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zenaoadalat7676 [2004-09-06 22:32:54 +0000 UTC]

Hm, well the first thing I seen as soon as the page loaded was that the picture doesn't show a point of focus...basically, what you wanted us to look at should be emphasized (possibly the tree in the foreground or the sun)...not emphasizing this leaves the rest of the picture open and makes us see, just what it is...a whole bunch of trees. Second, the trees are in too much of a low density packing to be considerred...'deep' in the woods, whether it is or not...and the emotion of the title shows emphasis, meaning that if is was light in the woods, you should emphasize the brightness, if it was dark, you would emphasize the darkness, therefor exagerating the brightness or darkness as it is, there are many other ways to do it, but the picture did not match what the title made me expect, which can be good, but in this case was not...Please take this critique lightly, I am only trying to open a door that will show you your own potential

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