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This is not only my first ever reader insert it is also my first fan fic and my first writing of this genre. Please be kind.... but still honest.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"What are you doing?" Ludwig's deep voice sounded behind you making you jump.
"Me? Oh nothing." You said as you returned to reading the book you had brought over with you. It was the third time you were reading it and it was starting to get a little boring, but it was the ony decent thing you had.
"Why are you in my house?" He asked his W's turning to V's with his thick German accent.
"Feliciano invited me over but he had to go leave to...uh..." Your voice trailed off as you tried to find the last part of your lie.
"Why is that idiot inviting people over to my house?" he muttered under his breath
You shrugged and returned to your book, unsure as to what you should do. You honestly hoped that He would never figure out that that the real reason why you were here was because you had lost a bet with Francis and thus had to do what he had requested for the day. At the time you had been so sure you would win, and now you were regretting it. You just wished he would tell you...
You placed your book down and looked up at Ludwig
"So do you have any good books I could borrow?" You asked curiously. He had to have more than the ones you had heard Feliciano ranting about and you were quite honestly fed up with the main character in this one at the moment.
"Nien." He said with a small laugh "You are not permitted to see my book collection."
You raised a questioning bow "Whyever not?"
Ludwig just shook his head as a response and walked out of the living room.
"Where are you going?" You asked curiously.
"None of your business." He replied offhandedly
You sulked for a moment before going sitting down and pretending to read. You flipped the page of your book and looked at the page seeing only the writing on the page. With this task on your mind you couldn't concentrate on the written world; you were stalling and you knew it. With a sigh you stood out of the chair, placed your book in the seat and followed in the direction Ludwig had gone.
You walked into the kitchen to find Ludwig staring into his fridge.
"Where the hell did Feliciano put it?" He mumbled to himself angerly.
You cleared your throat and Ludwig turned his head towards you. "Ja?" He asked
You opened your mouth and stumbled over the words Francis had told you to say to him. you spoke slowly and tried your best not to mispronounce anything.
"Ich bin hier fur dich ges-geschickt." you had no idea what you had just said and you watched Ludwig--hoping for a translation.
A small smirk toyed with his face before he let out a small huff. He closed the fridge, stood to his full height, turned around and placed his hands on his hips.
"So you lost a bet with Francis did you?" He asked, somewhat amused. You looked at him unsure of what to say. "What did you bet about?" He asked as he took a step closer. You stood speechless what had you said? "Just like Francis." Ludwig scoffed "Sending someone else to do what he was supposed to" He paused for a moment "But I guess I can have more fun with you than him." He gave one nod "much better than cleaning Feliciano's room"
"What?" you looked at him, thoroughly confused.
"Why don't you follow me and find out." He asked as he left the kitchen.
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Comments: 266
Stormskulls In reply to ??? [2011-11-06 04:52:23 +0000 UTC]
thanks!
(what you said is translated in part two)
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LizDIXVIII In reply to ??? [2011-11-05 06:59:16 +0000 UTC]
AWESOME!!!!!!! please continue~!! ^^ (and congratulations on writing your first fan-fic and it being awesome)
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Stormskulls In reply to LizDIXVIII [2011-11-05 07:06:04 +0000 UTC]
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Yuriko-chan24 In reply to ??? [2011-11-05 05:27:38 +0000 UTC]
this is actually one of the better insert reader fanfics i've read ^^ so far very in character and good job on keeping the inserts of the reader vague and somehow still very descriptive
two things though:
it's Feliciano, just letting you know and if you choose to continue, try to keep the german down to a minimum, i personally feel it takes a fanfic down a notch in quality. what DID the reader say in german anyways? i tried using google translator and it didn't make much sense...something along the lines of "i'm here for you sent ges-"...idk
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Stormskulls In reply to Yuriko-chan24 [2011-11-05 05:42:33 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! That really means a lot to me! I'm working on the next part and I'm not so sure how long it will take me. Much harder than I had imagined.
I tried to use simple German such as yes and no. What she said is translated in the next part (which is why I used that much).
thanks again! XD
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TakuniChan In reply to ??? [2011-11-05 03:58:36 +0000 UTC]
Me: Germany, I'll let you lead in anything. ANYTHING.
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pandaluvingrl In reply to ??? [2011-11-05 03:17:14 +0000 UTC]
PLZZZZZZ continue... if you don't i'll cry... you dont a poor hopeless internet persone do you ;-;
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Stormskulls In reply to pandaluvingrl [2011-11-05 03:20:36 +0000 UTC]
oh no! Never! That would be awful!
I have actually started part 2 and hope to finish it later tonight. XD
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pandaluvingrl In reply to Stormskulls [2011-11-05 15:39:01 +0000 UTC]
YAAAAAAAYYYY your so thoutful and saved me my digital tears :3
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Stormskulls In reply to pandaluvingrl [2011-11-06 04:09:39 +0000 UTC]
woot! Hopefully you won't have digital tears though because it's taking me longer than anticipated...
