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TW: Parental abuse, manipulation

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Welcome to the Miracleverse! AKA, the Disliked Ships AU, but I don't use this as a platform for hate. While the universe is slightly... twisted, they are all options that could have happened in the main TFIMverse. They're a chance to do things with the... standard ships that people have, and using them in new ways, as well as a platform for interesting characters. And let me say, it's time for the stuff to begin! Sort of! First of the many times we'll be doing STORIES in this universe, these are pictures in scenarios that either advance the story, or in this case, provide backstory! They might feature only canon characters, or only OCs, this one features Starlight Glimmer and the story of her village, as her daughter Stitchwork Shine asks about her strange behavior during 'The Map Is On' . Takes place after 'The Meeting Of The Mane 7' but contains no spoilers for it. Originally titled as 'Curiosity Killed The Cat'.
 
THIS IS A PART OF STITCHWORK'S STORYLINE!PREVIOUS   -  NEXT (NOT YET)

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Starlight was just cleaning up after the 'excitement' that had been Twilight corralling seven ponies into what was now her living room because of that accursed map when she heard hoofsteps on the crystal behind her.

They weren't too heavy, and they were downstairs, so it was definitely Stitchwork. Turning around as she swept dust into a magical sphere that she disintegrated in a second, she faced her daughter.
"Hello, sweetie!" She forced a bit more of a cheery tone; she was just frustrated, no need to freak out, it wasn't Stitchwork's fault.... she smiled again, a bit more forcefully, but Stitchwork didn't seem to notice.

"I was just wondering..." Stitchwork idly pawed her hoof on the ground, nervous to ask this question as she wasn't entirely sure what she had seen, it was a little hazy in her memories even having happened only a day ago.
She paused... was it really worth bringing up if she didn't remember it properly? She remembered the hoof coming down and crushing a small spot on the magical map, but it was grey and blurry in her mind. Grey, blurry, and slipping out of her grasp fast.
She sighed, deciding she absolutely needed to know, even if it was a false memory, it'd be better to know than not. She gathered her courage again and spoke up. "I was just... wondering... um, why you put your hoof on the map back when it turned on?" She managed to get out, before she felt the room go silent and cold.

"What do you mean, Stitchy, darling?" Starlight feigned ignorance, the bottle on her neck glowing red, she hid her anger by funneling it straight into the bottle. She thought her persuasive magic would make Stitchwork forget the incident.
She had ground her hoof into Sire's Hollow, her birthplace, where no doubt her fathers still lived in, and where the mare that birthed her husband dwelled as well.
It filled her with disgust to remember how Firelight treated her as nothing but a small, helpless filly, and that had overridden her logic for a moment.
She'd never do anything to Sire's Hollow in reality; she was good now. Good ponies didn't seek revenge, good ponies forgive.
So she let out a little steam on an unreal Sire's Hollow, she wasn't evil; it wasn't real, and it was a healthy expression.
But her daughter didn't know about Sire's Hollow, what that place was or what it meant to her.. Of course she was curious. "I don't remember what you're talking about." She lied; good ponies could lie if the truth would be more hurt and trouble than it was worth, and that was this situation.

"Oh, you don't?" Stitchwork looked confused, and she wondered if she really did remember that hoof grinding down on the map... but she somehow trusted the grey, blurry memory right now.
Maybe it was hard to remember for her mother as well; it wasn't a huge action, and so much had happened in almost two days.
"It was when the map turned on, and you... I think, maybe you were talking about the size of the map, then you... got this really scary look on your face," Stitchwork confessed nervously, remembering the look, like she was wiping gum off the frog of her hoof on the map. "You looked at a place on the map and you ground your hoof into it really hard... Do you remember it now?"

"Oh, yes, that!" Starlight had turned around, hiding her narrowed eyes, annoyed that Stitchwork didn't drop it when she said she didn't remember. Why couldn't she take the hint?
Oh well, she'd handle it easily. "Oh, that was just... your mom being reminded of when she wasn't such a good pony." She turned around, having had a brilliant idea.

"What?" Stitchwork looked surprised; her mother didn't really ever talk about when she was evil, and she was admittedly curious. "What was it?"

"It was the village I made." Starlight lied, taking her over to the map and pointing to her village; she could redirect this 'false memory' thing so she could even teach Stitchwork a lesson about being a good pony! This was a good idea.

"The village you... is that where Mrs. Sugarbelle and Mr. Party Favor met you?" Stitchwork asked, remembering Starlight's good friends who she said she had met a long time ago.
She felt a little strange about staring at the place on the map; she was almost certain the place she had ground her hoof into was somewhere else... but the memory was fuzzy and fading, she could have misremembered it. It was an exciting day, after all.

