sunrunner68 In reply to hardlyou [2004-02-17 00:41:15 +0000 UTC]

I thought about making it longer, but it describes me best short. Because that's the way I am... short and to the point. That's why all the metaphoric poetry doesn't come to me very easily... I'm very cut and dry.

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hardlyou In reply to sunrunner68 [2004-02-17 01:57:46 +0000 UTC]

i dont really suggest making it too much longer, just fleshing it out. lol. Im definitly not going to make you its just a suggestions

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sunrunner68 In reply to hardlyou [2004-02-17 02:20:22 +0000 UTC]

LOL

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Sipowicz In reply to hardlyou [2004-02-17 00:29:17 +0000 UTC]

I disagree, sometimes brevity is best. You've said what u wanted/needed to say, why use twice as many words to achieve the same goal?!?

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hardlyou In reply to Sipowicz [2004-02-17 01:56:00 +0000 UTC]

i agree in a sense, but this seems almost too abrupt to me. I know that poetry should be simplified, but sometimes i think there is a necesity to supply more than just a core skeleton.

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