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SRegan — 'I've Come To Fight' - How We Made It To 1984

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Description "theyll shoot me i don’t care theyll shoot me in the back of
the neck i dont care down with big brother they always shoot
you in the back of the neck i dont care down with big brother—"

This started as an entirely different project, "To Hell with Gomburg!" - an attempt to imagine how the world might look if the 'New World Moral Order' of Maurice Gomberg, Library of Congress researcher and political thinker, had been attempted. 'Unholy chaos' would most likely have been the result - Gomberg called not only for vast and completely unhistorical federations to come into existence, such as the United States of Europe, but for them to be completely demilitarised, with only the USA, Latin American states, Britain and the Soviet Union being allowed to retain armies for any reason whatsoever. My initial ideas included Northern Ireland being integrated into Eire but remaining part of the Commonwealth, the annexation of the Rhineland by France and its subsequent descent into rebel control (encouraged by the quarantined Grossdeutschland next door), and Soviet East Thrace. This subsequently evolved into theorising that this might lead to the world portrayed in George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-Four, and from there to a more realistic look at a socialism-dominated world, entitled '"I've Come To Fight" - How we made it to Nineteen Eighty-Four'.*

The three giant superstates stretched believability - instead, I envisaged three power blocs (just as there were two power blocs during the OTL Cold War) - a world that has undergone socialist revolution but is still trucking with all its old prejudices and regional paranoia. The Oceanic power bloc is led by the USA, whose actual constitutional system is largely unchanged; its political landscape however has been radically influenced by the rise of EngSoc (English Socialism), the philosophy behind the English Republic, the leading successor state to the United Kingdom after the latter's collapse after *WW2.

EngSoc's distinctive features include the perpetuation and even expansion of the ration-book system in peacetime, allowing for equitable division of goods in a way that can be tracked and controlled; the vouchers expire if not used and are issued via a just-in-time system, so cannot readily be exchanged or used as currency. EngSoc also differentiates itself from most previous formulations of socialism by explicitly outlining a meritocratic hierarchy (its opponents, most notoriously Emmanuel Goldstein, charge that it is instead oligarchical) within the revolutionary society; whilst Bolshevism argued for a 'dictatorship of the proletariat' as a stepping-stone to true socialism (with the natural corrolary that the Party must not be seen to replicate the bourgeoise lifestyle), EngSoc dismissed such as not inkeeping with human nature, and (with a perspective opponents have seen as uniquely influenced by English society and the aristocracy) openly established a higher status for the Party, and a still higher status for the inner Party officials. At least in theory this status was not to be hereditary, though in practice it proved difficult to dissociate parental privilege from that of their children. The rationale was to place the Party beyond the reach of corruption, and indeed EngSoc officialdom has proved remarkably resistant to bribes and personal advancement, at least compared to the other strains of socialism. EngSoc is also distinctive from its other Oceanic variants insofar as it includes a peculiarly English moral emphasis, as exemplified by the Anti-Sex Leagues, which encourage young people to pledge to abstain from premarital sex.

The English Republic has retained the Cross of St George as its flag, but the English Socialist Party's logo depicts a 'V for Victory' with white and black coloured hands clasped in solidarity, originally intended to symbolise the unity of workers across the British Empire before it became clear that revolutionaries in the colonies were intent on going their own way (today a 'Global Worker's Council' includes most of the ex-Imperial states but is little more than a trade forum). The logo has been adopted in various forms by other revolutionary movements in the British Isles, the Western Hemisphere more generally and the ex-Empire (e.g. AmSoc uses red and blue hands clasped against a white background within a circle, evading the racial imagery altogether and instead recalling the national flag).

