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Published: 2004-04-30 02:15:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 40; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description I wrote this in the car on the way home from work tonight. Scribbled on an envelope that I found in my visor...

Another short one, but it says everything I needed to say...
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roses23 [2004-05-18 07:11:17 +0000 UTC]

Brief, concise, to the point, like how you wanted it. Nice We are alike on that point, i mean. i can speak on and on and on about how i feel but when it comes to writing it down on prose or poetry, i end up editng and editing it to not make it so wordy.

I have nothing against lengthy compsitions, but i prefer reading shorter ones.

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sunrunner68 In reply to roses23 [2004-05-18 10:39:00 +0000 UTC]

Most of my writing is very short, though not as short as this one. And I agree with you on the reading portion too.... I don't like reading something that loses the meaning from having to wade through all the pretty (or petty) words.

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Vhojre [2004-04-30 20:32:17 +0000 UTC]

needs additions, to be honest. it works as is, but...yeah. add more!

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sunrunner68 In reply to Vhojre [2004-04-30 21:04:10 +0000 UTC]

Most of my poetry is short and to the point... because that is how I am. I'm generally not one to use 100 words where 10 will suffice.

I know it could be longer, but as I said... it says everything I wanted to say.

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chiisu [2004-04-30 02:19:31 +0000 UTC]

i like the idea of roots causing existing cracks to become bigger, rather than having created them itself

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sunrunner68 In reply to chiisu [2004-04-30 02:23:44 +0000 UTC]

One just doesn't make it past 30 without some cracks.... and dents and bruises....

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chiisu In reply to sunrunner68 [2004-04-30 02:43:43 +0000 UTC]

sometimes i just think i'd be resonably happy to make it to 30

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sunrunner68 In reply to chiisu [2004-04-30 02:45:38 +0000 UTC]

oh you will...

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chiisu In reply to sunrunner68 [2004-04-30 02:48:55 +0000 UTC]

yeah, but i need to try to get more enjoyment while i get there

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sunrunner68 In reply to chiisu [2004-04-30 02:56:23 +0000 UTC]

well hon... my only advice would be, and I quote, "Just do it!"

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