"Yes it is, sweetie!" Starlight nodded encouragingly, and she sat down. "You see, when I was a bad pony, I decided Cutie Marks were the reason for everyone being so bad to each other; it was narrow minded and simplistic." Starlight parroted what she remembered of Twilight's explanation of wrongdoing to her in the months before the Crystal Empire fell.

"What did you think Cutie Marks did?" Stitchwork was admittedly confused, but intrigued by this illogical story; it didn't make sense... though she felt like she had heard a Pegasus stallion talking about the same thing, but she hadn't paid attention to him at the time. Maybe then she'd understand better.

"I thought that Cutie Marks allowed ponies to act superior over others, and that ponies who hadn't figured out their talents were punished by society." She recited the beginnings of her old manifesto, fighting the urge to begin projecting her voice, like she did in the old days.
"So I decided to fix that. I met a stallion named Double Diamond, he died a few years ago in a skiing accident, so you wouldn't have met him..." Starlight frowned... Double Diamond really was a nice stallion, always obeying her orders and following her manifesto perfectly... if only Twilight had... no, she was a good pony, it was good that he left her, like Sunburst left her.
 She poured a little more anger into the bottle, shrinking the cloud and compressing it down. "He and I worked together to build a simple village in the mountains." She continued.

"...Mom..." Stitchwork looked at the sadness and anger on her mother's face as something dawned on her. "Was he your special somepony before you met Dad again?" She asked, prepared to hug her clearly grieving mother.

"... Yes." Starlight admitted to the first pony she had ever told this to. She sighed. "We built the wonderful village, and I earned my Cutie Mark by taking away his Mark, like we planned... though I wanted to make mine equal, I had a sacrifice to make; my ideals, or the ability to remove Cutie Marks for my cause." She recalled, enthralled by her old life... no, disgusted, she was just a hypocrite, not some noble savior.
That's what the tongue lashing she had gotten from Princess Luna when Twilight asked Celestia for her to be Twilight's student said. So it was true. No matter how good it felt to save ponies from their fates... it was bad.

"What do you mean?" Stitchwork was confused by the wording her mother used, and hearing her Cutie Mark story was... surprising enough on its own.

"I had initially planned to take both his Cutie Mark and mine, but when I tried, I couldn't finish the spell without my Cutie Mark. So... I faked it." Starlight cringed. She really had wanted to remove the mark, but the dampening effect it had on magic made that impossible. So she faked finding a staff, a piece of driftwood, and made a fake mark.
"I pretended I removed it instead. And then, I started to advertise my ideology and draw in ponies who hated their talents, their Cutie Marks, what discrimination they faced for the 'wrong' mark, so I removed them all. Mrs. Sugarbelle was a failed baker, and Mr. Party Favor a clown that nobody wished to hire. I made them the inhabitants of my village, and allowed them to view their old marks where I had put them, so they'd always know what they left behind."

"That sounds... interesting..." Stitchwork said, altogether distracted from her original question, now wondering... what exactly had her mother done wrong? From what she said, she wasn't kidnapping ponies, just offering them a service and a new home. She even allowed them the freedom to have their marks back.

"But it was wrong of me to do; ponies should be free to use their magic in the ways they want." Starlight recited from memory the lecture Twilight had given her. "Twilight and her friends freed all of my villagers and gave them back their marks, and I ran away... and that's the story of my village." Starlight finished.

"... Oh." Stitchwork was still confused; wasn't it freedom to use their magic to choose to not have marks? She had to be missing something, but she trusted her mother's story. "I can... see why you'd want to destroy that." She lied, still uncertain.

"Exactly. It was a reminder that I used to be bad, and I... don't like those." Starlight finished weaving her lie, and she had even taught Stitchwork a good lesson about ponies being free to choose what they want. She had finally told someone about her love for Double Diamond. Something she never told before, afraid they'd misconstrue their relationship.
She was a bad pony then, but never that bad. She was good, and had Night Glider not loved Double Diamond, she may have taken him back... though of course, she loved Sunburst so very much; he was her husband, her one and only love. He was hers, and Double Diamond no longer mattered.

"I can understand..." Stitchwork smiled. "I'm sorry for asking something that must have been difficult for you to talk about." She apologized, and turned around, satisfied with her answer and not seeing Starlight's sigh of relief at deflecting her questions.
 She was still confused about the story her mother had told, why Princess Twilight had ruined what seemed like a happy community, but she had faith that there was a logical explanation.
She just wasn't smart enough yet; heck, she had actually thought her mother had stomped on some other town... though, as she looked at the map's projection, she couldn't see the dent from the grinding of her mother's hoof under the mountaintop where Starlight's village had been... and saw a small scuff mark nearby, under another spot in the map.

... Just what was going on?

