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Published: 2018-12-24 18:27:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 534; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 0
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For 's "Anger" Task!Fiala was initially the one I intended to showcase for this - but Denny let me know that there's someone he hates so much more.
**This is a fictional situation, an AU where they are adults and didn't know each other before. …. because Shiden and Kiro would never hang out or get this 'friendly'. XD In this AU, they probably never got their powers and got to grow up normally... Shiden has achieved his goal of becoming a detective.
His investigation led him to the grungy biker bar, where his suspect awaits to share information over a few drinks. He knew from the moment he saw the man he would have his work cut out for him.**
Uncleanliness, vulgarity, and ignorance are among the things that bother Shiden the most... Mr. Markov here embodies all of that.
"Practilly" is not a word! He's covered in stains and stinks to high-heaven -- and dear gods, is he crude!
He despises Kiro. He's a sloppy redneck; a greasy, mean, stubborn little man; abrasive, vulgar, disrespectful; an ignorant bully, a reckless fool, a bull-headed drunkard... Shiden hates him so much.
It certainly doesn't help his case that Kiro flirts with Holly relentlessly...
X'D What a great introduction for the character I'm doing next round...
It also irritates him when...
He's pretty easily annoyed and will often give out judgmental looks - but he's mature with how he handles his offenders. He keeps composure and has a good grip on his own feelings, so remains cool most of the time. If someone is really getting on his nerves, he'll drop a subtle insult or make passive-aggressive comments. While he's generally non-confrontational, he is not afraid to speak up when he has a strong opinion about something.
This situation with Kiro might lead Shiden into calling him a "misogynist".
Kiro would be like, "I dunno what you just called me - but I don't like it!" and beat Shiden up. X'D
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12" x 8" - micron pens and graphite pencil
Kiro Markov, Shiden Yukiyama, Fiala Ratigan, & Holly Shepherd / Flowers of Enchantment (c) Zakuro-Kona
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Comments: 18
Drayah [2019-07-19 16:55:54 +0000 UTC]
The two of them REALLY don't get along, do they? I think it's hilarious that you decided to do this and show Kiro in such a negative light here considering that you were going to enroll him in the next round. He's such an interesting character though, because he's so unlikable, yet so likable really? It confuses me But you're just that good at making complex characters!
I can totally understand Shiden's distaste for him, but it's also interesting to know Kiro's perspective too after last round. I love how you did this piece though, with the black and white and the focus on the word bubble and how the dialog flows into itself. Great job!
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SunsetBlazer In reply to Drayah [2019-07-23 16:13:44 +0000 UTC]
No ma'am, not one bit! Haha, thank you; I love having a lot of bad and good traits in all of my characters.
Thanks a bunch!
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Drayah In reply to SunsetBlazer [2019-07-30 18:27:35 +0000 UTC]
It certainly makes them incredibly complex and interesting and I love it!
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Helladelic [2019-01-10 03:29:55 +0000 UTC]
Ooh, I love the way you've executed this piece showing the people and things that anger Shiden here! I like this AU! It's very intersting to see these two interacting! I can see how Shiden and Kiro would clash being so vastly different and Shiden disliking these things he embodies. Great body language here! Shiden doesn't look impressed at all, but doesn't seem like the confrontational type! I'm really looking forward to Kiro's round next and learning more about him! I love how flawed he is, yet he has a soft spot for his kitties!
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SunsetBlazer In reply to Helladelic [2019-01-16 20:21:36 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so, so very much!
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SpaceCastaway [2019-01-01 13:18:46 +0000 UTC]
That's an interesting AU, it would be fun to see more probable futures for them! Shiden really is a decent guy, I'm glad he doesn't humor Kiro, even though it could have won him some favor and maybe valuable information as a detective. It shows Shiden is a character with a spine, and Kiro is just awful I was heartbroken for H/F/S love triangle before, but seeing it in action here makes it only worse ;_;
I love the detail of Denny's cigarette smoke, it's a really nice surreal touch! Awesome job with the inking too!
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SunsetBlazer In reply to SpaceCastaway [2019-01-02 21:18:55 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I had another situation sketched that's true to the story, but this was more to the point. XD Shiden's not quite as.. outspoken, and does humor the pervert, much to his own chagrin. ( which was another thing that made him angry lol) Haha, I feel like I've only showed Kiro's bad sides...which there are a lot of... but, hopefully I can show some redeeming qualities this asshole has next round. XD
Thank you! It's my goal to break hearts with their stories :'D
Thank you so much! I enjoy inking this one ^^
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SpaceCastaway In reply to SunsetBlazer [2019-01-04 20:56:47 +0000 UTC]
Would be cool to read a situation that happens in the story too. Unless you'd rather keep it for the story (then I hope you soon get to finish the story XD)
It seems Kiro will be an intriguing challenge to write since he has so many bad qualities, but it makes the redeeming qualities all more engaging emotionally, if you ask me. "Enjoyable" might not be the right word. Looking forwards to his round!
Break allllll the hearts, yessss!
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SunsetBlazer In reply to SpaceCastaway [2019-01-16 20:19:37 +0000 UTC]
I just might finish that comic too...
Haha, thanks... I'm definitely looking forward to next round!
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Birdhousebirdy [2018-12-31 23:02:30 +0000 UTC]
Oh yiiiikees!! Haha, I had no idea Kiro flirted with Holly.
Poor guy. I get holding it in, though. Trying not to get confrontational...unless provoked to a point.
Great job with the picture!! It looks really amazing.
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SunsetBlazer In reply to Birdhousebirdy [2019-01-01 00:23:49 +0000 UTC]
Haha, yep. After PK, Holly is Kiro's next biggest crush...
Thank you so much!
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rainbow000pegasus [2018-12-26 23:01:10 +0000 UTC]
I like how you placed all the characters that angers him in this piece! I like how you did the smoke from Shiden's cigarette and the hands! The faces look well drawn, expressing their emotions well! Got to give love to those details too on their clothing!
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SunsetBlazer In reply to rainbow000pegasus [2018-12-27 15:34:26 +0000 UTC]
Ah, thank you so very much!!
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dragondoodle [2018-12-24 23:27:32 +0000 UTC]
Can totally see why Kiro would annoy Shiden Loving the way this is black and white, it really works well
Ohhhhh . . . Kiro's next?
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SunsetBlazer In reply to dragondoodle [2018-12-27 15:33:18 +0000 UTC]
Yeeep, definitely.... Haha!
Thank you! I considered coloring it, but thought keeping it greyscale would be more effective - I'm glad you think so too. Yep! I'm really excited to do him. ^^
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ArthurQF [2018-12-24 20:00:55 +0000 UTC]
I like how you did his anger task as an AU for some reason. xD It's an interesting approach and it goes to show how much he hates Kiro. XD I actually like Kiro a lot and am very interested in getting to know him more, especially when I saw Helladelic 's piece where he was hanging out with his cats. XD Anyway, I love Shiden's irritated expression and how he's generally non-confrontational. It's interesting to show many of the things that irk Shiden in this piece! Excellent work done!
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SunsetBlazer In reply to ArthurQF [2018-12-27 15:44:06 +0000 UTC]
Haha, I actually sketched out a canon scene that happens at their New Year's dance, too...(Kiro and Holly go to the dance together -- you can imagine how much that upsets Shiden!)
I thought this AU situation was more effective and to-the-point, though. XD
Thank you, I'm relieved to hear you like Kiro! I've shown mostly the shitty sides of him so far, and admit he isn't the best person... But I especially enjoy his character. Hehe! I love that commision she did of him~
At least his love of kitties is sincere! XD
Thanks so much!
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