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Published: 2008-01-01 22:54:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 170; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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To a white daisyWhat made you so beautiful?
Simply sitting there in the grasses
Waiting to be discovered
The beautiful white petals surrounding an unadorned circle
So effortlessly lovely
Love painted me
Here in this field
To wait here patiently
For him to pluck me
An uncomplicated show of affection
Clean white petals surround my yellow heart
Forming a simple beauty to be given to her
Unpretentiously sitting in a vase
Love made me for him and her
A small flower to open a heart
And to begin
The many huge things to come
To show the importance of the littlest ones
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wonderful writing! [link] has been included in this feature.
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I really liked how you described love...and the comparison you made...it's amazing. Good job!
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thank you dear...
i just call them as i see..
no
feel them
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Your such an amazing writer (even tho it needed to be explained to me lol) this is such a beautiful poem
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I love the view from the flower in the second (third? I'm not sure if the first line is part of the poem or not) stanza. It is very sweet and gives great imagry - I can just envision it in my head 
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