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Comments: 45

prometheushunter2 [2019-05-18 20:00:27 +0000 UTC]

Starlight forgot the part about where she started forcing others to lose there cutie marks

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StarryOak In reply to prometheushunter2 [2019-05-18 21:09:46 +0000 UTC]

Didn't forget, more like... casually omitted.

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QuakingAspens [2018-11-20 06:51:42 +0000 UTC]

Oh, you can see her subtle influence over her daughter here really well. At least Stitchwork is starting to wake up to all the lies.

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StarryOak In reply to QuakingAspens [2018-11-20 21:15:07 +0000 UTC]

It only takes a little critical thinking and it all falls down.

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QuakingAspens In reply to StarryOak [2018-11-21 05:44:18 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, Starlight's not weaving the strongest web of lies, and eventually that web will unravel.

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StarryOak In reply to QuakingAspens [2018-11-21 19:38:41 +0000 UTC]

it's worked for so long because no one cared to question it, not by its strengths.

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QuakingAspens In reply to StarryOak [2018-11-21 21:57:35 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. I await the collapse of this little web!

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StarryOak In reply to QuakingAspens [2018-11-24 04:02:07 +0000 UTC]

heeehee~!!!

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shypegasister10 [2018-11-04 19:42:38 +0000 UTC]

YEESH. Starlight should’ve never become a mom. The fact that she acts annoyed at her daughter is just...yikes.

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StarryOak In reply to shypegasister10 [2018-11-05 03:20:11 +0000 UTC]

but she did, and she is a mom.

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stevegirl124 [2018-10-26 20:42:10 +0000 UTC]

Geez, Starlight could use a session with her shrink. Then again, they're probably under one of her many spells, too.
I hope that eventually Stitchwork either:
a. Goes corrupt and seeks violent vengance on her mother (i love a good action sequence!) or
b. Wakes up to the lies and deceit and makes a real pony of herself.
Part of me can't help but wonder if there's some sort of spell at play in Stitch's willingness to believe her mother, but I'm also sure that's just years and years of a bad relationship. Something about that bottle, maybe...
Bravo, Starry! I love a story that makes me think. 

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StarryOak In reply to stevegirl124 [2018-10-27 00:55:35 +0000 UTC]

Ooooh~ There's some interesting theories there~
The bottle will be VERY IMPORTANT btw
she isn't under a spell (though the memory of starlight grinding her hoof into sire's hollow is blurred by a spell).

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stevegirl124 In reply to StarryOak [2018-10-27 03:26:56 +0000 UTC]

Yesss i got an ominous-but-very-obviously-important vibe from that bottle! I can only assume it's some sort of physical manifestation of Starlight's anger.
There's so much about magic in this universe that I'm excited to learn about! Do emotions manifest physically? How does that concept play into changelings and the crystal heart? Does constant spell exposure lead to issues later in life (Stitchwork being susceptible to magic as a result of the constant use as a baby, etc.), sort of like a drug? Wtf is Starlight's deal?!?
Such a tease, Starry, such a tease   

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StarryOak In reply to stevegirl124 [2018-10-27 16:30:37 +0000 UTC]

Well, I wasn't planning magic lessons really, but there is one emotion that manifested physically. You might have known her as Cadance.
In my headcanon, Cadance wasn't born to anypony, rather, she formed out of all the excess love in the world that pooled into a pony form. She was only discovered later and raised in an Earth Pony village.
Constant spell exposure only affects the memories in which the spell was used, usually turning them gray and unusable, unless a specific mind wipe spell is used.

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stevegirl124 In reply to StarryOak [2018-10-27 22:42:20 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, interesting Cadance hc! I don't know how I missed that in previous writing.
And good to know! I can only imagine it'll be applicable in the future

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StarryOak In reply to stevegirl124 [2018-10-28 02:20:00 +0000 UTC]

I don't mention it much, but it is her origin in my headcanon

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SwordSparks [2018-10-26 04:07:56 +0000 UTC]

This is what when growth doesn't happen. 

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StarryOak In reply to SwordSparks [2018-10-26 16:57:49 +0000 UTC]

Eeeyup

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EveryAlternateEnding [2018-10-25 14:36:01 +0000 UTC]

Y'know, I learned in animal bioscience class that there are two criteria for an animal to be considered domesticated: humans must have complete control of what they eat, where they live, and who they breed with, and we must have changed the animal at the genetic level for our benefit. All Starlight has to do is use magic to change Sunburst's genetics and she'll literally have a pet. I have a feeling that Stitchwork wouldn't be much harder. Anyhow, good going on this thread of the Miracleverse. I'm really enjoying it.

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StarryOak In reply to EveryAlternateEnding [2018-10-25 17:30:49 +0000 UTC]

Oh my god, that's... wow.