To the frustration of many revolutionaries within Britain, the English Republic has continued to play host to American military assets, with some charging that the Party has reduced the Republic to little more than an airstrip for the USAF; the Government insists that a strong US airforce presence is vital to deterrence of aggression from Fourth International nations across the Channel. London was the subject of grandiose designs after the atomic wars of the 1950s, with plans to rebuilt it as a futurist utopia. In practice the project was abandoned shortly after the completion of the massive new Government ministry buildings (each a pyramidic skyscraper 300m high) and the rest of London remains a run-down, faded city, retaining many of the scars of the last century.

The ideological head of the English Republic is Eric Blair,** a revolutionary who first achieved fame as a member of the International Brigades during the Spanish Civil War. He became General Secretary of the Communist Party of Great Britain in 1941 and of the English Socialist Party in 1953, and is known within the party as Big Brother. Although now retired from public life, he was a driving force behind the Revolution and continues to hold immense symbolic significance to the Party - somewhere between Lenin and Kalinin in the OTL Soviet Union's mythos - and his image continues to grace Party propaganda; most memorably in an anti-looting poster inspired by the infamous Lord Kitchener British Army recruitment campaign, the slogan reading "Big Brother is watching you".

AmSoc, EngSoc's trans-Atlantic counterpart, has enjoyed less success; the Democratic Party currently controls the House of Representatives while the Republican Party controls the Senate; both are heavily influenced by English Socialism. AmSoc has one Senator and two Representatives, all of whom caucus with the Democrats. North of the border the Canadian Co-operative Party (an outgrowth of the Co-operative Commonwealth Federation) can be seen as a 'CanSoc' equivalent. In Mexico the Mexican Socialist Workers' Party has held control for over two decades.

The map depicts the state of play in Europe, with short, medium and long ranges for US air bases in Britain overlaid. Unlike the book, there's no massive ongoing war - Orwell wrote Nineteen Eighty-Four before the concept of a Cold War, which we know was equally effective at providing an impetus for communist states. However, tensions remain, especially between the remains of WEPA (the Western European Protection Association) and the 4Intern (Neo-Bolshevik) states. Shading indicates where each state is on the pan-socialist spectrum, where red represents absolute Neo-Bolshevism with a system of sovietist councils, blue represents EngSoc's brand of democratic socialism, yellow represents East Asian agrarian socialism (co-dominated by Communist China and India) and green is Adab socialism under Islamic courts. Darker brown implies Neo-Bolshevism but in a non-worker's council context, whilst pink suggests some influence of Spanish communitary anarchism.

* "I've come to fight against fascism" - Blair/Orwell's words when enlisting with the International Brigades in Spain. Curiously enough "I've Come To Fight" will be the mirror image of my other project "A Bayonet of Milk"; Eric Blair is not injured whilst George Orwell was and becomes hooked on revolutionary action. Benny Mussolini doesn't escape the injury that ended his counterpart's military career, but takes away the message that war is hell, whilst Benito became addicted to military glory.

** I know, I know - I couldn't resist. I reasoned that if Nineteen Eighty-Four follows roughly the timeline Blair/Orwell lays out (WW2 goes nuclear, followed by a revolution in the 60s, later redacted by the Party into the 40s) Big Brother must logically be alive in WW2. I considered someone who had died in WW1/2, but couldn't find anyone who looks even vaguely like Orwell's description of BB; then I noticed the man himself. And then I realised; it's him! It's bloody him! "At one end of it a coloured poster, too large for indoor display, had been tacked to the wall. It depicted simply an enormous face, more than a metre wide: the face of a man of about forty-five, with a heavy black moustache and ruggedly handsome features." How old was Orwell when Nineteen Eighty-Four was published? You've got it. It's a bloody self-portrait. Now, Orwell would be an old man if he survived to 1984 (which happily flows on from his not getting shot in Spain, which seems to be my POD, as he would probably have avoided picking up tuberculosis in hospital). But he would have been in his 40s at the height of his political prowess and his 50s when he was consolidating socialist control over Britain; just as posters featuring Stalin often featured a dark-haired younger Stalin, it's quite possible posters featuring 'Big Brother' would avoid showing the older, frailer Blair. If he already had the outline for Nineteen Eighty-Four floating around in his head, all the better, as it means that even if he thought the ideas were bad at the time they at least have a plausible way of appearing in ATL. Animal Farm is probably butterflied away, but if some version of the manuscript survives, it would be interesting to see what Party members make of it. Most likely they see it as a cautionary tale against the radically egalitarian Neo-Bolshevism in vogue in Comintern Europe, with Snowball representing English Socialism.
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Comments: 30

