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"There's no need to carry me," Amber protested, not sounding the least bit convincing."The water comes to just over my knees," Triandal protested. "That's up to your -- nearly comes up to your waist. What sort of gentleman wouldn't carry you?"
Amber didn't protest, just took the opportunity to take a long look at Triandal. She'd never seen his face this close, what with the height difference. He certainly looked more rugged than any other elf she'd ever seen. In fact, he was downright handsome. Amber wondered if that were a fact or if it were her growing affection for the elf coloring her vision.
And those elfin eyes . . . . The narrow vertical pupils were often accused of being otherworldly, but they reminded Amber of a cat. The silver shot through the iris made the green look metallic.
Triandal looked sideways at the dwarf woman staring at him intently.
"Why are you staring at me?"
"I don't get to see you up close very often. I like your eyes."
The big elf felt a little color flood his cheeks.
"Am I really that pleasing to look at?"
"I think so," Amber said instantly.
Triandal's face grew more red.
"What? Try to tell me you don't drive all the elf ladies mad," she said.
"I . . . I am not . . . considered beautiful by elf standards," he muttered, hefting the dwarf woman.
"You must be joking. I've never looked upon a more handsome man."
There was nothing but sincerity in Amber's tone. Her blue eyes were sparkling as she looked at him. Their faces truly were close. It was then that Triandal did something most creatures didn't even realize elves could do.
He tripped.
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Comments: 34
TheWillfulWanderer [2014-09-15 02:52:34 +0000 UTC]
Getting romantic, like changing horses, should not be done mid-stream.
As always, I love your faces and hair and incredibly complex clothings. The sword grip's wrapping has neat details too.
Most notably, though, I really like how you made the dwarf short and stocky and dwarfy -without- making her look rough and rugged. I've always appreciated dwarves of variety- the roughness seems to get played up on far too much.
Maybe it's just because they're nearly always mountain/stone dwarves. I can't imagine forest dwarves would be nearly so blocky.
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SparklinBurgndy In reply to TheWillfulWanderer [2014-09-15 18:24:52 +0000 UTC]
I did a few rugged dwarves and was taken with the notion to make one who was super-girly in every way. Hence Amber was born. ^^
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bookwormbeth [2014-06-22 02:14:00 +0000 UTC]
I dunno, maybe because its without color, but Triandal reminds me kinda of Chase Young. A nice version of him!
Also, I reaaaaaallllly want to read the rest of this story that you are writing, it so interesting! *tosses money at you* I wanna reeeeeaaad itttttt.
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SparklinBurgndy In reply to bookwormbeth [2014-06-25 23:38:56 +0000 UTC]
*grabs monies* Thanks! And I haven't even posted any of the really interesting stuff!
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bookwormbeth In reply to SparklinBurgndy [2014-06-30 14:02:55 +0000 UTC]
............That is mildly terrifying that you are saving the really "interesting" stuff.
Interesting in that-is-really-cool-I-should-go check-that-out! OR oh-god-oh-god-we-are-all-going-to-die! OR both.
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SparklinBurgndy In reply to bookwormbeth [2014-06-30 15:27:32 +0000 UTC]
Let's put it this way: you know what LOTR needed? Velociraptors.
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bookwormbeth In reply to SparklinBurgndy [2014-07-01 02:23:03 +0000 UTC]
Duh! Maybe a t rex or two.
I wonder how those would hold up against a balrog though.
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SparklinBurgndy In reply to bookwormbeth [2014-07-01 14:59:24 +0000 UTC]
Uh, depends on the setting. If they were somewhere wet, like a swamp it might be pretty even.
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riverotter7 [2014-06-20 02:32:08 +0000 UTC]
You are going to finish this story, yes please????
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SparklinBurgndy In reply to riverotter7 [2014-06-20 20:05:13 +0000 UTC]
I'm actually writing this one up for sale, but I drop the little tidbits here to tease people. ^^
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riverotter7 In reply to SparklinBurgndy [2014-06-21 21:46:44 +0000 UTC]
AUUUGH!!! No fair!!...grins...
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Hatted-Halfling [2014-06-10 00:30:42 +0000 UTC]
XD Oh~ I love these two. They are all the adorable. All of it, they have left none for anyone else, which would make me cross if they were so frickin' adorable!!!!
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SparklinBurgndy In reply to Hatted-Halfling [2014-06-10 13:41:05 +0000 UTC]
They're so cute you could just die!
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SparklinBurgndy In reply to NoChristmasJokesPlz [2014-06-10 13:40:28 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, that's romance for you. XD
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NoChristmasJokesPlz In reply to SparklinBurgndy [2014-06-10 23:54:06 +0000 UTC]
They are so cute together. XD
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SparklinBurgndy In reply to MagicRat [2014-06-10 13:39:52 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I've been hanging onto it because I felt bad posting anything until I had a decent sketch to show you.
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SparklinBurgndy In reply to MagicRat [2014-06-11 20:54:15 +0000 UTC]
Trying to upload it now, but intarwebs is being hella slow.
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Bijinx [2014-06-09 17:14:51 +0000 UTC]
I'm dying of laughter. 'It was then that Triandal did something most creatures didn't even realize elves could do.
He tripped' XD I'm dead I'm dead
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SparklinBurgndy In reply to Bijinx [2014-06-10 13:38:42 +0000 UTC]
Triandal's kind of a dork. XD
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Bijinx In reply to SparklinBurgndy [2014-06-10 17:03:48 +0000 UTC]
XD And dork's are always fun
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