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Published: 2005-01-13 05:56:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 5805; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 1211
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Description This the project i'm currently working with fellow indonesians in our studio, Graveyard Shift, titled Moonlight Highschool. This is the first preview page from the series for our publisher to see. Any critics are greatly welcome, this is a newborn project, so those comments and crits will help us a lot! Hope y'all like this!

I will post the rest of the pages we're doing, so..keep checkin!
All title,concepts and character, copyright GraveyardShift.

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Writer: Alfi Zachkyelle & Prasajadi
Pencils: Alfi Zachkyelle
Inks: Marcellius Rhoald
Colors : Sunny ( me )

-GraveyardShift 2005-
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Comments: 25

tetsuo00 [2006-05-20 10:23:36 +0000 UTC]

wow.... what's color!!!!!!!!!!!!

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MaxximumBob [2005-02-19 05:14:21 +0000 UTC]

your gallery rocks so hard. Man.. i only WISH i could color like that...

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Lyriel-Aelorothi [2005-01-16 15:04:46 +0000 UTC]

Now this looks like a comic I can really skink my fangs into. BRAVO!!

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theCHAMBA [2005-01-15 17:15:06 +0000 UTC]

fwoarh!


the art in this page gives me the chills..

reminds me of a mixture of Battle-chasers and Crimson..

gorgeous shit!

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toushin [2005-01-15 07:42:57 +0000 UTC]

That is an absolutely awesome picture. I myself don't particularly like that the wolf-man has pupils since I've always envisioned them as being without, since they're normally always in a constant state of rage. :3 But that's just me being picky, especially since I love werewolves ('cause I'm also assuming that's what it is. ;o ehehe). *favorites immediately and puts you on watch* Good luck with this project!

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Kit-Manga-Kun [2005-01-14 23:19:36 +0000 UTC]

hey this is awesome! good luck with it, you fellows deserve to go pro

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MincedNiku [2005-01-14 15:01:33 +0000 UTC]

Poor Werewolf. =\ I think it looks great! Your colors are really good and go great with the drawings. The wolf looks a little funny in the second panel on his face, the bottom jaw seems longer than the top. That's the only critique I have though because everything looks awesome. ^_^b

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oyeh [2005-01-14 14:23:54 +0000 UTC]

wah keren ni mah...
nama beken ada
..Alfi Zak. Ones of my fav...

Hei coloring mu bagus bgt...
lagi proyek apa sih ma Alfi?

_My!

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MayYeo [2005-01-14 13:33:41 +0000 UTC]

Your colouring is great! I didn't know you would color this kind of comic. I thoght you were for manga style. This is cool! I love the bounce lights :3

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Kiruakiller [2005-01-14 10:01:57 +0000 UTC]

T_T i loves da colors!!!!!!

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varziel [2005-01-14 09:48:33 +0000 UTC]

damn cool, although it's so... american.

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dbebek [2005-01-14 04:36:50 +0000 UTC]

pewarnaan top. actionnya top. cuman... ada sedikit saran (mungkin juga engga beralasan).. sepertinya.. ini kan lagi seru2nya.. si cowo udah tegang di serang sama srigala laper >_<(apa coba) tapi kok in middle panel kayanya si cowo withdraw bladenya dgn santai and khusuk kaya engga ada nervous2 ato desperate-nya? *sebelomnya maap. emang kaya gue ahli aja. tapi anggep aje gue pembaca yg lagi sewot.. gitu kali ya? mohon maap lahir dan batin..

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tymeart [2005-01-14 00:28:21 +0000 UTC]

you color very well!

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fairychild4117 [2005-01-13 22:48:34 +0000 UTC]

very good. i am very impressed. my parents won't even let us get art software on our computer, and my mum is now using the scanner in her class. the elderly mad are bloody infuriating! sorry, just kind of went on a rampage there. tres tres tres beau, and tres beau thrice again! i look forward to seeing the completed project.

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Myuki [2005-01-13 16:05:03 +0000 UTC]

Hideki, very very beautiful first page. A few things I noticed right away... 1, the very first scene, the man looks like he should be holding something, but he is not. If he is just showing his fist in rage, perhaps Alfi might want to think about re-drawing it so it doesn't look like he is frozen Also, second scene, the wolf looks very very cartoon.. in fact his face does not fit very well with the rest of this page. His muzzle looks a bit too stout, and small for such a big face and teeth. In the fourth scene the blood looks fake near the top, like it is just drops of pink bubble gum, perhaps making it very red like the wolf's cut! Also, fifth scene, the girl... she is drawn very well but if she is suppose to be shrieking in terror, it is not very noticable... only because her face should be more painful... not just tears... maybe draw her eyes closed? also, the sleeve of her jacket looks very very skinny, either that or her head is slightly too big Okay Hideki, sorry I am not a professional critque, this is just what I noticed from an artist stand point. Your team is very talented! The inking is great, and the coloring is nice too, very different than other coloring I have seen you do.

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Reza-ilyasa [2005-01-13 14:06:09 +0000 UTC]

faster
harder
owyeaahh..!

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SunnyGho In reply to Reza-ilyasa [2005-01-13 14:50:28 +0000 UTC]

apaan sih lo 'il! kaga ada komen yang bagusan yah???

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waydre [2005-01-13 12:14:32 +0000 UTC]

looks promising.
again, will it be in english? how far along is it? can't wait to see more!

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ethe [2005-01-13 10:29:36 +0000 UTC]

huiiiiiii keren pisannnn
hihihi cuma mau komen, darahnya kayak sirup cherry XD wakaka maap...

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shadowssurroundme [2005-01-13 10:27:43 +0000 UTC]

Extraordinary colours dude....will it be in english?

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mizuai [2005-01-13 10:13:10 +0000 UTC]

warnanya uda keren si saran aku si tambahin fill lightnya lg XD supaya ga monoton soalnya kalo warnanya gelap2 gini kayanya sama smua gt ;;;

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solitarian [2005-01-13 10:01:10 +0000 UTC]

magnificent!

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darkeva [2005-01-13 09:19:42 +0000 UTC]

looks awsome dood.

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airold [2005-01-13 07:48:05 +0000 UTC]

what a great jobยกยกยกยกยกยกยกยกยกยกยกยกยกยกยกยกยกยกยก

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BBH [2005-01-13 06:17:10 +0000 UTC]

wow I love the coloring and the style!! ;3;

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