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Mm, posting weekly pages for scenes like this sucks I'm sorry, I kind of had a more book/manga pace in mind rather than webcomicy @_@

edit: thanks to for the color change suggestion !
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Lynchly [2012-06-04 20:53:53 +0000 UTC]

The Fwooshing on this page is awesome. XD It's very glowy! I don't think you should use stuff like "@*$*$%!" for serious scenes though. It seems a little comical.

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suzuran In reply to Lynchly [2012-06-04 21:14:41 +0000 UTC]

oh.. thank you! you're absolutely right. I never thought about it that way haha. XD I just don't usually curse in real life or online so I felt a little uncomfortable writing out the swear word. ^^ maybe i'll just have her say: "dammit!" thanks again XD

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Lynchly In reply to suzuran [2012-06-04 21:32:34 +0000 UTC]

No problem! I understand entirely. I try to avoid swearing as well, so I see the dilemma. I hear a good way is to make up fictional ones, though I've never tried that.

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yukidragon [2009-11-27 02:10:59 +0000 UTC]

Great glowy effects.

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JayWeaver [2009-10-30 03:56:32 +0000 UTC]

Color change had absolutely no transition whatsoever...

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suzuran In reply to JayWeaver [2009-10-30 04:10:15 +0000 UTC]

oh.. hm.. how would you do it then? I'm kinna stumped... I thought the large amount of fire was enough XD But I took my friend's advice since she's a pro and her idea made sense to me ^^

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JayWeaver In reply to suzuran [2009-10-31 00:22:12 +0000 UTC]

I don't really know, was just pointing it out.

You're the photoshop/whatever expert with the amazin' tutorials

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suzuran In reply to JayWeaver [2009-10-31 03:03:50 +0000 UTC]

XD I'm not really an expert expert. It's strange though, it works for some people, I guess it just doesn't work for others... Then again, people say that about my style too, about how they don't like how I draw anime, but others do... haha, where can I draw the line? XD I dunno... I guess what I have now is okay... I can't please everyone XD

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wishestobebetter [2009-10-13 12:26:30 +0000 UTC]

i wait for your newest bit every week, personally i love this one cause just how brilliant it makes him look reminds me of Sephiroth in Crisis Core when he walks away into the flames

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kirbycide [2009-10-13 03:10:19 +0000 UTC]

Amazing lighting!!!

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FreeTheCows [2009-10-10 07:45:09 +0000 UTC]

Wow I'm really enjoying this Manga!!!

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LaphromiPilotX [2009-10-10 02:18:25 +0000 UTC]

Oooo wow thats is really amazing, awesome use of yellow and orange.

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Zexion-Tamer [2009-10-09 19:48:44 +0000 UTC]

Whoa! Over powered much? That's guy's sword is EPIC! I also love the expressions! This is a great comic!

(hey look! Another color other then blue!)

This is really good! Keep up the good work!

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ichigomomo [2009-10-09 19:09:51 +0000 UTC]

great colors

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TORApanthera [2009-10-09 17:07:36 +0000 UTC]

...woosh...

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vittara [2009-10-09 14:50:05 +0000 UTC]

great colours and composition of the movements! fantastic job!

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emmav [2009-10-09 12:53:45 +0000 UTC]

oooh, lovely lighting!

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SueaNoi [2009-10-09 10:36:24 +0000 UTC]

oh my goodness, this page rocks!

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Twero [2009-10-09 09:40:44 +0000 UTC]

What are you saying?
I LOVE the fire effects! *-*
No words, that means that page don't need translation! \o/

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suzuran In reply to Twero [2009-10-09 11:45:42 +0000 UTC]

yay! Cool Hehe, glad I made it easy for you

Lemme update the art for a little bit first! ^^

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Twero In reply to suzuran [2009-10-09 20:49:44 +0000 UTC]

As you wish! ^^
I just update my blgo in Sundays, so take your time! o/

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rialynkv [2009-10-09 07:40:45 +0000 UTC]

OMG, so cool! XD

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MrFenix [2009-10-09 06:28:47 +0000 UTC]

FFFFFFWWWWWOOOOSSSSHHHH!!! +FAV!

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tealgeezus [2009-10-09 03:25:28 +0000 UTC]

omg. So cool~! FIIIIIIIIRE <3

THIS COMIC NEEDS MOAR SPIDERMAN

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suzuran In reply to tealgeezus [2009-10-09 11:44:57 +0000 UTC]

Nooooooooooooooooooooo ;_;

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tealgeezus In reply to suzuran [2009-10-10 14:07:51 +0000 UTC]

Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees

Ok, we'll settle on Wolverine than?

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suzuran In reply to tealgeezus [2009-10-10 15:29:35 +0000 UTC]

.... noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo T___T

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tealgeezus In reply to suzuran [2009-10-10 15:33:54 +0000 UTC]

SUBMIT TO IT. YOU MUST

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Kiwi-Punch [2009-10-09 02:04:13 +0000 UTC]

Please try to hurry on these! I know you probably don't have time, but please don't keep your fans waiting! BTW, This is just plain epically awesome!!!

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Ninja-Log [2009-10-09 01:47:36 +0000 UTC]

"Fwoosh" has got to be the best onomatopoeia in comics right now. It's defiantly my favorite.

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mklouie [2009-10-09 01:42:26 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully done! Bravo!

The only complaint I have is that I must wait another week to know what happened! AAARGH!

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Navedium [2009-10-09 01:39:37 +0000 UTC]

Keep up your awesooomme work

Nice colors in this one, haha

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suzuran In reply to Navedium [2009-10-09 11:44:40 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thanks!!

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SillySock [2009-10-09 01:30:29 +0000 UTC]

It's worth the wait

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CeeCeeLuvins [2009-10-09 01:02:21 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry about it! It's a lot of work doing pencils inks and colors! You're doing awesome. And it'll add up in no time.

One small suggestion on the 1st panel. I love the color of this page but if you make the background on the 1st panel a blue like it was in the previous page, it'll make for a nice color transition panel.

You can do the same for the 2nd one, making the background cool like in the previous pages and then the foreground orange to show that he's powering up for the 3rd panel.

Nice job though!!

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suzuran In reply to CeeCeeLuvins [2009-10-09 11:43:37 +0000 UTC]

ah! Hi!! Are you feeling betterrr?

And oh.. thanks for the suggestion! That totally slipped my mind... @_@ I got totally thrown off by the fire colors >_< *goes to fix!*

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DJwind [2009-10-09 01:01:52 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME -huggle-

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Advent-Axl [2009-10-09 00:40:26 +0000 UTC]

*nods* We understand

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gothpuppet12 [2009-10-09 00:33:25 +0000 UTC]

cool. Very bright and lots of action!

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NurBoyXVI [2009-10-09 00:24:47 +0000 UTC]

Manga is fine by me. :3

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LuneirXRain [2009-10-09 00:13:59 +0000 UTC]

Wow how amazing ;D keep up the amazing artwork. lol always looking forward to your next page in manga. Can't wait to see next one ^^

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wolf3fenrir [2009-10-09 00:12:32 +0000 UTC]

very nice job

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Eehcoli91 [2009-10-09 00:10:04 +0000 UTC]

I like that word. "FWOOSH"... The implications of the word are mind boggling. @.@ Something EPIC is afoot. Nicely done. =]

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suzuran In reply to Eehcoli91 [2009-10-09 11:44:20 +0000 UTC]

yay! Thanks

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aca985 [2009-10-09 00:09:40 +0000 UTC]

Nice one this week good effects

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suzuran In reply to aca985 [2009-10-09 11:44:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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