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SteinWill — Kidnapping in broad daylight
Published: 2009-06-06 20:41:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 3999; Favourites: 52; Downloads: 43
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FullVIew or prepare to be kidnapped!ah Pablo, is out with Murk (the reptile) and Levi (the driver) to finance guerrillas expensives (mainly Murks VERY costly bullets amor piercing bullets) by kidnapping wealthy upper-class businessmen (wich probably wheren't such nice guyes anyway)
This might not be their finest hour when it comes ideology but a guerilla needs to eat!
anyhow sicne they are kidnapping in broad daylight in a urban scene I thought they might be dressed in a bit more casual wear to prevent suspicions.
Edit: do you think the drawing would have looked better if I added inked outline?
Murk (c) ~Illogical-Lynx
Levi (c) ~leviathan248
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Comments: 48
They could be more efficient by kidnapping in bulk with this lovely girl.
www.thomasbus.com/_img/our_bus…
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hahaha I'm.... not so sure how subtle that would be 
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Just write "CITY TOURS" on the side!
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... oh my god that is actually a HILLAROUS IDEA
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I also just got an idea to that I need to write down.
That refers to a school bus. Hey make it a school bus!
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ah fun to hear you like it
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Hello there Stein. Long time I know. I was looking over this image again and noticed you wished some critic.
The colors do run together but that isn't a bad thing necessarily. Some artists use that as their own personal style. I do notice however that the van sort of is lost or flat looking in the picture.
Here is something you might like to try. Line it like you were thinking but make them very thin. You do not even have to make a continuous line. Break it up a bit and only give the suggestion of lineing the images.
Here's the fun part. To make the objects stand out you pick were your shadows are going to be and make those lines just slightly thicker then you previously did. But only on one side of the object. And not over the entire area. Try playing around with it on a copy before you tamper with your original. 
If you darkened the interior of the van your kidnaping fella would also pop right out. You don't have to make a solid black out. Just around the edges and lighten twards the characters.
I hope I was some help. If you feel like taking your lineing further you could match the colors of the object then darken that color for your line's instead of black. You might like the results.
Its still a great illistration if you decide to leave it as is.
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aww thanks alot for such detailed description of how to fix this! 
i've actually gone back now and started fixing it little by little, I hope to post it soon^^ but yea I ended up adding a thin inked lineart as well, and it looks quite abit better allready
but yea I hope to hear from you again, sicne I miss the art jams we used to have..
oh and sorry for the late reply I just like to have this comment in my messagesenter so I could remind myself to fix the drawing^^
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Hey, you got to do what you got to do.
very nice art work.
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haha spoken like a true supporter of the cause!^^
thanks for liking it
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No idea if this rings a bell but it popped back into my head, with slight tweaks here n there based on the pic itself and comments. XP
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Pablo: Quit struggling and this will be done with easily Sir.
Murk: *looks around, placing his hand over his pistol defensively*
CEO: 
Pablo: Let's get him into the van quick- ...
Murk: ...
Pablo: Where the HELL is the van?
-half a block away-
Levi: *hops back into the van, merrily slurping a watermelon slush drink* Mmmm... I feel like I'm forgetting something- OHSHI- 
Pablo: Levi...
Levi: 
Murk: >_>;
-end-
XP~
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What do they do with the victim afterwards?
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uhm probably just putting him in a locked and guarded shed in the middle of the jungle wile they negotigate the release money
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chained to his bed?? will he even have a bed? you know those business men are sooooo spoiled...
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I never mentioned chained to any bed?
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Whoa it looks like a small ambush
Very nice watercolor work as always Stein ! I like their face expressions and poses, picture is very dynamic with them 
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oh you and your naughty thoughts 
thanks I'm quite pleased with the colours but I fair they came out rahter blurry without the inked lineart... do you think I should ink the lineart?
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Me and my naughty thoughts !? My thoughts are not naughty !
I was thinking that maybe they will beat him or kill him or something like that
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ain't you're the hypocrite 
hmm yea I'll see if I can get around to ink it
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Hmm well maybe you're right , sometimes i have naughty thoughts but i've never drawed anything naughty (yet)
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Very nice. I look forward to see what you do with him. Make sure he is "comfortable" for the interrogation.
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thanks mate 
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mah been a bit preocupied lately. If im not studying or reading a manga, im in a ww2 flight simulator shooting down bombers and stuff.
I will get my ass online eventually, dont worrie
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Great artwork; placing an inked outline will depend on who you'd like to 'flesh out' or emphasize -- oh, forgot to mention: nice details on the fabrics
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oh why thank you
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Great job Stein
Oh, btw, what might interest you is this show called Ultimate Warrior on Spike TV and todays episode was a guerrilla group one with the Taliban V.S. IRA and the IRA won for Taliban tatics are based on hitting large targets, not small ones like the IRA does.
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*watches the show* 
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its a bizarre one, but has that interesting to watch feel.
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hehe spoken like a true kidnapper
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Ah, yes, the kidnapping of wealthy, snobbish people. An oldie, but, a goodie.
Love it, man. Awesome work on the poses and expressions.^^
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Ahhh good to hear some support of our cause here! perhaps you are our hidden informer
but yea thanks for the favorite!
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I just might be...
You're very welcome, you deserve it.
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This look cool. < . > I sure would put up a good fight if same one was trying to kidnapped me.
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well then, I'll just have to remeber to bring with some chlorophyll to knock you out
thanks for the comment mate
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Your welcome.
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are you going to make a sequel showing him i dunno like, uh, gagged and bound to a chair?
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hahaha
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I guess, a sack over the head as they carry him over the shoulder and then thrown and locked into a shack
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maybe your idea first and in an alternate ending, my idea
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