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Published: 2008-04-25 07:03:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 214; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 2
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Description A servant of Fire,
A servant of Death,
The silent Vampire,
One last pained breath.

The pain is entire,
The pain is intense,
Caught to the pyre,
Forever to rest.
The sweet, cunning liar,
The false man at prayer,
His edicts are dire,
A Prophetic heir.
Alone to inspire,
Alone to upset,
But working desire,
To ensnare the net.
Lost songs on a lyre,
Lost pages beneath,
Ask Hell to inquire,
And fall to the deep.
A forgotten ire,
The remembered eclipse.
And the devil shall sire,
The Apocalypse
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Comments: 11

doitl8er [2008-04-26 04:28:21 +0000 UTC]

I love how you were able to make it rhyme and flow fluently! it's just... I can't describe it. It's just really good!

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swiftfox13 In reply to doitl8er [2008-04-26 22:16:00 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^.^

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Arianna--42 [2008-04-25 22:55:23 +0000 UTC]

dude! that's freaking AWESOME!!!!!!! seriously! you're brilliant! i LOVE it!

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swiftfox13 In reply to Arianna--42 [2008-04-26 00:34:41 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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DarkestDesires17 [2008-04-25 22:33:53 +0000 UTC]

omg coolio!

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swiftfox13 In reply to DarkestDesires17 [2008-04-26 00:34:30 +0000 UTC]

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LordOfTheConspicuous [2008-04-25 17:20:49 +0000 UTC]

w00t! dude, I could friggin read that over and over all day and be amused...

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swiftfox13 In reply to LordOfTheConspicuous [2008-04-26 00:34:19 +0000 UTC]

awesomeness

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StainedUnique [2008-04-25 12:19:47 +0000 UTC]

thats great mandy

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swiftfox13 In reply to StainedUnique [2008-04-26 00:34:07 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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StainedUnique In reply to swiftfox13 [2008-04-26 16:04:53 +0000 UTC]

np

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