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Art and Story by Spirogs  & Masked-Mystery
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aly-zimm [2018-03-28 16:26:11 +0000 UTC]

Hm, people don't seem very concerned about Dude dying (who wouldn't die from that wound?? Does this world have awesome healing tech, too, and that's why Dudette is chill?) Doesn't Dudette realize Hido wants to and easily could kill her right here right now? And why "evil plan monologue" to someone he's going to kill? ...unless he just wants to scare the humans into leaving Havien, so he needs someone to live and run back and tell the other humans about the incident? (would that risk Hido's position of power within Kamen society?) So many questions!!

Also, nice explanation for the evolution of the Meganus Interesting backstory!

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Spirogs In reply to aly-zimm [2018-03-28 17:08:56 +0000 UTC]

Gosh so many questions hahaha!


Sadly, he will probably die from that wound, but we'll see. Kamen PAC technology CAN be used to mend flesh if you know what you're doing (very VERY few still do though), and even then, it mostly just stops the bleeding.
Human technology is pretty advanced in the medical field, but they are unfortunately a good ways away from any of their facilities...

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aly-zimm In reply to Spirogs [2018-03-28 17:28:26 +0000 UTC]

...as I say this, I hope that character isn't a patreon supporter: kill him! If word got around about a human death at Kamen hands, it could bring about some interesting social dynamics between the species and some potentially character-developing challenges for Hido (and more revelations about Kamen culture and sense of justice/power? Are powerful leaders excused in wartimes for intentionally malicious acts?) But, you probably already have the story planned out

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Spirogs In reply to aly-zimm [2018-03-28 17:31:18 +0000 UTC]


Hee hee hee, fortunately for me, even Patreon supporter characters aren't death-proof.
In fact, they're almost MORE killable... since their cat-souls appear again in other realms.

Also in the Havien arc, they will always be Kamen, so this guy may very well have his hours numbered, if not minutes

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aly-zimm In reply to Spirogs [2018-03-28 21:53:26 +0000 UTC]

 

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Anazen [2018-03-22 23:47:08 +0000 UTC]

Ah, an explanation for the bugs and their tech :3 Way to incorporate that in an interesting way!

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Spirogs In reply to Anazen [2018-03-23 01:45:21 +0000 UTC]

The best way is to weave it into character speech or showing it... world building is a lot of fun.
This chapter has a lot of it

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SkiesSparrow [2018-03-22 19:43:14 +0000 UTC]

Welp, can't say I blame him. Human does their worse mistakes, but you CAN'T just hate of all human for some stupid reason.
Some of them learned their mistake or make their path set into right. I dislike that guy already.

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Spirogs In reply to SkiesSparrow [2018-03-22 20:50:08 +0000 UTC]

He's not a very good guy, you're right.
His dislike for humans in general is much like a fear though, actually. Kind of like people who are afraid of snakes. Not all snakes are bad, but to someone who is afraid of snakes in general, that doesnt make a difference.

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ZackWriter23 [2018-03-22 15:50:48 +0000 UTC]

www.youtube.com/watch?v=a9j3HQ…

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Spirogs In reply to ZackWriter23 [2018-03-22 17:08:19 +0000 UTC]

HAHAHAA, appropriate reaction

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