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Sirielle [2007-02-13 15:25:13 +0000 UTC]

OK, I've got GallerySkip [link] so I see all thumbs under the deviation, thus it will be easier to compare versions here, than in mail.

I think the head's shape is better now, I hope I didn't lead you astray with my advice.

The forehead is slightly higher, but not visibly. Hair are still flat on it and I think not symmetrical - there is more of them on the farther side of his forehead than one we see; he might style them this way or you can alter it.

The face looks softer now But his chin is moved slightly moved forward right now comparing with the older version - like 1/4 of mm Or maybe it's different light used on both variants. Anyway I like it better on the old version.

Try to compare thumbs yourself - it's always different than looking at he big picture. Flip image horizontally ether, you'll see more.

What are you going to do with eyes now? I still got impression they are not looking in the same direction, but if he is lost in thought they would look like that. I have problems with keeping pupils looking in one direction or desired direction on my characters, so treat it rather as question, than crit. I might be wrong here

I really encourage you to go with him to Epilogue, a lot of pencil and traditional media artists is there, with way better eye than mine They will not only tell you what needs attention, but also how to treat it.

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