ManinTheHighCastle94 [2023-04-09 10:37:53 +0000 UTC]

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Fjana [2019-10-30 09:43:36 +0000 UTC]

Czechia should be written with I, not Y

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TheIronBrony1981 [2017-11-15 01:28:53 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!!

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Andem6 [2017-10-13 15:06:15 +0000 UTC]

I think you've completely missed the point of 1984. Orwell was an anarchist socialist of some persuasion (heavily influenced by the anarcho-syndicalist C.N.T./F.A.I. in Catalonia),and he was rather deliberate in keeping ideology out of the study of totalitarianism. Did you miss all the times when the party railed against socialism and yet claimed to be socialist themselves? The point is that totalitarianism has no allegiance to any political or economic philosophy, and is it's own beast entirely. I'm quite frankly sick and tired of these scenarios that are based in large part around one of my favourite books and tarnish my memory of it by dragging it through the mud in the name of "muH cOmMieS loL XD"

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SRegan In reply to Andem6 [2017-10-14 15:17:25 +0000 UTC]

What I was riffing off here was that the three superpowers in the book claim to be very different, but it's clear that EngSoc, neo-Bolshevism and Death-Worship are actually very similar. In the same way, this map depicts a world where most states are socialist and should be aligned - but in practice regional prejudices mean a very similar Cold War emerges. It also draws out the very real differences between, for example, Sovietism, democratic socialism, and anarcho-communism. As you say - totalitarianism has no economic leaning (though I'd argue that without economic control, either directly or indirectly through state-backed corporations, non-corporate absolutism is difficult to maintain due to the gravitational pull of capital); accordingly, I thought it worthwhile to depict a world where even a man who IOTL was deeply concerned with the future of socialism might end up becoming the sort of leader he condemned in Coming Up for Air; no doubt always believing the decisions he made were to the good, and always seeming noble in comparison to the seemingly worse foreign menace (but there's the rub). Given the point I make about Big Brother as described in Nineteen Eighty-Four apparently being a self-portrait (described as resembling himself and specifically described as being the same age as he was when he wrote it), I'm not sure this is a thought experiment the man would object to.

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SRegan In reply to SRegan [2017-10-14 15:19:49 +0000 UTC]

I'll leave you with one question, though. What is, to your mind, 'this principle that will defeat us'?

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Andem6 In reply to SRegan [2017-10-14 22:44:59 +0000 UTC]

Alright, that makes more sense. I apologize for being a bit harsh, there was no reason for me to be so aggressive. To answer you question, I suppose it is the capability of people to stop assuming that authority is meaningful just by the nature of it's existence, so long as there is that potential and it can be roused in at least some totalitarianism can never truly find itself victorious.

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Rawflesh0615A [2017-05-21 18:19:29 +0000 UTC]

Reminds me C&C Red Alert.

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criminalmammal [2017-01-25 03:06:32 +0000 UTC]

Is South Portugal the last (or one of the last) capitalist state(s)? Considering that it's grey, not shaded with any of the colours you defined, and also that there's no real reason for Portugal to be split otherwise that I can think of? Also obvious East/West Germany parallels are obvious.

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SRegan In reply to criminalmammal [2017-01-26 07:35:21 +0000 UTC]

Ah - my intent was for it to be a lighter shade of red, like Romania, influenced by Spanish anarcho-communism. The north meanwhile was historically more influenced by democratic socialism, though with the downfall of WEPA they are increasingly closer to the continental average.

