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Published: 2010-07-28 23:36:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 1196; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 0
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My dear BrielleOnly whispers can tell
of the sweet dreams that we knew so well
I'll see you around
Our dear ocean town
The frozen days we set ablaze
Send me drifting away
Like a butterfly, you floated by
And now you're alone, I wish I knew when
I'll be back again
So until then I wish you well
My dear Brielle
Just a doodle I did while watching SpongeBob today
I adore the new Sky Sailing album, it's so peaceful. My favorite songs are Brielle, Steady as she Goes, Sailboats, and Alaska. Although they're all excellent. This is my version of the girl in Brielle. I pictured a redhead for some reason P: scanned and saturated with some blue, to add something to the picture. Nothing more really to say...I know the anatomy is a bit wonky, and I'm requesting crits anyways, but bear in mind this was a thirty minute sketch.
Brielle/ lyrics (c) Adam Young/Owl City/ Sky Sailing
Art (c) me
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Comments: 11
sky sailing ISSSSSS amazing nice drawing! i like her face
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Hee thanks 
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I like it, it's very detailed and thoughtful. Brielle's expression hopeful expression is captured well. I would critique it, but I'm not much of an artist. Good job though!
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Well, I'll give you a mini-critique since I'm no Premium member.
SO, the facial anatomy I LOVE. She looks cute and real. The one thing I think is a bit wonky are the hands. I'm personally not sure what she's doing with her hands since it idn't a very natural position for them to be in. Hr hands would be fine in the position their in if the fingers weren't interlocked, ya know just folded over each other. The other thing is that I didn't understand what she as doing with her hands because I couldn't see the bar she's leaning on. You should darken that, just to suggest that it's there more. Also because she's not leaning (like her body), her left arm shouldn't be touching the bar. That makes it look too long.
Otherwise a very beautiful drawing. I very much love this song, too, and I believe you depicted Brielle wonderfully.
Keep up the good work
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Thanks so much, and thanks for the critique!
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You're very welcome
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