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superclone — Go on, Laugh
Published: 2008-11-20 08:08:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 176; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description When you die, I hope you won't be missed
Because while your body rots with age
My mind, my heart, my soul will sing with praise
The scars will fade. (Eventually)
I will no longer self inflict
All the faults and all the blame
That so rightly belonged to you
Because you are my pain
Showering on me, like the rain
It is you
It has always been you
Who put me on a chain
To never stand up, stand fourth
Who demeans me more and more
As I curl up and fade away
You laugh, you always laugh
Your words effect me day to day
You watch me, but you don't see
How you tare me up, I cringe and hide
Leaving me with nothing to say
Go on, Laugh!
As I die a little more inside...
Everyday.
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Comments: 14

Fantasyfairy1 [2008-12-03 19:50:46 +0000 UTC]

One day it will finally be over, and you can finally be free, may that day be soon hun. XX

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superclone In reply to Fantasyfairy1 [2008-12-04 06:39:34 +0000 UTC]

thank you xx

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Ferelwing [2008-11-20 23:29:30 +0000 UTC]

I've felt like that before. I walked away from it and have never really looked back.

Well written hon. It completely expresses those emotions.

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superclone In reply to Ferelwing [2008-11-21 01:29:30 +0000 UTC]

ah thank you.. i usually write things that are better structured but this way seemed appropriate..
haha cant wait til i can walk away
thanks again

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Ferelwing In reply to superclone [2008-11-21 02:46:23 +0000 UTC]



You're welcome.

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superclone In reply to Ferelwing [2008-11-23 10:22:39 +0000 UTC]

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Ferelwing In reply to superclone [2008-11-23 18:52:02 +0000 UTC]

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Nytram12 [2008-11-20 17:19:25 +0000 UTC]

awwwh, somethign wrong or u just felt like writing this?


u used 'curl up and fade away'

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superclone In reply to Nytram12 [2008-11-21 01:32:13 +0000 UTC]

yessss from you i love the line
and well i felt like writing this.. because of a certain person and yer..

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Nytram12 In reply to superclone [2008-11-21 06:45:54 +0000 UTC]

tell me about it on the weekend maybe? if we both on @ th esame time

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superclone In reply to Nytram12 [2008-11-23 10:16:22 +0000 UTC]

yes lets hope we remember

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Nytram12 In reply to superclone [2008-11-23 11:34:59 +0000 UTC]

just reminded u lool

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superclone In reply to Nytram12 [2008-11-23 12:34:21 +0000 UTC]

hehe

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Nytram12 In reply to superclone [2008-11-23 12:39:19 +0000 UTC]

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