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Stormskulls — Betting with Francis Part 1 --Germany x reader--
Published: 2011-11-04 16:56:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 9977; Favourites: 218; Downloads: 80
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Description This is not only my first ever reader insert it is also my first fan fic and my first writing of this genre. Please be kind.... but still honest.

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"What are you doing?" Ludwig's deep voice sounded behind you making you jump.

"Me? Oh nothing." You said as you returned to reading the book you had brought over with you. It was the third time you were reading it and it was starting to get a little boring, but it was the ony decent thing you had.

"Why are you in my house?" He asked his W's turning to V's with his thick German accent.

"Feliciano invited me over but he had to go leave to...uh..." Your voice trailed off as you tried to find the last part of your lie.

"Why is that idiot inviting people over to my house?"  he muttered under his breath

You shrugged and returned to your book, unsure as to what you should do. You honestly hoped that He would never figure out that that the real reason why you were here was because you had lost a bet with Francis and thus had to do what he had requested for the day. At the time you had been so sure you would win, and now you were regretting it. You just wished he would tell you...  

You placed your book down and looked up at Ludwig

"So do you have any good books I could borrow?" You asked curiously. He had to have more than the ones you had heard Feliciano ranting about and you were quite honestly fed up with the main character in this one at the moment.

"Nien." He said with a small laugh "You are not permitted to see my book collection."

You raised a questioning bow "Whyever not?"

Ludwig just shook his head as a response and walked out of the living room.

"Where are you going?" You asked curiously.

"None of your business." He replied offhandedly

You sulked for a moment before going sitting down and pretending to read. You flipped the page of your book and looked at the page seeing only the writing on the page. With this task on your mind you couldn't concentrate on the written world; you were stalling and you knew it. With a sigh you stood out of the chair, placed your book in the seat and followed in the direction Ludwig had gone.

You walked into the kitchen to find Ludwig staring into his fridge.

"Where the hell did Feliciano put it?" He mumbled to himself angerly.

You cleared your throat and Ludwig turned his head towards you. "Ja?" He asked

You opened your mouth and stumbled over the words Francis had told you to say to him. you spoke slowly and tried your best not to mispronounce anything.

"Ich bin hier fur dich ges-geschickt." you had no idea what you had just said and you watched Ludwig--hoping for a translation.  

A small smirk toyed with his face before he let out a small huff. He closed the fridge, stood to his full height, turned around and placed his hands on his hips.

"So you lost a bet with Francis did you?" He asked, somewhat amused. You looked at him unsure of what to say. "What did you bet about?" He asked as he took a step closer. You stood speechless what had you said? "Just like Francis." Ludwig scoffed "Sending someone else to do what he was supposed to" He paused for a moment "But I guess I can have more fun with you than him."  He gave one nod "much better than cleaning Feliciano's room"

"What?" you looked at him, thoroughly confused.

"Why don't you follow me and find out." He asked as he left the kitchen.
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Comments: 266

IShadowstarI [2011-11-25 20:12:33 +0000 UTC]

NEXT ONE! ILOVE IT !

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Stormskulls In reply to IShadowstarI [2011-12-03 09:23:23 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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kanameitatchi09 In reply to ??? [2011-11-21 03:58:16 +0000 UTC]

ewe I wanna see the next one!

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Stormskulls In reply to kanameitatchi09 [2011-11-21 04:02:37 +0000 UTC]

awww! I'm so happy with how many people are commenting!
I'll get the next part out as soon as I can (after the 12 votes of course...though I am becoming somewhat impatient so I may start writing before then...)

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kanameitatchi09 In reply to Stormskulls [2011-11-21 04:09:36 +0000 UTC]

yay~!! >w< I shall be waiting >w>

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ninjagirl140 In reply to ??? [2011-11-20 22:51:55 +0000 UTC]

i whant the next ch.

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Stormskulls In reply to ninjagirl140 [2011-11-20 22:59:46 +0000 UTC]

haha thanks! If you would like you can vote in my most recent journal entry to help me decide on a small plot part... XD

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ninjagirl140 In reply to Stormskulls [2011-11-20 23:48:34 +0000 UTC]

ya.
and welcome.

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Stormskulls In reply to ninjagirl140 [2011-11-21 03:25:39 +0000 UTC]

awesome thanks!

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JHO14 In reply to ??? [2011-11-14 04:39:42 +0000 UTC]

waaaaait, before u post the next chappie....*runs to get tissue papers* okay, im good. AND ACTION!

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Stormskulls In reply to JHO14 [2011-11-14 16:09:17 +0000 UTC]

haha! XD
If you would like to you can vote on my most recent journal entry to decide a small part of part 2. I would like a total of 12 votes before continuing the part. XD

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JHO14 In reply to Stormskulls [2011-11-14 22:22:59 +0000 UTC]

*goes to do it right now*

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Stormskulls In reply to JHO14 [2011-11-14 22:26:16 +0000 UTC]

woot woot!

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jessica3932 In reply to ??? [2011-11-10 06:21:16 +0000 UTC]

*nose bleed* so meany dirty ways this could go .....I LOVE IT

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Stormskulls In reply to jessica3932 [2011-11-10 06:43:21 +0000 UTC]

haha thanks! XD

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LudiILuvSausage [2011-11-08 18:54:22 +0000 UTC]

more more more! plz! i love it! i was giggleing in my seat as my friend/sisters babysitter was stareing at me like i was nuts!

