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Beautiful, is it not?I overdid the lighting again but daang this was a good stress reliever. And the expression actually came out like I wanted to, for once??
Again, Undertale is a beautiful game, and it sounds stupid, but it has impacted my life <3
Hope you guys like it!
Undertale (c) Toby Fox
Art (c) Starburst565
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Moon13Dreams [2016-08-16 04:02:12 +0000 UTC]
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This is just simply beautiful! Thought the lighting is just a bit over exaggerated as you stated, I still admire the level of detail put into this! If there was an animated series or feature for Undertale, I feel that this would be the final closing shot!
My favorite part of this piece is Frisk's expression combined with your interpretation of their face as well as their hair. The lighting and headlights in the hair are simply perfect! The only area of improvement that I can see is the connection between Frisk's neck and left shoulder. In my perspective, cut off of the neck is just slightly too high in comparison to the sweater's lining of the shoulder.
Atill, I think this is a very lovely piece that I greatly admire! ^_^
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Starfall565 In reply to Moon13Dreams [2016-08-17 06:14:27 +0000 UTC]
Ahhh thank you very much! I'm so happy you enjoyed it ;D;
Ohh I see what you mean about the neck and shoulder. I didn't even notice that problem, thank you for pointing that out! Your feedback is much appreciated <3
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Moon13Dreams In reply to Starfall565 [2016-08-17 14:36:13 +0000 UTC]
You're very much welcome! ^_^
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CinnamonRollQueen [2016-08-16 00:20:08 +0000 UTC]
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Holy crap I love your art style! The shading is wonderful. I don't think you overdid the lighting. The colors and intensity suit the moment. The face is very well proportioned and Papyrus' scarf is shadowed and made to look flowy. That's a hard thing to pull off. Also, the folds of the shirt look to be in the right places, another challenging thing to draw especially with turtlenecks. If I were to say anything critical, it would have to be about Tori's hand. Its positioning doesn't look natural which catches the eye in the wrong way. But hands are hard and come with lots of practice, goat or otherwise. All in all, a beautifully done piece of art. Can't wait to see what you do next!
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Starfall565 In reply to CinnamonRollQueen [2016-08-17 06:13:01 +0000 UTC]
Ahh thank you so much! QuQ The hand gave me a looot of trouble to be honest, I'm happy you pointed out the positioning <3 It did seem a bit off to me. Hands are definitely going to be my biggest enemy with humans.
Thank you again for your critique! It's much appreciated :')
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CinnamonRollQueen In reply to Starfall565 [2016-08-18 00:30:08 +0000 UTC]
You are very much welcome! Don't worry. Hands are hard for me, too. It just takes a looot of practice!
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Creepily-amused [2017-01-06 01:55:56 +0000 UTC]
Oemgeeeeeeeee this is soooo cuuuuute immediately my favourites
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AsiianShark [2016-08-15 04:44:47 +0000 UTC]
HHHHHHHHHHHOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLYYYY FLIP STAR WHAT
YOUR HANDS DID NOT MAKE THIS THIS IS WITCHCRAFT I SAY
omg i swear i was like SUPER close to accidentally clicking the "delete from notifications" button because i thought this MASTERPIECE was a piece of art from a sooper high class intense college-level art student or whatever that im always too shy to comment on their posts ya feel? (that sentence didnt make sense omg) BUT THEN. i saw your user aND I NEARLY SPIT OUT MY GUM (i should be drinking more water. MORE WATER TO SPIT OUT) BECAUSE HOLY CRAP THIS IS AMAZING.
first of all, lighting and expression?
ON POINT.