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waterpoke [2016-08-21 02:37:38 +0000 UTC]

Love how Greece is still able to manage staying out of soviet influence. xD

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jschein [2016-07-01 03:07:44 +0000 UTC]

Eric Blair as the leader of Oceania. Now that is a brilliant irony. 

And as you've stated, at least somewhat plausible as far as Alt-Hists go, if we butterfly his "road not taken" in joining the International Brigades instead of POUM. Which was a random twist of history. 

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SRegan In reply to jschein [2016-07-01 18:42:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I would, er, love to take credit for the International Brigades/POUM switch-up being the POD, but it appears to have been an error on my part - I definitely envisaged him joining POUM as OTL (thus creating his antipathy for what becomes Neo-Bolshevism ITTL).

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Matthew-Travelmaster [2016-04-01 13:06:13 +0000 UTC]

How is the Fourth Internationale, compared to the EngSoc society?

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SRegan In reply to Matthew-Travelmaster [2016-04-02 10:03:51 +0000 UTC]

More Marxist-doctrinaire than the remnants of WEPA and less democratic, but rather less oppressive than the OTL Soviet Union due to the influence of Western European liberalism.

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Matthew-Travelmaster In reply to SRegan [2016-04-08 10:03:35 +0000 UTC]

Soooo...you could say, something like Czechoslovakia at the time of the Prague Spring, before the Soviets intervened? Something like that? Or more like...I dunno, Yugoslavia?

Also, what do these circles around England mean? Is that something like the range of the US-bomber fleet stationed in the UK?

Also, forgot to add last time, you got a really sweet scenario there. Just...maybe you could add a colour-table to it, sometimes it is confusing what is red-ish and what is rouge-ish. ^.=.^

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SRegan In reply to Matthew-Travelmaster [2016-04-08 17:26:18 +0000 UTC]

Cheers

Definitely not Prague Spring level - Tito Yugoslavia sounds a good gauge. The circles are ranges of short-range, medium-range, and long range bombers and rocket-bombs.

The range of colours was my attempt to show that these aren't superstates, á la 1984, but rather a continuum of states with different shades of political thought, and with peripheral nations of each bloc often straddling the line.

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The-Artist-64 [2016-03-26 14:09:45 +0000 UTC]

Orwell says that Oceania was actually the result of a merger between the United States and United Kingdom after the Atomic Wars of the 1950s. Apparently, he says that the UK was the dominant socialist power of the two, and that they took advantage of the US after they were severely weakened by atomic war. A little ridiculous, considering the US is the world's hegemonic power and the largest representative of the free world; but I guess it makes sense considering that the UK had a more or less flimsy system that was more susceptible to dangerous extremist ideas such as the leftist movement portrayed in 1984.

I always figured that Oceania was a corrupted equivalent of NATO which the UK turned into one scary socialist state by the end of the 1950s, Eurasia was the result of a Soviet invasion of mainland Europe, and Eastasia was formed when Chinese Maoists started a revolution in the Soviet claims of southeast Asia.

Since this isn't exactly the premise of 1984, though, I guess none of that would hold up here.

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SRegan In reply to The-Artist-64 [2016-03-26 16:00:56 +0000 UTC]

Another thesis was that Oceania was literally just Britain-as-North-Korea, an isolated crazy totalitarian state that bombed itself to 'prove' there was a war and thus justify the privations of its economic system. In this version everything is toned down, so while English Socialism has majorly impacted US politics the two are distinct countries, just in a bloc of more-or-less democratic socialism as opposed to Sovietism, agrarian socialism, or Adab socialism.

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The-Artist-64 In reply to SRegan [2016-03-26 16:42:25 +0000 UTC]

I considered that myself, that none of what the Party of Oceania claims to happen really exists. Then again, they say that an important thing in getting people to believe something is to give them little bits of truth mixed in with falsifications, so even that theory has to imply at least some sort of 'enemy' beyond their borders.

