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Published: 2008-04-03 12:43:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 417; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 6
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Description Alive! Alive! All soldiers deny
Bullet holes, blood spill, Dont Cry! Dont Cry!
The gas, overtaking, my lungs, my eyes
As I watch the bombs drop, the fires will fly
In Bits? Dear comrades, my friends and allies?
They all die in vain, no matter how hard they try
In the midst of it all though, there is a sign
Death!
            Death!
                         DEATH!
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superclone - GRIEF
Comments: 26

StevenVnDoom [2008-04-04 09:24:45 +0000 UTC]

In war, no one really wins. There is only death for all. Great job!

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superclone In reply to StevenVnDoom [2008-04-05 10:48:54 +0000 UTC]

thank uu im glad u saw the point i thought i may not have been getting it across

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StevenVnDoom In reply to superclone [2008-04-05 12:40:00 +0000 UTC]

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Nytram12 [2008-04-03 17:56:27 +0000 UTC]

wow thats kinda weird but v effective

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superclone In reply to Nytram12 [2008-04-05 10:32:01 +0000 UTC]

lol it was wierd at the time i was writing it.. i was thinking of some psychotic soldier who has gone in way to deep so there wasnt any hope of escaping..alive that is..

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Nytram12 In reply to superclone [2008-04-06 14:43:47 +0000 UTC]

interesting

btw there will be another story up here soon from another mock exam we did recently
thought u mite b interested

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superclone In reply to Nytram12 [2008-04-13 04:42:22 +0000 UTC]

awesome cnt wait

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Nytram12 In reply to superclone [2008-04-13 13:50:44 +0000 UTC]

lol, unfortunately u will have to

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superclone In reply to Nytram12 [2008-04-13 14:20:16 +0000 UTC]

well il live hehe

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Nytram12 In reply to superclone [2008-04-13 15:49:21 +0000 UTC]

but i wont. ARRRGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHH

*falls down dead*

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superclone In reply to Nytram12 [2008-04-15 08:47:58 +0000 UTC]

hmm talk about screaming ur life out.. HAH

yeh not that funny..

ok ok u can wake up now

lol ok thats enough

hello?..

*falls down dead*

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Nytram12 In reply to superclone [2008-04-15 10:40:16 +0000 UTC]

i like that - did u mean it as 'scream ur heart out' from Rooftops by Lost prophets

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superclone In reply to Nytram12 [2008-04-16 12:54:05 +0000 UTC]

haha no actually i was going to say screaming ur lungs out but then i couldnt find a way to relate that to ur death since its quite impossible to scream out ur internal organs.. haha atleast in the real world that is

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Nytram12 In reply to superclone [2008-04-16 15:57:53 +0000 UTC]

yeah in the real world that is impossible

tho they do say that nothing is impossible

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superclone In reply to Nytram12 [2008-04-17 08:25:30 +0000 UTC]

well then maybe we should try it hehe

er.. u go first

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Nytram12 In reply to superclone [2008-04-17 09:27:49 +0000 UTC]

tbch i dont really want to try

by all means if u want to i wont stop u
tho it may make it tricky to talkto u online

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superclone In reply to Nytram12 [2008-04-17 14:34:11 +0000 UTC]

LMAO no go ahead i insist il even do teh honour of making sure all ur valuable stuff is safe only doing the right thing for a friend..

lol *rolls eyes*

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Nytram12 In reply to superclone [2008-04-17 20:04:37 +0000 UTC]

wtf u on about
i haven't even written a Will yet!!!!

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superclone In reply to Nytram12 [2008-04-19 02:53:37 +0000 UTC]

lmaoo no need we already no all ur expensive stuff will be handed to me hehehhehehe

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Nytram12 In reply to superclone [2008-04-19 10:13:51 +0000 UTC]

oh yeah i had forgotten about that
damn

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superclone In reply to Nytram12 [2008-04-24 13:22:47 +0000 UTC]

yess ! me and my power of pursuasion woot !

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Nytram12 In reply to superclone [2008-04-25 20:51:33 +0000 UTC]

u have me outsmarted there

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superclone In reply to Nytram12 [2008-05-12 11:59:01 +0000 UTC]

THAT would be a first

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Nytram12 In reply to superclone [2008-05-12 19:56:59 +0000 UTC]

no that IS a first lol

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superclone In reply to Nytram12 [2008-05-15 07:44:48 +0000 UTC]

well arnt WE cool

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Nytram12 In reply to superclone [2008-05-15 18:34:10 +0000 UTC]

nt that phrase again!!!!!!

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