MMMMHHHHMMMMM YOU GO GIRL GET IT.
frisk looks SO FLIPPING CUTE and their hair? amashingness
you just put pure perfection into a small image if i were you id totally like go and blow up the image and get a huge frame and hang it on the wall or something because HOLY CRAP my friend, holy crap indeed.
sorry for the long comment i just had to put all mah amazement in haha ;D
(and btw if you listen to "how great thou art" like i am right now it will probably make you feel all grand and courageous or something idk but yea. you gotta listen to the grand version though or it wont be the same teehee. (also idk why but saying grand is fun try it))
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Starfall565 In reply to AsiianShark [2016-08-15 05:35:01 +0000 UTC]
OMG THIS RESPONSE MADE ME LAUGH PFFF don't spit out your gum though wut
THIS AIN'T COLLEGE-LEVEL STOP THIS BLASPHEMY
hhhh wow ALL THESE COMPLIMENTS thank you so much!! QAQ idk though, their hair still looks weird to me, not the shape but the shading?? I dunno it just doesn't look like hair to me BUT THANK
PFFF-
THANK YOU AGAIN OMG
(oml I love that hymn, it makes me feel like i'm on top of a mountain or something. I was actually listening to this BEAUTIFUL COVER of "come thou font of every blessing" half the time I was doing this - www.youtube.com/watch?v=CfQO99… LISTEN AND FEEL THE FEELS)
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AsiianShark In reply to Starfall565 [2016-08-15 06:11:49 +0000 UTC]
no dude it just kinda slipped out of my mouth gum is slippery
YES IT IS. WHEN YOU GET TO COLLEGE LEVEL THO. tis going to be great :3
and uuuuhhhhhhhhh i guess when you point it out the shading does look like it could be tweaked a bit but AY. save that critisism for later (i cant spell critisism what)
YOU ARE VERY WELCOME.
SAAME. my sister could play it on the piano really good that was like the only song she could play haha
*puts the come thou font of every blessing on playlist*
IM FEELIN THE FEELS
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Starfall565 In reply to AsiianShark [2016-08-15 06:33:43 +0000 UTC]
truee
HHH imagine what YOUR art will be like by college, oml you'd be an awesome storyboard artist or something, I love your artstyle sO MUCH
MKAYY i think i'm just too used to shading fur tbh
MM hymns are awesome on the piano but they're so hard ugh. that's why I got dem easy hymns YA
GOOD AHAH
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AsiianShark In reply to Starfall565 [2016-08-15 19:52:10 +0000 UTC]
OML thats literally the nicest thing ive ever heard holy poop
hahaa i guess if you look at it frisk's hair kinda does look like fur a bit...? kinda. not really :b
lol the hymns where you play like just different chords and stuff
thats the only thing id ever be able to do ^^' LOOOL
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Starfall565 In reply to AsiianShark [2016-08-16 15:57:07 +0000 UTC]
it's the truest thing you'll ever hear too >8O
welp maybe I'm being too critical of my art again pfff-
MMMM SAME THOUGH like wow I think hymns are meant for experienced organ players not derpy piano players like me
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AsiianShark In reply to Starfall565 [2016-08-16 22:51:24 +0000 UTC]
SNAP
STOP SAYING NICE AND DEEP THINGS YOURE MAKING MY HEART GO ALL BLARGH
eee thats the trick dude
just dont look at your art for a while and look back and THEN you can either be all "oh dang i did good" or then you can say "OH DANG I SCREWED THIS UP good thing that was in the past tho i know i can do way better now YUS"
haha but omg theres a beehive in our ward who plays the hymns on the piano during sacrament and all and me and my sister are like, "WHAT"
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Starfall565 In reply to AsiianShark [2016-08-18 21:35:46 +0000 UTC]
WUT
I DIDN'T MEAN TO TBH LOL
OH I should probably do that more often hhh i tend to torture myself by staring at my art and pointing out all the flaws ghfgd
it is really gratifying though to look at all your old art, like wow I've gotten better
wOAH SERIOUSLY
SERIOUSLY
welp that makes me feel great about my piano skills
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AsiianShark In reply to Starfall565 [2016-08-19 00:48:05 +0000 UTC]
lol i already forgive you man hahaha
THEN DONT POINT OUT THE FLAWS i know its tempting (TRUST ME I KNOW LOOL) but don do it -u-
ikr like its kinda funny sometimes, too X'D
NONONO I HOPE THAT WASNT SARCASM. *mom voice* you have to keep trying or else you wont EVER get better. (omg that was supposed to be really good and motherly wisdom but that was rly dumb actually lol
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Starfall565 In reply to AsiianShark [2016-08-20 03:24:06 +0000 UTC]
OKIE I'LL TRY NOT TOO HHH
oh my gosh i literally imagined a mother saying that with a sassy hip wiggle hfghfsdg