So this scenario is pretty much Oceania gone slightly less awry and with an administration slightly less crazy, then.

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BadgingBadger [2015-12-07 01:19:09 +0000 UTC]

Great description, but how does it explain the rise of an anti-free-thought ideology in EngSoc?

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SRegan In reply to BadgingBadger [2015-12-07 17:25:39 +0000 UTC]

Well, 'I've Come To Fight' isn't exactly Nineteen Eighty-Four - it has power blocs rather than superstates and arms races/proxy wars instead of perpetual civilisational war. Accordingly, we can probably conclude the English Republic is 'nicer' than Airstrip One, if still shabby, run-down and struggling to overcome the root problems of socialist praxis. That said, it's easy to see a successful left-wing revolution in Britain become as hectoring and intolerant of other viewpoints as communist movements in other countries, especially given its prudish, moralist leanings. Re-education camps are probably not on the cards, but expect heavy Party propaganda on the BBC (the only permitted broadcaster), in schools, and in community meetings. Those suspected of holding 'pre-Revolutionary' sympathies won't be arrested, but they will be on intelligence watchlists, and could find themselves on secret blacklists used by state-owned employers.

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BadgingBadger In reply to SRegan [2015-12-07 21:14:07 +0000 UTC]

Amy chance of this world becoming the world of 1984 in the future, due to some complex (or maybe not) string-pulling?

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BadgingBadger In reply to BadgingBadger [2015-12-21 20:50:32 +0000 UTC]

Any*

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SRegan In reply to BadgingBadger [2015-12-21 20:25:47 +0000 UTC]

Entirely possible - Nineteen Eighty-Four has that level of uncertainty over how big or cohesive the powers are, right up to the possibility that the whole war was created by the Party to keep the people in line that there is no Oceania.

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Neetsfagging322297 [2015-02-12 18:29:37 +0000 UTC]

In the case of Gomberg.

-If you do not accept the loss of your national sovereignty and your elections do not work the way we want, then we will impose our will with an iron fi... I mean, we will export democracy to you all, wherever you like it or not!
-No, we reject the very concept of concept of neutrality, you are either with us or against us.
-We´ll have to manipulate the electoral results and send the national guards on those protests then... We´ll also have to increase our efforts to round up anyone contesting the morality of our New World Order.
- The Soviet governement is bluffing when it states that they have nuclear weapons able to strike our cities, mr President, those asiatics do not have the intelligence and creativity to invent such weapons so fast, the bomber will always get through.

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SRegan In reply to Neetsfagging322297 [2015-02-15 19:49:59 +0000 UTC]

Quite true - although worth noting that the plan actually gave to the Soviets outright pretty much all the areas that fell under Soviet influence IOTL (with the obvious and glaring exception of all Germany except the Rhineland). The plan was drafted in 1942, though, so Gomberg would definitely not have been aware of the Manhattan Project; the balance of terror it depicts is based on conventional weaponry, so interesting that it had pretty much the same division of spheres of influence.

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Stonelander [2014-12-19 11:31:32 +0000 UTC]

Sorry but "South Lisbon" doesnt exist because Lisbon is situated on the north side of the Tagus estuary only. Also the Spanish and English names for Porto (Oporto) are the same.

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SRegan In reply to Stonelander [2014-12-19 12:07:11 +0000 UTC]

Woops. My idea was that the country would be split straight through the capital, so South Portugal would presumably need an enclave north of the Tagus. Not sure what I was trying for with 'Oporte' - presumably it was meant to reflect a foreign mapmaker, but as you point out it's 'Oporto' in English not 'Oporte'.

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Stonelander In reply to SRegan [2014-12-19 13:11:40 +0000 UTC]

Yeah the Tagus estuary is quite large and that kept Lisbon from growing south of the Tagus. Maybe choose Faro, Setúbal, Évora or Beja. Those are major cities south of the Tagus. Also love the 1984 reference

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