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speakyourmind — Maybe It was Worth a Try
Published: 2008-11-13 03:11:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 190; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Description I've tried
to figure out the way I feel--
to show you that my love is real,
but words cannot describe.

Why, I've tried
to compose for you a symphony
like your heart's sweet flowing melody,
yet nothing could compare.

Oh, I've tried
to express my love poetically.
I guess I never had it in me.
Nothing fits quite right.

And I've tried
to let you deep inside my mind--
to see the world from behind my eyes.
But my walls refused to fall.

Well, I've tried,
though I never needed to.
You've always known me through and through,
seen straight past my disguise.

Yeah, I've tried.
I guess that it was all in vain.
Though now I see just what I've gained.
You've opened up my sky.
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Comments: 8

Elphaba16 [2008-11-22 03:12:28 +0000 UTC]

That was really good--it should be a song!

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Liberty-Virtue-Life [2008-11-18 00:48:23 +0000 UTC]

Holy shat!- I wish I'd read this sooner! that was just... like.. amazingly awesomely funkadelically awesome?

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speakyourmind In reply to Liberty-Virtue-Life [2008-11-18 01:23:56 +0000 UTC]

why thank you, sir.

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missmissa07 [2008-11-16 01:54:21 +0000 UTC]

I love you, too! YAY.

Oh wait, that wasn't for me?! Awww.

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speakyourmind In reply to missmissa07 [2008-11-16 22:49:43 +0000 UTC]

*laughs* it was totally for you

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missmissa07 In reply to speakyourmind [2008-11-17 04:47:36 +0000 UTC]

YAY! I feel all special again

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beautifulsoul90 [2008-11-14 02:10:36 +0000 UTC]

hey i so heard this when you were first writing it... i agree with tim on title... or something with trying

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curiousdrummer [2008-11-13 04:24:45 +0000 UTC]

this is really good. i think the title could be i've tried? that's just my opinion. good job courtney

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