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Starrulet β 2p!HetaOni - Chapter 7 Part 5
Published: 2014-03-09 21:52:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 4100; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 29
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So many complaints for this part, I can't even start... Updates are currently slow, because I haven't finished writing chapter 7 or any future chapters (just bits here and there)... Also, the reason it took so long to make 7 part 5 was because I was busy applying for various universities, when I wasn't busy being ill. Note that Part 5 is also long enough to consist as two parts, but I didn't want to split it (usually each part is maximally 600x10'000 pixels big)Ah, and it's choice time again. Don't worry, this will be the last choice you have to make for a while.
Prologue
Chapter 1 | Chapter 2 | Chapter 3 | Chapter 4
Chapter 5 | Chapter 6 | Chapter 7 | Chapter 8
Chapter 9 | Chapter 10 | Chapter 11 | Chapter 12
Chapter 13 | Chapter 14 | Chapter 15 | Chapter 16
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Stop Italy | Let Italy Pass
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You know what, I'm gonna leave this open to interpretation. Because if it works, it works and woah, I've made a character more manipulative than intended
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Based on England's smirk something happened, but I'm not sure what... and Italy seems to be the only one to notice.
It's worth noting Italy even looks afraid of the change.
England didn't exactly seem to snap though, because he's in control in his next icon.
Well, by that I mean England at least has his normal pink BG again instead of that blue-ish or evil smirk. x)
However... Something changed.
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Does it have to do with the reason why Italy and England doesn't trust each other?
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That sounded suspicious.
It sounds like a yes, but you're a smart cookie, so you might just want me to think that...
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"Prussia:Β You two, Stop! Don't start fighting! In our day and age, these kind of fights don't---
Canada & America: Shut up!
Germany: Hey! Don't talk to my brother like that!"
Omg i can'tΒ
You're the one to talk, GermaniaΒ
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Haha
Was I the only one that saw where his ascot went before XD it was on his arm the whole time hehe~
But this was good.
You said you got complaints?
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You're the first one to mention it.
I didn't get complaints, I have complaints. Lately, a lot of 2p!HetaOni parts haven't been sitting right with me, due to them essentially being "filler" parts- i.e. not much other than talking happening. And I guess that doesn't sit well with me for that reason.
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Ah! Hehe~
Oh? Well the game itself was a lot of text and looking around, so it makes a lot of sense. And you are adding your own spin to places, so that's awesome. I think that you are doing an amazing job.
I want to reference your script when I make my stories for my 2P Prussia.
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Yeah, sure! Go ahead. Just link me it.
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Why does 2p!China look so much like 1p!China?
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Because I'm really crap at developing different designs. It's especially hard to tell the difference between the 1ps and 2ps when we never see (my design of) their 1ps. I also based 2p!China off his 2p!nyo counterpart and notably, when comparing the two nyo!designs, there really isn't much of a difference between them.
However, if the lack of difference really bothers you, I can look into revising the character design. I'm currently revising 2p!HetaOni anyway, so I might as well redo China while I'm at it.
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No, no, it doesn't bother me that much. I just saw how similar they looked and wondered if that meant anything.
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Aaaah. OK. Yeah. There's no meaning behind it. Well, other than that I think China and 2p!China are the most similar to each other in personality, when compared to the others (the similarity being based on what they will or wouldn't do).
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I would say stop Italy, but considering that one of the previous chapters England ended up channeling (for lack of words) a past England that helped present Italy, I say let him pass. Besides, he saw England smirking so...maybe that's the cue to talk to England about what needs to be done.
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so you think that happened... All right, noted.
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Yeah. But I'm starting to question my decision based on your "..." there. XD I'm a bit worried, but we'll see what happens.
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Heh, well, as you said, we'll see what happens
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Umm, I say let him pass. He's obviously up to something, and I'm curious what! By the way, love the series
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Oh my God this is so tense.... I say let him pass. Though I'm really worried...
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Noted. 
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I donΒ΄t think that Italy woud kill England. IΒ΄m fine with both. But if Italy kills England, my darling,............... Β know wat i mean...,da?Β Β
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I would not want to be England's murderer.
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I know~ I don't want anyone to hurt my darling England~Β Β
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Sorry, I shouldn't be allowed to reply to stuff when I'm tired.
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Just one or two stupid writing mistakes...
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I'd appreciate if you could point them out to me, so I can correct them.
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Don't worry, i meant my writing mistakes... Quite embarassing...
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Ooooooooooooooooooooooh. Hey, don't worry, I don't notice those kinda mistakes. Being surrounded by people that can't really speak English, you kinda stop realising when someone made a few small mistakes.
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Okay, thanks!
And sorry for irritating you!
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Nah, it takes a lot to annoy me. It's no prob.
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BOTH AGAIN. :I I wanna see everything.
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I know, I already voted, but I just reread the last parts and discovered that we already know how where the one possibility ends...
*cough* watch the doors *cough*
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Sorry, you lost me a little
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Oh, I really don't mind! ^^
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Your England's such a cute thing! Β
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JAPAN! STOP ITALY!! AH TELL U!!!
(Seriously, where did England got his wound??.. *read previous chapter*)
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