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Stormskulls In reply to LudiILuvSausage [2011-11-08 20:33:34 +0000 UTC]

haha I'm gad you liked it! XD

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LudiILuvSausage In reply to Stormskulls [2011-11-08 21:38:51 +0000 UTC]

more plllllzzzzz!!!

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Stormskulls In reply to LudiILuvSausage [2011-11-08 22:19:20 +0000 UTC]

haha for sure!

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Anime140 [2011-11-08 05:25:42 +0000 UTC]

Make a part 2~! xD
nice job

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Stormskulls In reply to Anime140 [2011-11-08 05:27:10 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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Anime140 In reply to Stormskulls [2011-11-08 05:28:22 +0000 UTC]

^_^ no problem.

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oOstormysoulOo In reply to ??? [2011-11-08 03:14:16 +0000 UTC]

Wow! This is actually pretty good!
Congratulations on making you first fanfic a success! ^^
(PS While I'm certain this will be a good fanfic nonetheless,
I can't help but wonder if this is gong to turn out 'fun'...
Francis style fun.
If you get what I mean....)

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Stormskulls In reply to oOstormysoulOo [2011-11-08 04:39:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! XD
(lol you'll have to wait and see! XD )

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oOstormysoulOo In reply to Stormskulls [2011-11-08 23:16:04 +0000 UTC]

@-@
Well.... then post the next chapter soon...

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Stormskulls In reply to oOstormysoulOo [2011-11-08 23:20:55 +0000 UTC]

I've started on it!

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InuShiro14 [2011-11-06 06:41:13 +0000 UTC]

Holy crud this is awesome!! :'D
I love this!
Germany is so in character...
I love you!! :'D

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Stormskulls In reply to InuShiro14 [2011-11-06 06:45:44 +0000 UTC]

awww thanks! XD I'm glad you like it!

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InuShiro14 In reply to Stormskulls [2011-11-06 07:26:25 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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Zani-Loki [2011-11-06 05:35:32 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, but you are not allowed to use original art as a preview image for your literature submissions, its in DeviantArt's rules as you can see... please remove it before it gets reported.

FAQ #63: What is the policy regarding preview images used for literature submissions?
FAQ #306: Does "Crediting" let me use whatever I want?
FAQ #572: What does deviantART consider "Fan Art" to be?

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Stormskulls In reply to Zani-Loki [2011-11-06 05:56:14 +0000 UTC]

okay thanks!

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zombiekilla21 In reply to ??? [2011-11-06 05:20:13 +0000 UTC]

nothing much i can say other than good job i'm surprised this is your first and what did i say?!?!?!?!

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Stormskulls In reply to zombiekilla21 [2011-11-06 05:30:13 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thanks!

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zombiekilla21 In reply to Stormskulls [2011-11-06 05:33:56 +0000 UTC]

your welcome and WHAT DID I SAY?!?!?!?!?!

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Stormskulls In reply to zombiekilla21 [2011-11-06 06:10:03 +0000 UTC]

w-what? When? *has terrible memory*
In your first comment you said "nothing much i can say other than good job i'm surprised this is your first" It that what you meant? I wasn't sure...

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zombiekilla21 In reply to Stormskulls [2011-11-06 06:19:26 +0000 UTC]

no no sorry for the misunderstanding i mean in the story what were the words i said in german

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Stormskulls In reply to zombiekilla21 [2011-11-06 06:39:23 +0000 UTC]

OH!


lol major fail! It is translated in part 2... sorry 'bout that X_X

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zombiekilla21 In reply to Stormskulls [2011-11-06 20:24:42 +0000 UTC]

lolz it's ok man

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Stormskulls In reply to zombiekilla21 [2011-11-07 09:10:56 +0000 UTC]

hehe...thanks XD

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LittleDhampir13 [2011-11-06 04:07:00 +0000 UTC]

I love it.

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Stormskulls In reply to LittleDhampir13 [2011-11-06 04:53:39 +0000 UTC]

thanks! XD

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FallGirl1229 In reply to ??? [2011-11-06 04:03:15 +0000 UTC]

This is really good for your first fanfic!! I like it, keep up the good work!

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Stormskulls In reply to FallGirl1229 [2011-11-06 04:53:32 +0000 UTC]

thank-you very much!

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FallGirl1229 In reply to Stormskulls [2011-11-06 05:04:06 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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belle99654 In reply to ??? [2011-11-05 21:04:29 +0000 UTC]

this is so amazing for so many first!!! i loves it!

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Stormskulls In reply to belle99654 [2011-11-06 04:53:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much! That means a lot to me! XD

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belle99654 In reply to Stormskulls [2011-11-06 17:56:58 +0000 UTC]

i was vary hype when i type that!

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Poco-Scrittore In reply to ??? [2011-11-05 17:07:43 +0000 UTC]

This is good! 'specially for a first time! I'm excited for part two! ^v^

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Stormskulls In reply to Poco-Scrittore [2011-11-06 04:52:48 +0000 UTC]

awww! Thanks!

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Pickles-n-Bacon In reply to ??? [2011-11-05 16:20:19 +0000 UTC]

I don't know what I just said to Germany but I'm gonna go Google Translate it....
Great story! Love the way you write

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