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Description "Tes plumes sont si douces et délicates."
"Y-yeah, I g-guess I-*wings stiffen*"
"Tes ailes sont soudainement très tendues maintenant, tu sais? Suis-je trop brutale? Veux-tu que je m'arrête?"
"No, no, don't stop, I just.. I guess I just got a kink in my wings or something...."
"Tu as l'air de rougir, mon canari"
"No I'm not! *blushing harder*"

Awkward mid preening wingboners are awkward. For translation purposes, or at least, what she's intended to be saying and not whatever mangling Google Translate has done to the language: "Your feathers are so soft and delicate." "Your wings are suddenly very tense now, you know. Am I too rough? Do you want me to stop?" "You seem to be blushing, my canary. "
I ship these two like Fed-ex. You have no idea how hard I ship this. It's just such an interesting pairing, and I kind of like it more than any of the other possible pairings suggested by the official Next Genception as the end goal. Starburst and Prism just doesn't work for me and seems kinda boring, Fletcher... I just don't particularly care about him, unfortunately, and I don't want to ship one of the main ponies of the Kilalaverse with someone I don't care about or know that well, and Del and Creme work much better, although StarxDel is my favorite of the 'canon' pairings, it's not my bag and it's not interesting enough to me. But on the other hand, these two have an interesting dynamic. Dove being obsessed with wings, and Starburst's own impressive wingspan combine at the start to make it fun from the beginning, especially because Dove hasn't got a whole good grasp on personal space, so it starts out with an interesting idea; a well meaning but personal space lacking wing lover and Starburst, a bit of a more rough around the edges girl. And we've seen that they work well together and Starburst enjoys her company, so it's not a situation where Dove is forcing herself on Starburst, who isn't interested. So I ship it.
Beyond that, the idea for this is that Dove and Star finally got close enough for Star to let Dove preen her feathers after a bit of a rough day, but not in a relationship yet. Both of them have a mutual crush, and, well, since Dove doesn't quite have the same standards for personal contact, her preening is a bit.... not forceful, but a bit touchy. So when she starts preening, she gets her hooves all over Starburst, on her flank to keep the wing steady, and the other to hold up the wing, and when she starts preening, Starburst finds her wings wanting to stand at attention and she's completely embarrassed, but Dove doesn't notice... or does she? I don't know, but either way, she does see the blushing, whether she noticed her wings stiffening as a sign of attraction isn't clear to me and I'd rather leave it open.

Starburst and Dove are both owned by and I hope this isn't a bother or anything, and if it is, I can take it down ^-^. I just love your characters and especially these two.

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Comments: 53

StarryOak In reply to ??? [2019-12-07 13:14:27 +0000 UTC]

No thank you, I’m sorry.

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BleoDraws In reply to StarryOak [2019-12-07 13:32:44 +0000 UTC]

Oof ok then

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StarryOak In reply to BleoDraws [2019-12-07 13:49:39 +0000 UTC]

Sorry.

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BleoDraws In reply to StarryOak [2019-12-07 14:21:44 +0000 UTC]

it's oki
i won't force u anyway :3

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StarryOak In reply to BleoDraws [2019-12-07 21:47:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you 

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BleoDraws In reply to StarryOak [2019-12-08 07:07:59 +0000 UTC]

Np

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ABB0002 [2019-12-07 08:11:02 +0000 UTC]

Cute

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samutrai [2018-04-28 22:49:48 +0000 UTC]

just so you dont need to search for those France words

"Your feathers are so sweet and delicate."
"Y-yeah, I g-guess I-*wings stiffen*"
"Your wings are suddenly very tense now, you know, am I too brutal, do you want me to stop?"
"No, no, don't stop, I just.. I guess I just got a kink in my wings or something...."
"You seem to blush, my canary"
"No I'm not! *blushing harder*"

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StarryOak In reply to samutrai [2018-04-29 00:51:46 +0000 UTC]

ok~

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mrredexorcist [2017-06-26 11:51:26 +0000 UTC]

I ship it

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TchinySparkleMuffins [2016-01-06 15:23:27 +0000 UTC]

Which are your Kilalaverse ships? (Sorry if i bothered you)

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InesTheLostAngel [2015-10-06 10:33:02 +0000 UTC]

THis pic is truly adorable and really...well...meh gonna keep that word to me e//w//e
But I know I'll look like overreacting,and you maybe don't truly care,but you did some mistakes in the french dialogue...hehe...
Sorry ;^;
BUT I STILL LIKE THE PIC I TRULY DO <3

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StarryOak In reply to InesTheLostAngel [2015-10-06 11:49:18 +0000 UTC]

Could you tell me what to change for it to be more accurate?

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InesTheLostAngel In reply to StarryOak [2015-10-06 15:12:39 +0000 UTC]

Of course!
Just to tell you,they are two versions,
I can tell that the first one is more for your text than the second.

First ver. :
"Tes plumes sont si douces et délicates."
"Tes ailes sont soudainement très tendues maintenant,tu sais?Suis-je trop brutale?Veux-tu que je m'arrête?"
"Tu as l'air de rougir,mon canari"

Second ver. :
"Vos plumes sont si douces et délicates"
"Vos ailes sont soudainement très tendues maintenant,vous savez?Suis-je trop brutale?Voulez-vous que je m'arrête?"
"Vous avez l'air de rougir mon canari."

I'm glad if I bring any help to your text :3

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StarryOak In reply to InesTheLostAngel [2015-10-06 15:56:03 +0000 UTC]

....Can you repeat that, if slower... I'm a bit confused DX I'm not brain all the time.

