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Published: 2009-01-15 03:28:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 141; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 1
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Silence.A deafening roar of a thousand insects
Crawling in your skull
Nesting in your brain
Feeding off your thoughts
Slowly moving through your veins
Drinking every ounce of self control
Until you cannot move at all
Shift a muscle, twitch a finger
Create a sound that will drown them out
Any sound, and they will hide
But you are a prisoner, a victim
Of a predator that is feasting on your being
But you are human and that is your downfall
You are not trapped in your body
You are trapped in your mind
This has given form as a thousand insects
Gnawing at your soul
You are screaming on the inside
But the world hears nothing at all... Except
Silence.
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Comments: 9
superclone In reply to StevenVnDoom [2009-01-17 07:04:21 +0000 UTC]
aww
but still not sure lol
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Fantasyfairy1 [2009-01-15 18:22:01 +0000 UTC]
I agree with Nytram, this does have a nice flow to it. I like the message here too. Silence can be so deafening. Good writing, I look forward to reading more from you again. XX
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superclone In reply to Fantasyfairy1 [2009-01-16 05:59:56 +0000 UTC]
*sigh* i just cant bring myself to actually like this.. i only uploaded it to see what other ppl thought.. i dont know
thanks anyway xx
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Nytram12 [2009-01-15 07:09:14 +0000 UTC]
come on that is great, it flows really nicely its good to finally read something new from u
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superclone In reply to Nytram12 [2009-01-15 09:21:01 +0000 UTC]
flow? haha its like one of those bumpy roads that SUCK
maybe il write other stuff though dont get ur hopes up
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Nytram12 In reply to superclone [2009-01-15 16:49:18 +0000 UTC]
awwh, i like reading your stuff....
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superclone In reply to Nytram12 [2009-01-16 06:00:53 +0000 UTC]
my other stuff was ok.. this is probably the worst though i duno it depends on opinion
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