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Published: 2016-09-03 07:48:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 2086; Favourites: 225; Downloads: 0
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Welp i made it through the first week of school. Here's some cuddling kitties to celebrate and de-stressify ^U^This is seriously the most adorable pairing that ever existed in warriors ;;;; such cuties
Hope you enjoy it!
Brightheart and Cloudtail (c) Erin Hunter
Art (c) Me
ohgosh cloud's muzzle is too low ohg it's too late to fix it now crap
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Okay. lets see here! This is overall a great picture! Their fur isn't purely white. which fits very well! I love how much detail went into this picture, especially the shading, fur, and markings!
You show how close the two are to each other, and you don't make anything seem to over the edge!
Some tips would be to use some better shading, or work on your anatomy just a small bit! The detail in the picture is really great! Even adding some faint flecks on their muzzles!
The picture shows a very warm and affectionate relationship between the two, which is perfect!!
I hope we will get to see your art improving more and more from how beautiful it already is!
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Goodness, I missed doing these critques. Heh! Well, let's see here... It's fucking beautiful! Dude you are just improving so much that I'm just like so jealous... All my artwork in DA is old atm and I have improved to but fffff... Like my goodness this is just one of the best art I've ever seen and seeing it come from you just make s it ten times as beter.
Dudeeee.... Gaahh! It''s so beautiful <3 Keep doing everything that you are doing and just keep getting better asgjrjg... Also... What grade are you in 0.o you probably told me once but this brain isn't smart and keeps forgetting lol.
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SCREAMS thank you so much!! :'D
and shshshs that's a secret brooo
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I'm a stranger but I just saw this beautiful picture in my notifications and man I'm in love
I just love the color harmony in this. I love how you didn't make Brightheart and Cloudtail pure white, but rather very light beige. Their noses aren't completely pink either and fit in well. And the shading tops it all off!
The color harmony and the theme of the picture just work so well here and create such a peaceful atmosphere, I just had to praise that
You added some really nice details too, such as Brightheart's markings
And the composition is super lovely!
There's not much I'd change really, I think your style (altho very nice I have to say) could use some development. It's not bad at all but I feel as if you're not completely an expert on drawing cats yet as in it doesn't look like you understand cats 100% yet. Just keep on drawing, I think that in less than a year or so your art style could be just like WOW HOLY DAMN
Shading is another thing I'd change? Make it a bit more textured, that's all (around their legs, maybe muzzles?) There's nothing wrong about it but if you'd want to make this picture a bit more realistic, textured shading would help a ton c: But as you draw more cats you get a better understanding of their anatomy so you'll make great shading without even noticing!
Sorry if I seemed a bit nit-picky here and there ^^'
Overall, gorgeous picture! Simple but not too simple, beautiful color harmony and perspective!
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AHH thank you so much for writing a critique! QuQ
I definitely agree with you that I'm not an expert on cat anatomy yet! I've noticed too that my cats sometimes just...don't really look like cats :'D But hopefully, like you said, it'll get better as time goes on.
Thank you again for such a lovely critique friend 
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Oooh my gad.
This is absolutely gorgeous. Nearly how I imagined Brightheart, too.
Luv it
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It's best art with this couple that I've seen! So sute *^*
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I am such a sucker for these two. They're so adorable...
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*gasp* OMG they're so cute and your style is amazing!
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Thank you hhh <333
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Ahhh I agree. Such a cute couple~
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I knoooww I literally haven't seen any hate about them. Thank you so much! <3
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this is the most beautiful thing in this world why haven't i seen it before
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ahhhh QuQ thank you so much, friend!
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Ayy thank you so much! OuO
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Every time I see your art idk whether to cry in admiration or cry because I'll never be as good as you :')
this looks so amazing oml you just keep getting better :'DD
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OH MY GOSH NO YOU BE QUIET WHAT THE HECK
'never'
YOU KEEP DRAWING AND IN A YEAR TELL ME IF YOU DIDN'T GET BETTER
there is no never with art if you keep practicing :'V
anyway no I'm not good ;;;;
but thank youuu! QuQ
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STAR PLEASE
"NOT GOOD"
oml that is the biggest lie I've heard all year you are fantastic
what??
stop selling yourself so short :'DD
no problem!! <3
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I need more cuddles to be honest ;u;
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*what is spelling?* Thanks for drawing this, it's amazing
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Oh my gosh! I have seen these dears in forever! Thanks for seeing this, or amazing!
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Thank you so much ahhh I'm glad you like it! QuQ I don't see enough of these two, tbh
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Very welcome! How could I not? It's so kawaii! Yes, same here. No one seems to be drawing them anymore.
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This looks amazing! I really like the poses and the shading.
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Thank you! :') I'm happy you liked it!
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i wont... as long as the cuteness stays put
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I really like the warm colors and the shading good job
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