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47ness [2013-03-11 23:37:50 +0000 UTC]

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Wow, quite the collage! I must have seen over 50 of these entries already and I don't think anyone's done anything quite like this. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

(That said, part of me wonders if Lara appears too many times doing the same thing? It almost looks like a group shot like 47 Ronin as an example.) Maybe if just two of the medium portrait shots were actually small full-body action shots it'd convey the "Adventure!" theme more.

The main shot of her is really nice; I like the rimlighting and sense of determination. One bit of anatomy that could be fixed is her right arm- the bicep area- is too short while the forearm is too long. Another thing is maybe show off her collarbone? I know it's purely a stylistic choice, but having it there really complements the rugged realism look you already have going. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Nod"/>

Looks overall though~! I also like how the green pendant is dead center as a color accent to the rest of the piece, signifying its importance.

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AbsolutePineapple [2013-03-11 23:49:45 +0000 UTC]

Looks fantastic!!

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