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Published: 2015-01-16 02:42:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 5325; Favourites: 111; Downloads: 0
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Description when he asked me how i wanted him to build the house,
i answered him truthfully.

i said i wanted the pillars to be made
of pages from every book ever written,
curled in on themselves until
they could hold a roman arch.

pour words, strong and weak, into
the earth instead of cement-
let it be flexible to adapt
to pressure.

build the walls from the ground up
through prose supporting the bricks
layered by memories forged
along the path we took
to arrive at eden.

tilt poems into pyramids above
our heads, ceilings just high enough
to be within earshot of every
laugh we'll ever make.

empty emotions into a template
of a window and slide it into
place without a way to get it
back out.

after i was done, we stood on that
vacant lot, ambiguous thoughts
flitting across his face and down
into my fingertips.

he told me i was crazy.

he told me i was beautiful.



he told me he would build it.
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Comments: 80

StarlightComet In reply to ??? [2015-01-21 19:42:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank yoooooouuuuuu!!

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AcidSpades [2015-01-21 03:08:05 +0000 UTC]

This poem really got to me. Wow. I love it.

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StarlightComet In reply to AcidSpades [2015-01-21 19:42:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it

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AcidSpades In reply to StarlightComet [2015-01-22 21:20:20 +0000 UTC]

You're pretty great you know that

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StarlightComet In reply to AcidSpades [2015-01-22 23:03:03 +0000 UTC]

Ah, well. I don't know about thatΒ Β 

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AcidSpades In reply to StarlightComet [2015-01-23 15:34:55 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha believe me

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StarlightComet In reply to AcidSpades [2015-01-23 19:48:10 +0000 UTC]

I'll try

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AcidSpades In reply to StarlightComet [2015-01-24 21:35:30 +0000 UTC]

Yes. You
Will

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StarlightComet In reply to AcidSpades [2015-01-25 17:06:00 +0000 UTC]

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AcidSpades In reply to StarlightComet [2015-01-29 03:07:24 +0000 UTC]

How are you today?

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StarlightComet In reply to AcidSpades [2015-01-29 19:50:19 +0000 UTC]

Eh, I'm alright. It's almost Friday so that's good

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AcidSpades In reply to StarlightComet [2015-01-31 22:09:36 +0000 UTC]

Well it's Saturday now, so you must be even better

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StarlightComet In reply to AcidSpades [2015-02-01 02:35:55 +0000 UTC]

You bet I do

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AcidSpades In reply to StarlightComet [2015-02-05 22:54:22 +0000 UTC]

I hope you have a wonderful day today

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StarlightComet In reply to AcidSpades [2015-02-06 01:10:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, you as well

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AcidSpades In reply to StarlightComet [2015-02-10 00:58:58 +0000 UTC]

I'll try

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Drawing-Stars-02 [2015-01-20 22:29:02 +0000 UTC]

You are my favorite Poet. Ever.

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StarlightComet In reply to Drawing-Stars-02 [2015-01-20 22:45:51 +0000 UTC]

Aw friend you are too kind!

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Drawing-Stars-02 In reply to StarlightComet [2015-01-21 02:17:42 +0000 UTC]

Can't be helped ;u;

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IyraEMM [2015-01-20 16:19:39 +0000 UTC]

ah, this is dreamy, and lovely.Β 

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StarlightComet In reply to IyraEMM [2015-01-20 20:18:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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IyraEMM In reply to StarlightComet [2015-01-21 10:58:27 +0000 UTC]

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sheepyblue In reply to ??? [2015-01-19 17:57:08 +0000 UTC]

Wow, beautiful poem

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StarlightComet In reply to sheepyblue [2015-01-19 20:12:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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LadyMurasaki1 In reply to ??? [2015-01-18 12:11:16 +0000 UTC]

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

I want to hug the poem. It's beautiful!

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StarlightComet In reply to LadyMurasaki1 [2015-01-18 15:25:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank yooooooouuuuu!

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LadyMurasaki1 In reply to StarlightComet [2015-01-18 15:35:11 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome!

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Cezille07 [2015-01-17 01:14:45 +0000 UTC]

*shudder* So beautiful~Β 

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StarlightComet In reply to Cezille07 [2015-01-17 01:24:34 +0000 UTC]

Truly? I myself think it lacks so much.

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