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Published: 2003-07-20 19:04:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 72; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Description I have always had this "amazing" empathic ability. Took me years to come to terms with it, and sort what was truly myself from what I was picking up from others. This poem is about one side of that ability. Believe or not... that's up to you. I know I've been right one hell of a lot more than I've been wrong. I've scared enough people with it. People don't like being around someone they can't hide things from.

There's a certain someone, that when they read this, is going to think it's directed at them. When, in fact, it's directed at many of the people in my life.
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oceanborn [2003-08-20 15:24:38 +0000 UTC]

awesome sun.

I am the same way, so every piece of this poem speaks to me. People hate that you're always right...they hate knowing you know them so well...and sometimes, they leave you in favor of people who don't know them so well.

Sucks.

A gift and a curse

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brice-c [2003-08-16 04:40:39 +0000 UTC]

Simple but well done! nice work..

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roses [2003-07-21 05:27:56 +0000 UTC]

O... M... G...

Amy... the truth in this... is..... Superb.

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christopher5 [2003-07-21 04:44:41 +0000 UTC]

great job! i love it when i can come up w/ stuff like this, i know i could fit it in a song easily

- Christopher

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jilliebel [2003-07-20 22:45:56 +0000 UTC]



This is an all but too familiar feeling, but I hate rhyming poems, it always seems too forced, and it almost always distracts me from the content..the fact that you split the lines up just emphasizes that ... sigh! BUT I read it, and I thought about it, and I studied it, and I love it anyways.

You're an amazing writer, and beyond that- a good person.

Glad to see something from you again!!

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xtremez [2003-07-20 19:52:09 +0000 UTC]

I've missed you, glad to see a new post................. I like it......fits so many things................h-m-m-m-m-m makes one think. But that is somewhat the objective though, right? Nice piece hon.............!!!

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haterofworlds [2003-07-20 19:07:10 +0000 UTC]

hmmmmmm i like it but there is something just a tad off.......excellent poem tho

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