THAT WAS GREAT MOTHERLY WISDOM HUSH
I WILL TREASURE IT FOREVER
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AsiianShark In reply to Starfall565 [2016-08-20 19:09:00 +0000 UTC]
hahaaa sassy hip wiggle X'D
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Sakuui [2016-08-15 04:26:14 +0000 UTC]
!!! THIS LOOKS AMAZING OMG
gimme all ur art mm I NEED IT
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Starfall565 In reply to Sakuui [2016-08-15 05:29:43 +0000 UTC]
wHAT oml thank you so much!! QAQ are you kidding, your art is goals hh-
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Mishaila [2016-08-15 04:19:12 +0000 UTC]
This is fantastic! You did an amazing job on the expression on their face and the lighting makes it seem almost emotional, like happy and yet sad cause it's over kind of thing. Which probably makes no sense xD I just finished this game playing true pacifist and it was incredible. Such a unique experience. Anyway lovely job <3
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Starfall565 In reply to Mishaila [2016-08-15 05:28:43 +0000 UTC]
AHH thank you so much! <33 Yeah actually, I was trying to make it a little bittersweet? I'm glad that showed a little bit! ovo
Mm I know right, the end pacifist run had me in tears. Just one emotional thing after another, to be honest
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Mishaila In reply to Starfall565 [2016-08-15 05:36:32 +0000 UTC]
It did! <3
Yeah the ending was fantastic and very emotional. Especially after the first run through which was like normal or whatever because I hated that ending. I haven't done the ending where you kill stuff and I'm not sure if I will.... I can't kill some of the characters they are too special to me. Sans and Napstablook are my favs <3
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Starfall565 In reply to Mishaila [2016-08-17 02:47:49 +0000 UTC]
I'll probably never be able to make it through that ending without at least getting teary-eyed.
Ohh, the genocide run? oh boy is that the most depressing thing ever. I did the genocide run but I stopped after killing sans, I honestly did not want to continue it. Sans' fight is probably the hardest video game battle I've ever done...took me two weeks just to win.
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Mishaila In reply to Starfall565 [2016-08-21 19:20:23 +0000 UTC]
Oh god... I could never fight Sans I love him too much xD But also I suck at bullet hell style games so there is no way I'd be able to win anyway.
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veritablySloth [2016-08-15 04:14:38 +0000 UTC]
I love the lighting! *-* Undertale's impacted my life too, honestly...
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Starfall565 In reply to veritablySloth [2016-08-15 05:27:49 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much! QuQ and yess, it's just...changed my view.
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veritablySloth In reply to Starfall565 [2016-08-15 05:47:27 +0000 UTC]
I love the game so much @_@ *is currently rewatching jacksepticye's Let's Play*
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Starfall565 In reply to veritablySloth [2016-08-16 16:06:38 +0000 UTC]
AHH I watched his playthrough before I was able to get the actual game, oh man I love his playthrough so much
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veritablySloth In reply to Starfall565 [2016-08-16 16:08:18 +0000 UTC]
ikr! <3 I love his voices for the characters and everything...
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Starfall565 In reply to veritablySloth [2016-08-16 20:45:31 +0000 UTC]
Yesss me too, his papyrus voice is perfect
Have you watched the GameGrumps playthrough?
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veritablySloth In reply to Starfall565 [2016-08-21 02:20:46 +0000 UTC]
ayyy just started watching their playthrough whoa, you're right, they are funny X)
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Starfall565 In reply to veritablySloth [2016-08-22 03:52:34 +0000 UTC]
ahhh aren't they? They also do a genocide playthrough
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veritablySloth In reply to Starfall565 [2016-08-22 04:08:18 +0000 UTC]
I noticed X) Can't wait to watch more!
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veritablySloth In reply to Starfall565 [2016-08-16 21:35:07 +0000 UTC]
Oh my god yES <3
NYEH HEH HEH!
I haven't, I don't really know anything about GameGrumps
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Starfall565 In reply to veritablySloth [2016-08-17 02:24:07 +0000 UTC]
I love his voice for when Papyrus crashed through Undyne's window, it cracks me up every time
They did a playthrough of Undertale, and it was super good! Funny as well, you can look it up if you want to
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