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Edit: added the shadows i had forgotFor this contest: [link]
photo reference used, taken by [link]
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Araless [2012-06-14 22:24:59 +0000 UTC]
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Now it's time for my very first critique! This artwork deserves nothing less...
First of all, I love how much detail you've put into this although it appears to be a speedpaint. There is so much to discover in this beautiful landscape. The wings of the dragon are a real eyecatcher and are leading the eye to other parts of the picture.
You are very skillful at using the right colors. Especially the contrast between the warm natural colors at the lower part of the picture between the cold, hard colors of the upper part. It gives the feeling of perspective and depth to the picture and it makes it less messy but easy to watch, despite all the details!
I think there should be more lighting and shading on the wings of the dragon. Both wings are colored similar, it makes it look unrealistic compared to the rest of the picture.
I'm also missing a shadow underneath the dragon. It looks like he's not really standing on the hill but in the middle of nowhere, as he is only inserted in the background. (Hope it doesn't sound too confusing, I can't explain it very well)
Nethertheless it's an amazing piece of art and the thumbnail really caught my attention! I can see how much effort you've put into this e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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Sunima In reply to Araless [2012-06-15 06:20:40 +0000 UTC]
thankyou very much for the cretique!
i completely forgot the shadows ! OMG! D:
Ill see if i can fix that later, and i agree with the shadings and light on the dragon
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Araless In reply to Sunima [2012-06-15 10:51:21 +0000 UTC]
Very welcome
I saw the picture and I just had to say something.
Oh that would be nice. Most people (including me) are too lazy to edit their pictures XD
But it's great, even without shadows^^
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Esmerra [2013-03-22 12:04:41 +0000 UTC]
The people in front of the dragon are extremely calm as to this view
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AquarianPhotography [2012-11-08 20:14:56 +0000 UTC]
This is beautiful, I absolutely love your style
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Dreamorchid78 [2012-07-27 12:41:12 +0000 UTC]
[link] thank you for this beautiful entry it was the runner up in my Back with a Bang Contest and will be featured for several weeks on my journal.
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ImagineCorgis [2012-06-21 18:50:49 +0000 UTC]
Incredible....I really dont know what to say...
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Vermillionwings [2012-06-19 04:25:16 +0000 UTC]
The landscape is beautiful! What program do you use? I am in awe of this piece. GORGEOUS
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Ristridyn [2012-06-18 11:36:17 +0000 UTC]
Love it, that lovely couple must be having the time of their live! ..... unless they're eaten
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hazefeather [2012-06-16 12:58:33 +0000 UTC]
don't know if it has been pointed out before, but the right wing has one finger too much... also, nice background! I love the little river to the right and the bridge!
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Sunima In reply to hazefeather [2012-06-17 08:40:05 +0000 UTC]
the other finger could be behind the other wing, just not showing
Thankyou
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Galvan1c-Miscr3ation [2012-06-16 04:53:26 +0000 UTC]
Cool, are those skinny tower-like thingies in the background buildings or rock formations? I do not know how you just sit down and DRAW FOR HOURS!!! I'm very antsy, if you can't tell from my comments. I draw in bursts; half hour now, twenty five minutes tomorrow... I can't stay focused very long
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dreamsinstatic [2012-06-16 00:59:41 +0000 UTC]
Your fantastic work has been featured in Friday Night Features .
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wolfhound56200 [2012-06-15 21:00:50 +0000 UTC]
eep ; Holy cow ! that's impressing ! but what is is , exactly , painting , pencils ... ?
I think it's a painting ^^
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Sunima In reply to wolfhound56200 [2012-06-16 08:23:42 +0000 UTC]
its made with photoshop
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wolfhound56200 In reply to Sunima [2012-06-16 15:15:55 +0000 UTC]
anyway , that's great !excellent work !
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