SpatialHeather In reply to FennecZ [2008-07-30 05:06:41 +0000 UTC]

this one is really... technical? i dunno, like how english teachers try to get us to write poetry, lol. change "someone" to "somebody" and all the stanzas have the same syllable count/beat or whatever its called. lol. But "somebody" is just harsh sounding to me, so thats why its someone, and that gives it a transitional sound... but i really don't think about all that stuff while i'm writing them, just when i'm putting on the finishing touches haha. wow thats probably more explanation than you ever cared for ever... lol

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FennecZ In reply to SpatialHeather [2008-07-31 00:35:41 +0000 UTC]

Lol, No I get it. Rhyme schemes and beats often create themselves and if you're trying for it it often sounds bad.

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