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Published: 2011-07-31 17:55:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 374; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 6
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HIII IM BAAAAAAAAAAACKLol I was back yesterday BUT I BETTER SHOW YOU I DID SOMETHING
I wanted to do something painty on Sai and this came into my mind so yeah lol
SEMI REALISTIC FAIL howcanyouevendothawithroselol
BUT I LOVE HOW IT TURNED OUT im gonna turn caps off now xD
So yeah, the reason its eight is because 8 is my lucky number, I was born on the 8th and 8 seems to follow me o3o
So yeah, enjoy!
Crits requested, I need dem.
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Comments: 22
onyxfursonaplz [2011-12-09 20:47:17 +0000 UTC]
YOUR ARTS IMPROVED SO MUCH ;W; AMazing!
Do you take requests by any chance, pal? c:
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swiftfiree In reply to onyxfursonaplz [2011-12-09 20:52:47 +0000 UTC]
Gosh thanksss! <3
Yess, but only for friends~ c:
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onyxfursonaplz In reply to swiftfiree [2011-12-09 20:53:25 +0000 UTC]
You're most welcome!
Am I one of your friends Rose?
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swiftfiree In reply to onyxfursonaplz [2011-12-09 20:55:31 +0000 UTC]
Lol check my friends list on my pageee
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onyxfursonaplz In reply to swiftfiree [2011-12-09 20:56:52 +0000 UTC]
I'm there! :'D *hugs*
DOes that mean I can has a requestie?
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swiftfiree In reply to onyxfursonaplz [2011-12-09 21:04:20 +0000 UTC]
Yess you areee!
YESSSSSSS~!
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onyxfursonaplz In reply to swiftfiree [2011-12-10 14:49:07 +0000 UTC]
Awesomeness! Thankies very much!
Pwease could I have a pickie of Bolt and Onyx, as Bonyx? New Onyx reference here... [link]
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swiftfiree In reply to onyxfursonaplz [2011-12-10 17:14:02 +0000 UTC]
No problem! <3
Hee I was already doing a Bonyx one xD What a stroke of luck! <3
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onyxfursonaplz In reply to swiftfiree [2011-12-10 18:01:26 +0000 UTC]
Bawweh! *hug* Indeed, a very good stroke of luck C: Thankies lots and lots! *huggle*
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swiftfiree In reply to onyxfursonaplz [2011-12-11 17:07:17 +0000 UTC]
Hee I finished it!!
No problem <3
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swiftfiree In reply to AlepouOfLight [2011-08-01 17:23:51 +0000 UTC]
Ohmigosh thank you Alepou! <333
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foxstory [2011-08-01 05:55:49 +0000 UTC]
Snowy, this is like one of your best pieces yet! I can see the improvement clearly. There's a lot of maturity in how the lineart was done, and the coloring and shading was very well carried out. The background was also a cool idea. I like what you did with giving the expression personality.
Have you been able to read the story yet? I can't wait to hear what you thought of it!
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swiftfiree In reply to foxstory [2011-08-01 17:25:09 +0000 UTC]
Seriously? Wow, I must've improved since I've been told twice lol xD
Thank you!
Lol I just slapped the background on and added a texture which I cant remember where I got it from lol xD
Thanks!
Yup! and its brilliant so far! I read some more of it today c:
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foxstory In reply to swiftfiree [2011-08-02 03:45:36 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful! I just got a critique email from another reader today, and it looks like my efforts to find interested readers in the target audience in dA are going well.
Personally I don't think the beginning has enough immediate action to draw the reader in. But then again, it's my third completely independent attempt at writing the start of the story. So I want to finish the first draft before I change the beginning again. Maybe it still works, I don't know. I'd love to hear from you when you feel you've read to a good point, which really doesn't have to be the end of Chapter 13, which is very far away!
Thank you.
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swiftfiree In reply to foxstory [2011-08-05 17:48:20 +0000 UTC]
Youll be getting more by the day Douglas!
I like the sound of it, I was on the bit where theres the gun shots then my comp froze lol xD it couldnt withstand the awesomeness of your story (or just the amount of stuff I had up xD)
No problem c:
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foxstory In reply to swiftfiree [2011-08-11 02:13:19 +0000 UTC]
I might replace that scene with a preface, I mean, the reader SHOULD meet the main characters fairly soon in the novel in order to care about them the most.
I'd love to hear from you via email when you finish!
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swiftfiree In reply to Echoconut [2011-07-31 18:34:04 +0000 UTC]
OMG THANK YOUUU
Orly?
Gosh I didnt think Ive improved lol xD
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