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pandaluvingrl In reply to Stormskulls [2011-11-07 02:08:05 +0000 UTC]
i wont have any as long as you post it :3 i only have so many digital tears in my database (Wtf is this Tron talk coming from? XD)
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Stormskulls In reply to Sibiria-chan [2011-11-05 00:50:51 +0000 UTC]
lolz, I'm working on it now! XD
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harleybot In reply to ??? [2011-11-05 00:23:28 +0000 UTC]
THANK YOU FRANCE
XDD
Im happy he put me in this situation! XD
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Stormskulls In reply to harleybot [2011-11-05 00:51:53 +0000 UTC]
LOL! XD
I'm glad. (Of course France would make a bet involving 1 day slavery to the winner ^_^ )
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harleybot In reply to Stormskulls [2011-11-05 00:57:52 +0000 UTC]
XD ^^ yay im glad your glad im glad~
my brain! >__< XD
(I can SO see him doing that XDD)
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Stormskulls In reply to harleybot [2011-11-05 01:00:45 +0000 UTC]
well I'm glad your glad I'm glad your glad
XD
(what bet did you loose? *raises eyerbrow* )
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harleybot In reply to Stormskulls [2011-11-05 01:11:02 +0000 UTC]
(._. probably who can flirt the best XDD)
IM GLAD YOUR GLAD IM GLAD YOUR GLAD IM GLAD!
my brain hurts now XDD
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Stormskulls In reply to harleybot [2011-11-05 01:15:42 +0000 UTC]
(tsk tsk tsk. Never take on a professional. I mean honestly who could resist this man? lolz)
I'm glad, your glad, I'm glad, your glad, I'm glad, your glad!
Oh noes! Brain implosion!
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harleybot In reply to Stormskulls [2011-11-05 01:17:48 +0000 UTC]
(EVERYONE CAN RESIST HIM XDD
Im glad, your glad, im glad, your glad, im glad, your glad, im glad!
*Brain explodes*
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Stormskulls In reply to harleybot [2011-11-05 01:22:45 +0000 UTC]
poor poor France. (I love your avatar by the way! XD )
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harleybot In reply to Stormskulls [2011-11-05 01:31:03 +0000 UTC]
Yup XD (Thanks! XD)
ohnoes XD
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Stormskulls In reply to harleybot [2011-11-05 01:34:39 +0000 UTC]
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Stormskulls In reply to harleybot [2011-11-05 02:26:59 +0000 UTC]
Nice!
(I have a bookmark with that on it (but carry on))
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harleybot In reply to Stormskulls [2011-11-05 16:46:06 +0000 UTC]
ikr?
(OK THAT'S JUST AWESOMNESS)
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Stormskulls In reply to harleybot [2011-11-07 09:14:56 +0000 UTC]
haha I thought so. I found it in "Chapter's"
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Midori-San998 In reply to ??? [2011-11-04 23:50:16 +0000 UTC]
...ok, I have to actually like France for once for putting me in this situation. XD
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Stormskulls In reply to Midori-San998 [2011-11-05 00:55:07 +0000 UTC]
lol, awesome. I'm sure will be gad to know!
(by the way though...hetalia makes me ashamed to be 1/4 french XD
Fance just can't be a man can he?------yet somehow I'm so in love with Italy. Oh wait! France is creepy and weird whereas Italy is SOOOOO cute!)
Sorry...random fangirl rant blurb thingy
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Midori-San998 In reply to Stormskulls [2011-11-05 01:16:45 +0000 UTC]
It's ok. Hetalia made me realize Alfred's the reason I'm a bottomless pit. XD And it also made me want the Philippines in the anime...
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Stormskulls In reply to Midori-San998 [2011-11-05 01:20:51 +0000 UTC]
Alfred's so sexy... I'm surprised he's not larger though... XD
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AmbreAnna13 In reply to ??? [2011-11-04 23:08:36 +0000 UTC]
This is really good! Just one little spelling mistake, you spelled it "Jah" when it's supposed to be spelled "Ja"
I really would like you to continue this!!
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Stormskulls In reply to AmbreAnna13 [2011-11-04 23:11:55 +0000 UTC]
oh man! My sister would kill me for that!
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AmbreAnna13 In reply to Stormskulls [2011-11-04 23:42:54 +0000 UTC]
It's OK! I really liked this story, just wanted to point it out
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Stormskulls In reply to AmbreAnna13 [2011-11-05 00:49:14 +0000 UTC]
thanks!
(I fixed it by the way! XD)
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fujoshianimechick In reply to ??? [2011-11-04 23:00:54 +0000 UTC]
I wanna know what happens! Please write moar!!!
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