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Published: 2004-04-30 02:15:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 40; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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I wrote this in the car on the way home from work tonight. Scribbled on an envelope that I found in my visor...Another short one, but it says everything I needed to say...
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Brief, concise, to the point, like how you wanted it. Nice 
I have nothing against lengthy compsitions, but i prefer reading shorter ones.
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Most of my writing is very short, though not as short as this one. And I agree with you on the reading portion too.... I don't like reading something that loses the meaning from having to wade through all the pretty (or petty) words.
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needs additions, to be honest. it works as is, but...yeah. add more!
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Most of my poetry is short and to the point... because that is how I am. I'm generally not one to use 100 words where 10 will suffice.
I know it could be longer, but as I said... it says everything I wanted to say.
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i like the idea of roots causing existing cracks to become bigger, rather than having created them itself
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One just doesn't make it past 30 without some cracks.... and dents and bruises....
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sometimes i just think i'd be resonably happy to make it to 30
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yeah, but i need to try to get more enjoyment while i get there
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well hon... my only advice would be, and I quote, "Just do it!"
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