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Springfallendeer — Falling star
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Published: 2015-04-22 18:19:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 279; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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Last night I saw a shooting star
come falling towards the ground.
I watched it spiral through the sky-
it did not make a sound.

I stood in place as it came near.
I watched its form grow bright.
I stood my ground as came for me-
without slightest fear or fright.

The fallen mass fell onto me.
I caught it in my hands.
Its vibrant flame did continue on-
yet not one burn was had.

I stood in place and held it there.
I watched its dazzling light.
Then I raised my arm and threw
it back into the starry night. 

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Comments: 9

Elize-The-Angel [2015-04-23 21:56:43 +0000 UTC]

Did you make a wish?

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Springfallendeer In reply to Elize-The-Angel [2015-04-24 07:28:43 +0000 UTC]

No, I didn't.

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Elize-The-Angel In reply to Springfallendeer [2015-04-24 13:29:40 +0000 UTC]

Oh

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Springfallendeer In reply to Elize-The-Angel [2015-04-24 13:32:06 +0000 UTC]

Yeah

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Elize-The-Angel In reply to Springfallendeer [2015-04-24 21:51:52 +0000 UTC]

Try to wish next time

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Springfallendeer In reply to Elize-The-Angel [2015-04-24 21:57:42 +0000 UTC]

Okie

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Elize-The-Angel In reply to Springfallendeer [2015-04-26 03:52:37 +0000 UTC]

m.youtube.com/watch?v=-Ue1dFm0…

remember this?

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1Copperwolf1 [2015-04-22 22:56:16 +0000 UTC]

Really nice I always love your poetry

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Springfallendeer In reply to 1Copperwolf1 [2015-04-23 08:08:23 +0000 UTC]

Tankies

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