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InesTheLostAngel In reply to StarryOak [2015-10-06 17:22:19 +0000 UTC]

It's okay :3
I know that it's gonna be total WTF for you.
But let me give you an example.

if French,we use the "Tu" for people who know each other very well like 2 friends,just like in the pic.Kay?
If we had to use the "Vous" then the two characters wouldn't know each other that much.
Because we use the "Vous" for people who don't truly know each other or just for high society respect(did I say it right?)
Do you still follow what I mean? ;

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StarryOak In reply to InesTheLostAngel [2015-10-06 21:00:43 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhh. Thanks ^-^ If there are any errors, blame is officially passed on to you.... kidding, but really, thanks

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InesTheLostAngel In reply to StarryOak [2015-10-06 21:29:35 +0000 UTC]

Hehe I take responsabilities if they are some errors~
You're very welcome!

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GiihMlpSilva [2015-08-09 22:58:57 +0000 UTC]

Hi ahm ... I can do base and give you credits ... clear whether it was not uncomfortable and not okay ^^and drawing many strategic ta very ... Wonderful *-*     

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cristalfox24 [2015-07-30 20:08:49 +0000 UTC]

uuughhh                           gaaaayy                  

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Kawaiiite In reply to cristalfox24 [2015-08-11 19:04:55 +0000 UTC]

uuuugh                 straight

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quentin992 In reply to cristalfox24 [2015-07-31 04:33:45 +0000 UTC]

Cool

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bonzi-bon-bon In reply to cristalfox24 [2015-07-30 21:27:59 +0000 UTC]

MAH ICON                                         

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Fra-chan-18 [2015-07-20 11:49:35 +0000 UTC]

wow so bootiful

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StarryOak In reply to Fra-chan-18 [2015-07-21 07:04:21 +0000 UTC]

Booty-full?

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Fra-chan-18 In reply to StarryOak [2015-07-21 09:09:24 +0000 UTC]

No XDI sue it Like "beautiful"! Sorry

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StarryOak In reply to Fra-chan-18 [2015-07-21 14:40:42 +0000 UTC]

I was joking too XD

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Fra-chan-18 In reply to StarryOak [2015-07-21 14:41:00 +0000 UTC]

ah sorry XD

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Yaaaco17 [2015-07-20 08:53:32 +0000 UTC]

It must be better than any other Star's ship!

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Vennyriz22 [2015-07-20 00:16:14 +0000 UTC]

This my second favorite shipping for Starburst after DelBurst

This is so cute :3

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StarryOak In reply to Vennyriz22 [2015-07-20 00:22:21 +0000 UTC]

Delburst is my favorite of the suggested pairings, it's fun, I just like Del and Creme more and Star and Dove more.

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DreamCatcher1247 [2015-07-19 15:49:20 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE HOW U DREW THE WING!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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karkovice1 [2015-07-19 14:39:17 +0000 UTC]

She probably learned Fancy from her mother(Rarity?).

Is it me, or do all Pegasi become aroused when they get their wings preened by somepony else?

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StarryOak In reply to karkovice1 [2015-07-19 17:09:25 +0000 UTC]

Trixie, actually, and only if they're romantically interested in them, family preening family or mother and daughter doesn't do that.

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Mikalageo In reply to karkovice1 [2015-07-19 16:02:37 +0000 UTC]

It's actually Trixie and an unknown prench Pegasus stallion

in the Kilalaverse Rarity is shipped with Spike

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karkovice1 In reply to Mikalageo [2015-07-19 20:28:29 +0000 UTC]

And they have two kids, whom I find absolutely LOVABLE.

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Mikalageo In reply to karkovice1 [2015-07-19 23:27:30 +0000 UTC]

Yup ^^

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1ShockTherapy1 [2015-07-19 05:18:06 +0000 UTC]

The orange one has a ate ass face 

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StarryOak In reply to 1ShockTherapy1 [2015-07-19 05:43:29 +0000 UTC]

???

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kianamai [2015-07-19 00:57:33 +0000 UTC]

Kyuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute Great job on this!!!

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StarryOak In reply to kianamai [2015-07-19 01:15:18 +0000 UTC]

You like it? 8DDDD I was worried you'd be annoyed by me shipping them instead of the official next gen pairings DX. It sounds silly now, but I assume you don't mind?

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kianamai In reply to StarryOak [2015-07-19 21:20:59 +0000 UTC]

I love it

And no not at all! The purpose of my whole universe thing is for people to interpret it how they want to with the info I give them. I love seeing what you guys come up with no matter what it is And I really do think these two are good together

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StarryOak In reply to kianamai [2015-07-21 06:29:21 +0000 UTC]

I may draw more of them and a brood of little hellspawn foals. Because I flat out LOVE this couple.

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Gunter2000 [2015-07-19 00:34:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you madam

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StarryOak In reply to Gunter2000 [2015-07-19 00:40:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for what?

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Mr-sonaze [2015-07-18 21:21:41 +0000 UTC]

I love the Starburst and starfall ship xD

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StarryOak In reply to Mr-sonaze [2015-07-18 22:50:09 +0000 UTC]

starfall?

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Mr-sonaze In reply to StarryOak [2015-07-19 01:46:55 +0000 UTC]

Look him up on her work it's part of a fan child for Trixie before dove came

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L-MASTER [2015-07-18 20:25:26 +0000 UTC]

Sweet XD

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nanoonri [2015-07-18 20:07:31 +0000 UTC]

Cute.

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