due to this:
- Shadows/volume. Not enough and too even. The shadows can't be of the same intensity everywhere, they need to be a bit more intense in some places, especially shadows on her body to clarify the pose she has (the neck area specifically).
- A similar thing with the hair ^ It would look a lot more visually interesting and effective if you would add more colors to her hair.

Overall great job! Good luck and I hope that this helped!

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JSenpaiDaNinja [2016-07-01 15:51:29 +0000 UTC]

Oooooooh!

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AimForrest [2016-06-30 18:53:06 +0000 UTC]

So colorful~ I love the hair!

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JMFAnimations8 [2016-06-30 18:02:54 +0000 UTC]

whew, awesome hair colors.

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