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Published: 2006-01-10 18:36:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 416; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 18
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i dont know what posessed me to make this:/but i pout a decent amount of work into it
it started out as a cool earth-planet and green planet in a system, one in front of the other with the sun poking over them both. a beautiful scene in my head but i couldnt get it right in practise
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Szemkhel [2006-01-13 11:55:21 +0000 UTC]
Nice peace of work... but:
Primo: Composition... mayby there is to much, planets... i'm not sure... something is wrong for me.
secundo: This little lens in the center of the screen... were did she came from? there is a star? if so, it realy look unrealistic...
Just my opinion...
tercio: Colours... if this is not finished version... mayby just try for fun, change some colours?
But stil niece peace of work
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Szemkhel In reply to Szemkhel [2006-01-13 12:22:23 +0000 UTC]
1) I ware just imagin that, there is not much sapce betwen them... You know if i see -in my mind - planet i visualize that she is alone in space... some moon (moons) or even star is close - but rest should be placed quite far... - Just my opinion...
2) Yes it look realy preaty with blue planet
3) I know that You tried to take some improve in this "space pictures" kategory stuff - but space its space... dark and cold... in 99%... and in Your other images... i think...
4) NP that why we all meet here
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Statross In reply to Szemkhel [2006-01-14 23:38:23 +0000 UTC]
yes, true. t'is dark and cold..oh so cold thats why we should make an effort to liven it up! lol. maybe not, i'll see. you're right about it being big, however, it would be a bad idea to try and fit more than one planet in as i was going to do.
4) yes it is
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Statross In reply to Szemkhel [2006-01-13 12:09:05 +0000 UTC]
woo! critique! *loves it when people help out*
ok, i'm v ery up for improving this, it definately isnt "finished" but i couldnt think where to go. so maybe you can help
1) what do you mean too many planets? if you mean the weird border theyre not "in" the picture. the idea was to make the border more chaotic but i never got round to it if you mean there are too many in the border, then i shall change
2) haha yeah, it's not awfuly realistc
i just though it looked pretty with the blue planet.
3) colours, ye, you may be right, but culd you expand? because i really am stumped with this, it looks wrong to me too but i cant think specificaly how. well, apart from that the green moon needs changing. lol
4) thanks
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