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Published: 2005-01-11 14:20:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 727; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 286
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Ok, ok, I know, I know - this might be awful.. But pls remember, that this one is my very very first try. This (or something similar) should be a web presentation of a company dealing with packing, labels, etiquettes etc.Pls just tell me, what exactly is wrong and how to improve it...
Many thanx for every critic!
UPDATE (14.I.'05): minor "cosmetic" changes... nothing special in fact
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Dont know why you call it awful.
Its beautiful and professional.....well it may look better if u put some images in the image placeholders
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Hey fols! No other comments? Pls, I would appriciate any constructive critics.
Thanx!
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Ummm, just one idea - maybe bullshit.. but whatever:
how could it look like, if there was a shadow around the whole "image" on web, exactly like in preview picture above?
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podla mna je to dost dobre, neviem co by som robil inak
- tie stvorceky odstupnovane su dobry napad aj pred tym printing works
- okrem toho cervena a siva je moja oblubena kombinacia
- nie je to vtierave, je tam plno volneho miesta
- ale aj tak sa mi najviac lubi (neviem, ci to bol zamer) ze je uplne nevtiravo rozdelena na tri casti (menu/obrazky, vedla to atea/printing a nakoniec news/nieco)
- jedina by som mozno zmenil pismo v menu, ale mozno ani ne, ale urcite by som to zarovnal do stredu tych riadkov
- aaa a este som chcel, ze skus si tam vyskusat dat aj nejake fotky, lebo s nimi to inak vyznie uplne inak, lebo hentie "rasicove" pozadia 
- aha no a mozno som este chcel, ze detaily, ale asi by som sa na ne vykaslal, lebo by to uz nebolo take ciste a zacalo by to byt preplnene
- takze podla mna je to gut, neviem co uz ine dodat
minimalism rules
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Pho, tak teda dik!
OK:
- no chcel som to rozdelit do pseudo 3 stlpcov, ale len tak opticky, teda "akoze"
- co sa tyka tych thumbnailov - stand-by stave budu v grayscale a onmouseover budu cervene (hue/saturation) - tak ako ten vysek hore, takze celkovy layout by nemali pokazit. Plnefarebne budu len po kliknuti v novom okne
- ten obrazok napravo (zatial sedy square) bude tiez nieco take, ale len ako ilustrativny obrazok - iny pri kazdom clanku, na ten sa ani nebude klikat.
Takze tak... a dik za rady!
A Ty si uz konecne vyves tu svoju stranku normalne na server! Ta posledna zelena je fakt dobra (ked tam das tu supku 
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i like it 
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Hmm, sounds good. Btw. thanx!
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