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MightyMewtron [2018-10-25 12:28:09 +0000 UTC]

damn, so in this universe luna and celestia just brutally shot down the option for starlight to be twilight's student..i just assumed twilight never asked bc of distractions and anxieties

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StarryOak In reply to MightyMewtron [2018-10-25 17:32:49 +0000 UTC]

No; they did actually allow her to be Twilight's student as in canon; I headcanon it took place in that montage of friendship; after all, would Twilight take any student on without telling Celestia?
It's part of my headcanon; remember; everything before Flurry Heart's birth is the show's canon and moves from there.
She just never got past passing the first lesson because of everything that happened and never learned any of the lessons she did in canon.

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MightyMewtron In reply to StarryOak [2018-10-26 00:21:44 +0000 UTC]

ohhhh, i forgot exactly when she became an official student tbh. makes sense :V

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StarryOak In reply to MightyMewtron [2018-10-26 00:22:52 +0000 UTC]

we only know that twilight wanted to, some time takes place where that montage of friendship happened, and then by Flurry's birth, she was officially her student. Given the 11-12 months of pony pregnancies...

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BC-LS [2018-10-25 02:43:42 +0000 UTC]

"ponies who hadn't figured out their talents were punished by society." She wasn’t exactly wrong in that sense because it’s like when DT/SS/SR called the CMC 'blank flanks' like it was something disturbing or disgusting.

Do you ship Starlight and Double Diamond?

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StarryOak In reply to BC-LS [2018-10-25 02:44:28 +0000 UTC]

No, this is the disliked ships universe; what do you think i think of it if i included it?

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BC-LS In reply to StarryOak [2018-10-25 02:50:06 +0000 UTC]

I don’t know, reverse psychology I guess?

Like, I know you’re not a fan of StarBurst so I thought that since you mentioned the other shipping, you were okay with it...

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StarryOak In reply to BC-LS [2018-10-25 02:50:44 +0000 UTC]

i don't hate it and in fact i headcanon it happened in any canon, but was not a good or healthy relationship

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BC-LS In reply to StarryOak [2018-10-25 03:04:08 +0000 UTC]

I see now. Thank you. (Sorry for so many questions lately  )

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StarryOak In reply to BC-LS [2018-10-25 03:04:44 +0000 UTC]

it's perfectly fine

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BC-LS In reply to StarryOak [2018-10-25 03:05:51 +0000 UTC]

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Viist [2018-10-25 02:07:48 +0000 UTC]

Ahem 

what the fuck is going on

also rip Double Diamond 

also Starlight please stop treating sunburst like an object

im surprised she didn't use magic to manipulate shines again 

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StarryOak In reply to Viist [2018-10-25 02:08:47 +0000 UTC]

what do you think is the fuck going on?

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Viist In reply to StarryOak [2018-10-25 02:15:39 +0000 UTC]

Starlight cronically lying and manipulating her daughter into learning weird stilted lessons she doesn't actually get.

also I see this takes place after the mane 7 have been "united"

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StarryOak In reply to Viist [2018-10-25 02:16:48 +0000 UTC]

yep
she repeats what was told to her about what makes a good pony without understanding why those points are important or even what they truly mean

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Viist In reply to StarryOak [2018-10-25 02:25:06 +0000 UTC]

It's scary as hell. I'm worried about shines mental health

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StarryOak In reply to Viist [2018-10-25 02:25:46 +0000 UTC]

well the very fact that she's confused by her mother's logic is a good start

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AmrasFelagund [2018-10-25 01:50:26 +0000 UTC]

Starlight, you really shouldn't tell lies to your daughter. It's bad enough that you cast spells on her and her father to make them more suggestible or even completely hypnotized, but feeding Stitchwork a load of horse-apples about why you ground down on that particular village...


Also, oh no Double Diamond died D:


But Starlight has two fathers, yay my headcanon is spreading

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StarryOak In reply to AmrasFelagund [2018-10-25 02:08:29 +0000 UTC]

But it would be bad to tell the truth!

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Strawberry-Spritz [2018-10-25 01:42:03 +0000 UTC]

Starlight S o h e l p m e 

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StarryOak In reply to Strawberry-Spritz [2018-10-25 01:43:28 +0000 UTC]

So help you what?~

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LydiaPrower8 In reply to StarryOak [2018-10-25 18:16:16 +0000 UTC]

She's rehearsing a scene for the upcoming musical 'Put That Thing Back Where It Came From Or So Help Me'.

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StarryOak In reply to LydiaPrower8 [2018-10-25 18:27:21 +0000 UTC]

Heehee~

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Strawberry-Spritz In reply to StarryOak [2018-10-25 01:45:53 +0000 UTC]

If she don't start telling the truth I'mma fight

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StarryOak In reply to Strawberry-Spritz [2018-10-25 02:14:31 +0000 UTC]

but it is the truth

a truth

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