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Splashed-Canvas β€” Fish of the Past [CON] by-nc-nd

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Published: 2017-12-01 21:14:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 417; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 0
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It is Frostsky looking into the river seeing the 'fish' of her past haha!

I am wondering if I should keep this kind of coloring style, what do you guys think?
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Comments: 13

Incendiaa [2017-12-02 00:33:23 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


(My first critique >.<)
Nice job! Overall, The coloring and Lines are smooth and work well! The water looks really cool, and I love the little ripples! (I think you should keep this coloring style, because it's awesome!) The perspective is really interesting as well! The anatomy is pretty good, although a couple things can be improved on. The arm looks short, and it's a little strange how there is fluff on the pink part of the ear. One more thing is that the tail bone of the cat is unrealistically high. I did really like it overall, and I hope that you continue to make art as good, or even better than this piece! Thank you for reading this, and I hope you're not offended >.<

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Splashed-Canvas In reply to Incendiaa [2017-12-04 03:13:31 +0000 UTC]

Ahh thankyou so much!Β  I never did realize the tailbone being high so thanks so much for bringing it to my attention!Β  I knew there was something off with the arm but could not place it.Β  I really appreciate it!

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Incendiaa In reply to Splashed-Canvas [2017-12-04 03:49:16 +0000 UTC]

No problem!Β 

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Cynderflame156 [2017-12-10 05:00:30 +0000 UTC]

Looks like I'm losing this one Xp

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Splashed-Canvas In reply to Cynderflame156 [2017-12-11 01:15:25 +0000 UTC]

Awe don't be that way, it always depends on the person judging and the message sent through the art and not just how it looks Β  Which is your piece?Β  I want to see

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Cynderflame156 In reply to Splashed-Canvas [2017-12-11 01:40:22 +0000 UTC]

...Β Skyheart (Contest Entry)

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Skyheart54321 [2017-12-01 23:06:03 +0000 UTC]

I love it so much!! It’s a good change lots of people did skyheart and I think you did a good point of view in this 😁😁😁

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Splashed-Canvas In reply to Skyheart54321 [2017-12-01 23:25:30 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh thanks so much! I really wanted to so something with their past!

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Skyheart54321 In reply to Splashed-Canvas [2017-12-02 00:50:56 +0000 UTC]

It’s soo amazing

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KhaosDrawz [2017-12-01 21:29:30 +0000 UTC]

I really like the way this was colored! I think you should keep this kind of coloring style!

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Splashed-Canvas In reply to KhaosDrawz [2017-12-01 21:30:21 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou!Β  I was really wondering if I should keep it or not and this comment makes me want to keep it

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KhaosDrawz In reply to Splashed-Canvas [2017-12-01 21:37:14 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! I hope to see more of this coloring style in the future! ^-^

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Splashed-Canvas In reply to KhaosDrawz [2017-12-01 21:48:21 +0000 UTC]

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